Sword God Jiuzu

So disappointed. The setting is good, the writing is good, and the plot is okay, but the character development is too poor. One moment, the protagonist is said to be cautious, and the next moment, the protagonist is written like a madman who has a hand in everything. Let's just talk about the escort agency at the beginning. Why do you have so many things to do with a small job? You go to Mr. Yan for help. Why should they help you? We're talking about that magical secret book. Why do you, a little third-rate master, get involved? Don't you think you can die quickly enough? I really don't understand what the protagonist does. Why bother? You have mastered a reliable improvement method. Wouldn't it be better to find a place to spend a year or two to improve your internal strength to a first-class or innate level and then go out and find the technique? In fact, it is not impossible to give the protagonist this opportunity. The problem is that the author made me feel that he deliberately described the protagonist as wise. This is not the level of intelligence that a normal person should have. It is better to believe that he can achieve enlightenment than to believe that a pig can become a god, and that a mentally retarded person like the protagonist can rise. I can only lament for the other people in the book: "The sky is unfair!"

The protagonist Goldfinger is pretty awesome, why does he have to seek death? If you can't stand it anymore, just drink quietly for a few years, buy cheat books, and brush up the copies in the sword. Wouldn't it be nice to shock the world at once? Bad review

If Duan Yu had such ability, why would he use the Six Meridians Divine Sword to force Chujiu 😏

Just be invincible. Damn it, I don't want to see it anymore.

There are some contradictions in the previous upgrade, and it is not clear why I did not leave the city in the first place. Moreover, once I have money, I upgrade when I drink, and I spend time wandering around.

I wanted to read a martial arts novel, but you gave me a detective novel? ? ? ? ?

The protagonist is an ordinary person, and he is also very kind, unlike most of the protagonists of Long Aotian. I think these trolls just read too much and feel that it is not enjoyable enough. There are too many exciting articles. I like it after reading dozens of chapters. I want to mention two points: many people are very scheming. The protagonist is also a bit cautious but not full of calculations. For example, the two head catchers are both human beings, but why do they start to have a heart-to-heart with the protagonist after drinking a few times? Let me ask you trolls, do you like to make friends with people who are full of calculations? Or is he a protagonist, a bit funny, able to make jokes, and make friends with sincere people? The key author's writing is also very detailed. At the beginning, the mistress was going to make friends with a stranger. I thought it was the same as getting to know the protagonist. In fact, he was going to test the other person's injuries. He couldn't feel it at all when writing. When it was revealed later, it was very exciting. Not only cool articles are good, but online articles are not only cool articles. I saw that the book reviews of those trolls were all full of trolls, which is outrageous... I hope newcomers will have the patience to read on.

Why is Chapter 124 missing?

Author: This is a martial arts novel, not a biography. It feels like there is no fighting at all, just the protagonist playing around

Yes, the psychological activity is very reasonable. The psychological process of a normal time traveler does not involve killing or killing with a strong sense of anger. There are a lot of mindless trolls, just ignore them.

The pace is a bit slow and a bit bland.

Did the author delete all the book reviews? The data is too miserable.

It's pretty but too little. . . .

I was waiting to see him roam the world, but I didn't expect to become a head catcher. Alas╯╰

It's quite interesting to write, but basically women's personalities are all carved out of the same mold.

There are so many people criticizing even though there are no book reviews:

Update 😭

I have read it and collected it. I hope to return to visit the new book "Xuan Yin Zhuan" and jointly create a new world of martial arts.

The author's writing style is quite good, but the unimportant characters are too detailed. The character of the protagonist is also useless. He has no independent opinion. I have no idea what the protagonist is doing after writing the whole book.

Uh 😓 I'm drunk, all kinds of trolls, how is Linghu Chong like? No one is going to criticize Jin Yong. How is the character of Sun Wukong in Journey to the West? No one is going to complain. The protagonist is holding on to the helplessness. If you drink the thief's drink, you will become a thief, right? After eating the lunch box from Lao Wang next door, do you plan to recognize your father?🤭 To deal with evil, no method is too much, and the kindness of women is ridiculous!