League of Legends in the Marvel World

Why is Black Widow written as a social novice?

I hope the author will check it after finishing it and correct the wrong sentences.

I don't feel it, mainly because there are too many redundant descriptions and too many restrictions are imposed on the protagonist. I clearly know that the protagonist has a big treasure and I still have to reveal the treasure, but I force the protagonist to weaken the one with restrictions. It is timid and directly deviates from the theme. The theme is to sell treasures, but it is written as a time-travel type for the public.

The American emperor, armed with a gun, suddenly became a street gangster armed with cold weapons. . . Moreover, there is a lot of nonsense, which perfectly illustrates how the villain dies from talking too much.

Old version of Spider-Man. . It's sad to see. Depressed. . . Although it looks good. But the new version still suits my taste.

Don't draw any inheritance, draw passive skills. The passive skill of Sword Girl is that she is so powerful in group fights.

At least what I write now is in line with my taste, come on

To be honest, I feel that the protagonist has not developed his inheritance well at all. This is not a problem of invincibility. For example, in the inheritance of Sword Girl, I feel that the abilities obtained by the protagonist are no different from telekinesis control. The designer of Sword Girl doesn't know exactly how Sword Girl is trained, but that doesn't stop you from writing. Even a set of dance moves and body movements that are used to kill enemies with a sharp blade is better than simple control, right? Then Enchantress, the terrifying mage assassin in the game, is also a very powerful mage in Noxus. What does the protagonist do with her abilities? Q is basically used for vision, W is used for pure displacement, ER has never been used before. To fight that iron man, the sharp blade does not break the defense. Is the magic resistance also high? Don't you want to try out the skills of the Enchantress when playing hand-to-hand combat? Starting from the end of the plot, I felt that I was not strong enough. At the beginning, I said that it would be great if the inheritance of the Dragon King and the others was passed down. Oh no, mortals' inheritances can't be used. What's the use of getting the inheritance of gods? I have been struggling with the health value, and I will research it casually when I get the inheritance. It takes longer than this to train a hero in the game. The author should think about it later, either turn inheritance into a skill in the game, and then crush it with the six gods equipment, don't add some and not, or think carefully about how to use inheritance. Mutants have a single ability, but they are equally strong when developed to the extreme. The protagonist is like this now, with a lot of abilities, and it feels like it is not even superficial. He doesn't work hard before the plot, and cheats after the plot?

The products are priced so cheaply that the richest man in the world is the richest man in the world when he resells the raw materials... One gold coin costs one hundred dollars, while the anti-armor price is only several hundred thousand dollars, which is not as good as a sports car. You can have the strength of wearing more than dozens of steel battle suits, and it also comes with a percentage of magic damage that can be repelled...

I've read two chapters for the first time, and I'm so enthusiastic about Black Country. Goodbye.

Don't show too many Chinese and Chinese cultivation systems in Marvel novels, because once you write, you will unconsciously write about the Chinese power in a big way. If you can't contain it, you will intervene in the Marvel plot, which will make readers confused. Even if you don't interfere, it's very jarring for Chinese plots to appear independently in Marvel novels without any interaction with Marvel. In addition, if you write about the Chinese cultivation system as weak, there will probably be a lot of trolls saying that you worship foreigners and favor foreigners, so it is best not to write about it. The above are some small suggestions.

Brother, don't you know magic? Don't you know the Mathematical Olympiad? That was the first Dark King of Noxus. Is that what you wrote? How will you write Ryze in the future? The rune leather paper Ryze is carrying is a world-destroying prop, or the Enchantress + the useless stick starts the true magic inheritance. Because you write it like this, I find it difficult to read, or the protagonist's character cannot bring out LeBlanc's full ability. If you write the skills like this, I think it is a failure, because how do you write the god of League of Legends? Creation Dragon King, how do you write it? Right, the most basic thing should be skill inheritance, and then start the inheritance step by step. If you have any powerful magic or martial skills, you can set up a small inheritance copy. To really start the hero's inheritance, you can spend gold coins to enter the inheritance space. There are two modes, one is the hero's projection to teach the protagonist, and the other is the protagonist is projected to a certain timeline of the hero to experience it personally. It is recommended to block the protagonist's memory and then experience it. A little book friend who likes this book

Start with Sword Girl, then Enchantress Ryze. It's okay. It avoids the cliche start of Galen Sword Master. In fact, I have always felt that the beginning of Fiona, the Peerless Swordsman, is the most comfortable. Regardless of the actual lower limit (fencing skills can be found in any plane) and the suspicion of others, it is still the lowest upper limit. It is also extremely high. With the help of daggers and flaws. Both offense and defense have the ability to compete a bit. Let's talk about books instead. Dao Mei has no problem with the start. But going forward. The following content is purely my personal thoughts. If there is anything wrong, I still hope Haihan. In fact, the choices of Enchantress and Ryze later made me discover. Including the knife girl. All the protagonist's skills are essentially mid-range skills. As a knife girl. His melee combat ability is actually very poor. Blade Impact is also a mid-range output skill rather than melee combat. Distance breaking, wingspan, and ultimate moves are all mid-range. This sword girl has only learned the art of sword control... I don't know what to say about the choice between Enchantress and Ryze. It feels like a medium bar. In addition, will it cause a bug? For example, are there any bugs in repeating the same trick on other characters? By the way, let me tell you a big move. See if you can implement it. Guide the winding path to cross. Leave the range, Pioneer Blade, the first section of the Twin Blades. The demonic shadow secretly entered the radius of the winding path and reached the second stage of the double-winged blades. I think you can bring the Vanguard Blade with you. Then the second part of The Lost Shadow returns to its original state. This is a large AOE scene. The way to steal and kill others winding path. Out of range, the demon shadow goes in, repeats the same trick, copies w, steps on face, qe, and goes back in the first paragraph. If I can't beat you to death, I'll kill you.

Many authors who write books work part-time and have regular jobs to earn some extra income from writing books. For example, the author of this book did not position himself well. He just wanted to become a god and earn tens of thousands a month from writing books. Those are only a few people. I feel that the author is also a relatively lazy person in life. He has no choice but to work part-time. I don't care about readers at all, it's quite realistic

Have you been in trouble since the plot of Avengers 1? Pigfoot participated in it but did nothing. The article he wrote also copied the original plot. I have watched the movie, but I still want to come here and spend money to read the text version written by the author? Just forget it if you say you'll do something, you'll have no sense of existence if you're just making soy sauce all the time!

The equipment is too cheap, 1:100. The equipment price is still the original price of the game. There is no need to fight Thanos' invasion. The mage can directly understand the protagonist's abilities through the time gem. He can inform Luodan to form a group of thousands of people and lose money. The giant Hydra has all the meat left. No one will attack Thanos and he will be killed instantly. Now, in a few days, the universe can be conquered... The simplest way to play this dungeon is to attack the army. In the early stage, mix with the black, and eat the black to make money, buy equipment for the younger brothers, and then when there are more younger brothers, directly knock down the Bank of America. After defeating a bank, you can go to the money printing machine, and then become invincible?

I really don't like the X-Men, even though the abilities in them are very cool.

One is Hassan, the other is Li Yi. What are the names of this sand sculpture?

Why didn't the system come out earlier? I don't even explain the reason, it's still the kind of abusive main text,