The Black Iron Crown

Can you let Mekasa go? It makes me embarrassed every time I see how the protagonist thinks about her. There is no such thing as love at first sight in the Middle Ages. It is all for profit~~ How can you, a lord, have the love of a son and daughter? What we like to watch is riding and slashing, not romance dramas at 8 o'clock in the evening. If you can't write emotional drama well, just don't write it, okay?

How is this foreign history? 😱Another world

I persisted for a long time, but in Chapter 405, I really couldn't hold on any longer. I couldn't handle the instant poisonous death. A woman killed so many people, and I almost died. In the end, I actually married her. I had vowed revenge, revenge, revenge!!! Real name licking the woman.

Let's update the new book😆😆😆

I felt something was wrong when I saw Mekasa appear. Why did I have to insert such a character? The male protagonist abandoned the book after breaking up with Mekasa. In one sentence, a bloody plot of love, resentment, and hatred is forcibly staged. Wouldn't it be nice to put down the rebellion directly? Why do we have to arrange for the protagonist to have a relationship with the enemy's daughter?

The author is actually still a senior in high school. If we go forward, wouldn't it be that the author started writing books in the third year of junior high school? Np

In Chapter 43, "Rewards for Merits" cannot stand the withdrawal. The combined population of the two territories is three to four thousand. You have to seal the actual territory to those who are not loyal and contribute insufficiently. Instead of concentrating the population for production, you might as well just rely on the soldiers provided by the system to conquer the entire world. The first dozens of chapters are all about what the system wants the protagonist to do. The system is just an auxiliary. If everything depends on the system, what is the use of the protagonist? It's even more ridiculous to say that you want to be a benevolent king, but you are controlled by the moral standards of people from another world. Then when you ordered the burning, killing and looting of Jin Gong Castle, why didn't you consider the image of a benevolent king? Even if you are a tyrant, it is better than being a puppet whose thoughts are controlled by others... To sum up, actions rely on the system, and thoughts rely on others!

Emmm, the protagonist has a bad character, he is not a hero, he is greedy, lustful, indecisive, and cannot achieve great things. The real protagonist is the system, so just read it as a novice.

In the early stage, I saw a beautiful woman who couldn't walk. In the later stage, except for the protagonist and a few important supporting characters, there was no one with a brain in the entire empire.

At first, the system was just a auxiliary tool, which was fine, but then it gradually began to fall apart. There was no logic in either the characters or the plot. You must know that history always has its own laws of development. When Golden Finger has set aside the laws of development and fights YY purely for the development of the plot, the novel has collapsed from the root. It is like playing a cheat machine when playing with a horse. It is fun for five seconds, but it is tasteless. In terms of the quality of this novel, there is no conflicting plot, no distinctive characters, and no exaggeration of the magnificent society. Reflecting on the author's words from this novel, he should be young, enthusiastic, but not mature enough in thinking, likes to play games, not patient enough, likes fantasy, has a certain education, and has the ability to read and study independently but very little. Generally speaking, he may be a high school or college student.