Earth's Star Chat Group

Here's a suggestion: the protagonist could share music from his world in the group and send it to Earth's stars. This would be beneficial in terms of gaining their favor and acquiring more Earth music.

He started by vilifying his wife and daughter, then began a prelude to a whitewashing attempt. These authors these days are truly courting death! Do you think you have some kind of magic touch? Just trying to grab attention.

So far, it's written quite well. I'll maintain this level of writing, and it would be even better if it improved. 🙂

"Furthermore, drug use did not harm other people, only..." They've only set a bad example; compared to those who commit murder and arson, they're nothing. It makes it easier for people to rediscover and accept. (From Chapter 178, which I can't find now.) Sending songs is acceptable; after all, the resources of the entire planet are limited.

I've been following this book, but I'm really disappointed with this part. Drug addiction is a lifelong stain, especially the author's claim that drug use doesn't harm others and his idea of ​​a prodigal son turning over a new leaf. I simply can't agree with that. Enough said, consider all my previous votes wasted. This is my last report vote.

I hope you can revise the scene in Chapter 109 where the protagonist writes ten songs for Rolling Stones. It's too toxic. Since you're writing entertainment fiction, you should understand what ten classic songs a year means. And the protagonist can't possibly write only for Rolling Stones and not for his other friends, which means at least one classic song every month. That's ridiculous.

How to describe this book? It's quite immature, the kind of book readers like, but the author has clearly portrayed the protagonist as somewhat despicable. His wife, who abandoned him when he was down on his luck, is slowly clearing her name. The snobbish sister-in-law is disgusting. She acts one way when the protagonist is popular, but ignores him when he's sidelined.

Haha, a guaranteed ten high-quality songs a year? Haha, if your confidante stops singing, how many years can you keep giving them away? I really can't read this chapter anymore, bye!

There are three points that discourage people from using drugs. The first one was writing a song for my sister-in-law, with whom I didn't have a very good relationship. Secondly, for no apparent reason, a company was given ten classic songs every year. Third, whitewashing drug-using celebrities.

Dear author, you have one day to revise the drug use plot. If it's not revised by tomorrow, I'll report you by phone.