My Destiny Cannot Be Violated

The writing style is smooth and flowing, and the concept is also very good.

, What you wrote at the beginning of the third chapter is really good. I came here to browse, and submitted it. I submitted it The title of my book is (The Technologist Who Cultivates Immortals) Ahem, well, I'm a little embarrassed to say that, but it's also an advertisement for you, so I'll give it a thumbs up! Or you can add more details Then the next step is the Wenjian. After reading your first three chapters, I helped you make a Wenjian. I am a literary appraiser. 1 The tension and rhythm of the article are relatively compact, which is an advantage. It brings a sense of freshness, has a relatively strong suspense, and immerses the readers well. There is a small problem. At the beginning, the name of this chapter is Mass Graves, which is a mass grave, and there is a little description of the mass grave. It is better to put this description at the beginning, because it can better bring into the atmosphere. 2 The characters are very vivid and flexible, but they feel that they lack a little inner monologue, but these are all minor problems. 3 The frontal and side descriptions are very good, and the details are good, but it always feels like there is a little less atmosphere, and there is no atmosphere that a mass grave should have. This is also a small problem, it's okay 4 The one thing worth complaining about is what she said, to borrow a moment, You didn't describe it clearly before, did she travel from modern times? Or whatever, it wasn't explained clearly, it was just described as being in an exiled space. If the description wasn't clear, how did she know the word "borrow a fire"? Whether he is an ancient person, reborn as an ancient person or a modern person is not clear enough. Overall, it's pretty good. If I say something wrong, don't worry about it. It's just a personal review. Finally, I wish you a successful new book. Come on!

Good! What an amazing Miss Ji San. Take good care of you!

Brush gently, my old body is soft and frail

Thank you very much for your support and encouragement. Due to some recent health problems, the updates are not very powerful. I apologize to all readers. I put a lot of effort into this book. It took half a year to prepare the outline alone, including tens of thousands of words of detailed branching plots. So please rest assured. I will make sure to update at least once a day at the moment. I will make up for it as soon as I am better. I will not put it on the shelves for the time being (you can watch it for free 😌). Thank you to my friends who have always supported and encouraged me. I look forward to my resurrection with full health 🥺

Regarding the controversy over the order of Chapters 1 and 2, thank you all for your support and suggestions. This is a matter of writing technique. Thank you all for continuing to pay attention to the wonderful plot. Thank you again for your support 🌹. Your investment, book entry, collection, and voting have all brought great encouragement to Ji San. Thank you 😊😊😊

Two votes have been cast 🤭🌹 Three I hope this book will be longer

Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

Congratulations on the new book, I wish you many collections and recommendations, and I look forward to a wonderful story, come on!

The sofa must be mine🤓🤓🤓🤓

Already invested, optimistic about you, come on!

He actually recommended me a book about female videos

I was deceived by the Silver Alliance and looked at something wrong. It seemed to be a female channel! ?

I've finished reading it, why haven't I invested yet 😭

This profile is 6666. After reading it, I thought it was a male video, 😄😄😄😄

Your first reader, loyal fan😏

As we all know, the owner of the grilled fish shop has a dark heart

Oh, the boss is back to fill the hole. . . . . You won't run away again, right?

I'll give you a vote. I often read Cang Yue's books before, and I'm fine with books written by female authors. The styles are different. Female authors are generally more delicate and cruel, and they will abuse them when they need to be abused...

Is there a male protagonist CP? 🙂

The plot of the novel is not advanced by a few simple written sentences. The author's writing of advancing the plot is very clever, and the plots of the novel are not too mixed together, and it is impossible to distinguish the priorities. The author here uses it very simply, clearly at a glance, and develops naturally.

Very good, I like it very much. It would be great if they could include me. I suggest setting up a supplementary building so that I can mix and match.

The author's writing skills are quite high

I found that the title of each chapter of the author has a meaningful meaning. It's so lofty.

It's refreshing, powerful, and satisfying to your appetite.

When will boys stand up?

You may consider writing male videos in the future 😄

Why put women's videos in men's videos?

I plan to watch it. . It's just that I'm afraid, I don't know how to be a eunuch, right? Recently, many authors, whether male or female, are eunuchs. So I'm afraid. . I don't know how to be a eunuch, so I plan to watch it. .

Something's not quite right, um, can a woman really write like this? Aren't women's videos mainly about falling in love?