Traveling Across the Universe

In fact, writing a novel well does not depend on the number of protagonists or how powerful they are, but on the rationality and characterization of the characters. It doesn't matter even if you go to the next world as a three-ringed soul master, as long as we see the protagonist growing up hard, you can come back later and continue writing Douluo, but you do these bells and whistles? Looks cool? But in fact, there are a lot of poisonous points, and they are also unreasonable. I don't see how it's fun? You have no fighting experience at all and you fight against the Snow Emperor? Who gave you confidence? At first, I thought I wanted to use Brother Tianmeng's leather sheath to become the second martial spirit. You are so NB and have never experienced any battles and directly killed the Snow Emperor who has been honed for more than 700,000 years of life and death? Moreover, the Snow Emperor's soul ring is orange-gold only because she turned into Huo Yuhao's soul. Ordinary ferocious beasts are red. This will only make people look poisonous rather than happy. I really got it. Other authors of all ages tried their best to make their writing reasonable. But you, like those sz authors in Philou, have not made progress but have regressed.

I beg the author not to introduce a female protagonist. When there is one, there are two, and when there are two, there are three, and then they collapse in minutes. It's not good to write even one, there will always be people who don't like it. There is no choice but to accept it. There are always people who are fighting for other characters. Cultivation as an immortal is not about opening a harem. Don't collapse. Begging to be alone until the end

A message to the author: I learned about this book through a certain eunuch novel (you know the author well). I haven't read this book yet, and I plan to keep it for now. First of all, there must be an outline, the more detailed the better, otherwise you will write whatever you want, the content will not be consistent, readers will be tired from reading, and the author will easily become stuck; Second, there must be a process from low to high, so that readers can feel that the protagonist gradually becomes stronger, and do not have a low martial arts level and a world-destroying level (it is best not to mix martial arts and fantasy). In this way, for the sake of balance, the combat power of this world will be raised and the other will be devalued. In the end, both chapters were ruined; Third, the most important thing about fan fiction is to try to avoid cheating, that is, the character of the character in the original work cannot be messed up. Think about whether what he says and does is in line with the character of the original work, don't be too casual, and keep the character's IQ; Fourth, don't travel too many worlds, this is the most important, it is easy to write too much, and it is not interesting to write too little. Also, when writing a world, you don't need to write it completely, just the useful ones derived from the foreshadowing (write the useful ones in detail, and just rush over the useless ones), so that those who have not understood the original work will not have too many obstacles in reading; Fifth, suspense and foreshadowing Sixth, the protagonist's three views will not dissuade readers. Sixth, the names of the strengths and weaknesses of each world are different. It is best to have a unified name (the system text is either divided by the main world, or 1-100 levels), such as who is in what realm and how many levels it corresponds to. Readers can intuitively know who is stronger and who is weaker, and whether the protagonist will defeat the strong or easily kill. I have never written a book, so I can only express my opinion based on my experience in reading books. I hope it will be useful. Come on, author!

Volume 2, Chapter 3, Pig's Feet practices the New World Kung Fu, causing its original strength to be sealed and its strength greatly damaged. This forced reduction of strength is also poisonous

I hope Tian Xing Jiu Ge will be longer

Brother, didn't you say there are four updates every day from Monday to Friday?

You liar! It was agreed that there would be only one update after four updates.

I'll go and you'll put it on the shelves in Chapter 35, haha

? ? ? What the hell is Douluo? . . It always feels like it's all a routine from long ago. It's okay to watch without thinking. First, since the principal values ​​​​the protagonist so much, why didn't he explain clearly to the protagonist what he needed to say? Second, since the protagonist's teacher thinks that the protagonist's background is unusual, why doesn't he personally lead the protagonist to hunt for soul rings? Third, is it really okay for the teacher named Wang Si to abandon the protagonist so simply, with so many people watching? Fourth, the protagonist is so confident that he chose a thousand-year-old soul ring as his first soul ring? You risk your life so easily. If you were not the protagonist, you would have died ten thousand times. Fifth, it's too false that the heroine named Bai can't find anyone to form a team. Everyone is only about 10 years old. You are beautiful, and there are many ignorant little boys who want to form a team. How can a child care about so many gains and losses? Even if you are an adult, there will be no shortage of people to form a team.

Author, tell us the truth. Did you sign the contract so early because of a deal with an unknown person?🤫

The peak development of horse energy, the fighting spirit turns into a horse, the horse master, the horse master, the horse master... The horse emperor. Those who are on horseback in front, may they dare to dismount and fight with the old man Hun Tiandi?

"Ancient tribe, the next time I set foot on Dou Qi Continent, I will definitely avenge the shame of the past. - Lin Tian" As a result, I haven't been able to avenge myself until now. The author, please help Lin Tian avenge his shame 🥺🥺

Author, if you were in Eunuch, I would never read your book again, although I have only read one of your books

Takong is the author of Douzong. Douhuang also needs fighting energy to turn into wings

By the way, the author can go to my Heavenly Tribulation girlfriends who are all cultivators.

You can basically read most novels if you can bear it.

Isn't it? Has it been available since Chapter 35?

This is quite a setback. In addition, the world level set by Douluo Continent is not low, at least it cannot be compared to Ancient Sword and Legend.

Eunuch

I opened a new book, and it turned out that the one was eunuch again. The author is a real eunuch.

So you are a eunuch again?