The Super God of the Second Generation

The concept is good and very thoughtful. The various settings are also quite complete, and the author's writing style is adequate for writing online articles, which at least makes it smooth to read. So when you have written almost 400,000 words and haven't signed a contract yet, you should reflect on it, instead of continuing to hold back your energy and write. The contracted editor only reads the beginning. You should revise your beginning carefully. First of all, your opening points are too scattered, cutting to the player and then to the protagonist. At the beginning, you should focus all your writing on the protagonist and make it clear what happened to the protagonist. What is special about the protagonist and what is worth looking forward to are all written down in three chapters. There is no need for a prologue. The beginning is to go straight to the theme and narrate everything through the perspective of the protagonist. Don't make the data too fancy, otherwise it will waste space. The beginning is really important, think about it carefully. Finally, "The Wonderful World of Fantasy" welcomes mutual comments ಠಠ

Why do I feel like my character will be hated for a long time...

The witticism at the end of each chapter is quite cute. I hope I always have it. What a great book!

This book has clear logic and a strong sense of immersion, which is no worse than many contracted writers!

Happy May Day! This book is so good, why can't it be signed? Do the editors only read the beginning?

I didn't expect that I could write a book of 400,000 words, haha, it's so exciting (๑>؂<๑)! Writing a book for the first time, a lot of it was a slow process of exploration. To be honest, this book has never had an outline. I just wrote it as I thought along the way. I also care about the characters in the book very much. Even if it is a small thief, as long as he appears a few times, I will not be able to bear to write him down and be cruel. It's like a duo of cows and horses, robbers, and thieves. They are afraid that they will make book friends unhappy. Even the protagonist's first enemy, Qiu Hai, is still alive and well, and is evolving into Ningdan. But there will be no good plot without conflict. The starting point of the protagonist's realm is too low, and the enemies that appear in the early stage are all high-level people, so it is a bit difficult to deal with it. Fortunately, we have arrived at Yanjing City, the martial arts figures who should appear have appeared one after another, the protagonist's career has also started, and the players are in place... Well, it's time to make up the outline! Less than ten readers vote every day. I have carefully looked at which readers voted and found that they are basically hardcore old readers of Qidian. I am very relieved. The only thing I don't understand is that as senior members, the 'Chang Gong Yun' brothers only have one vote per day. I would like to ask if there is a situation where 'only one vote can be cast at most' in Gaoyou. I really don't understand this. Finally, the progress of this book is extremely slow. The timeline is written in hours. There are 149 chapters. Will the game be launched in fifteen days? I don't have to do the math, it should be about the same. Despite such a slow progress, there are still readers reading it. I would like to ask, what are they looking forward to? If you have any valuable suggestions, please give me your advice. I like to accept advice from others. Don't you see, 'Sister Lan' is going to hunt down people all over the server. Don't you see, brother 'Long Gongyun' is also going to become a disciple. Brother 'Bump' is also struggling to pursue the Momen. If you want to see more plots, mention them, maybe it will be included in the outline... After all, this book does not have an outline yet. Finally, thank you to the old and new readers for your support. Whoever said that an author who doesn't ask for votes really doesn't ask for votes. If there are more recommendation votes, the chance of being shown will be greater. Actually, I prefer to see more readers commenting in 'Book Reviews' and 'Chapter Reviews'. If the atmosphere is aroused, maybe I will pay more attention to writing books, and then reduce the time of spraying pesticides as appropriate... I talk too much... Please give me advice and guidance.

I feel like the writing is very good!

To be honest, when I saw the title, I really thought I was on the show, and then I went in to take a look. . . It's really me. Why do I feel like the characters in my novels are becoming more and more powerful 😂

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No, author, how could Lan Shu speak such rude words as Hu Hansan? Why did he become a tomboy?