Dou Po: Tiandao Merchant

Kneeling and licking the protagonist again, abandoning the article

I feel like pig's feet give blood bodhi to anyone they meet.

I'm going to write another Dou Po, this one is too holy. I don't want to give up on my dream, so I'm going to start updating on May 1st. I hope everyone can still support me.

Without technology, wouldn't there be a puppet? With tens of thousands of points, wouldn't it be possible to replace a puppet of a great fighting master? ?

Why are there so many typos and wrong sentence fragments?

What about the first and second chapters 11-12-13? The author should stop writing

This book is written too matter-of-factly, with little white text and insufficient plot. According to this development, the book basically has no achievements. The protagonist is too naive and is no different from the way it was written ten years ago. Everything goes smoothly and everyone will help with whatever they want. How can I put it, everyone in the article is a kid at heart. Meeting strangers is like a child making new friends. When the two female members of the Xiao family are described, giving and taking are too natural, as if you just give it to me if you want it. It's too much fun to give away 350,000 gold coins after crying. Readers can accept kindness, but they can't be soft-hearted just pretending to be pitiful because readers know that they can't save everyone. Although the original characters have been changed, which is a common problem among all fans, I still have to mention it. At best, this book is just a piece of white paper. It's white to the bottom like Xiaobai. The writing method is young. I hope the author can humbly accept readers' suggestions for improvement and add color to this white paper to make Xiaobai's text exciting.

Why do most of the stories about Dou Po involve people licking the protagonist?

The following are all trolls, don't worry about them The author I'm talking about is a newbie It's okay to take care of it And this book is free Are you newbie trolls embarrassed? Besides, what happened to the dog-licking article? 80% of Qidian's books have licking text I don't understand you trolls

Another new author who was trolled to death by readers

It is recommended that the protagonist collects all the beauties

Recommend a book by a new author: Fighting the Evil Emperor Era Now is the investment period for new books, with fewer investors, more profits! Updates are stable and guaranteed to be updated every day! Two updates often! A different story starts here! Drawing on the original work and another blocked Dou Po fan, write a brand new fan story. Since the story itself exists, it will not be called original. The plot is the author's own idea, so it is called an adaptation! Because the author has not applied for the fan license of the original work, hehe, please read and cherish it!