The Magnificence of Common People

The classics cited in the novel are pretty good. I was able to learn some little knowledge from the novel, including the history of the Song Dynasty and ancient marriage customs. The framework of the story is also pretty good, and I quite like it. However, when I read this novel, it was difficult to empathize with it when following the plot of the novel. The novel gave me the feeling that it was just writing a running account, with too little description of the characters' expressions and psychology, and most of it was filled with dialogues between the characters. This is a very serious problem in my opinion. The first thing a novel has to do is to attract readers' attention. I think that in order to be "engrossing", it can describe the psychology of the characters more, allowing readers to get close to the characters in the novel and feel their emotions. Only in this way can the readers feel the same, and can the readers like the characters in it? You can also describe more beautiful moments in the story, such as the details of the male and female protagonists being together, such as the scene where they consummated their marriage. That night should be a very important and unforgettable night for both the male and female protagonists, right? But the author just jumped to it in one paragraph, which gives people the feeling that this is not important at all, it is just an interlude. I think the author can put more emphasis here, so that we can feel their sweetness and understand their lives. I have read "The Story of a Boudoir", and the problems in it are not as serious as "The Beauty of a Commoner". I don't know what happened to the author, and why the writing style of the later works is not as good as the previous works. Shouldn't the writing style be getting better and better? One problem is that it is difficult to empathize with others. Another problem is that many modern life customs are quoted in the novel to ancient life. This is very unreasonable. Just imagine that the people around you are not from the same era as you. Aren't you first of all afraid of being discovered by others that you are alien? Why do you still take the initiative to make cakes and eat hot pot, and open a cake shop and hot pot restaurant, and the name is still "No. 1 Cake", thinking of becoming famous all over the world? These modern-day-related plots really threw me for a loop.

Originally, this beginning was very new and aroused interest to continue reading, but the writing of the heroine was too stupid. She thought one way and another for a while, and in the end she didn't marry Lu Ai according to the Lu family's plan. . . And he didn't even know how he was plotted against, and he was so depressed to watch.

Things shouldn't be that simple. Lu You should be pretending to be a pig and eating the tiger, the male protagonist is unlikely to be like this

An unmarried girl has no descendants, no burial in her ancestral graves, no funeral, and no one to show her mourning. If a married person dies, he or she must be adopted by the husband's family or adopt a child before someone can die. Some time ago, we had a man who had been engaged for several years and had children but had not yet held a wedding. He passed away unexpectedly. He had to get married first and then have a funeral.

It's strange to see so many people complaining. Is it true that only Dashuang articles can be read? It feels like compromise and helplessness are the real life.

I feel that the matter of breaking off the engagement is too delayed. I am still analyzing it in detail after more than 200 chapters. I am too paranoid. I always take the initiative to provoke this matter from time to time, as if there is no new content to add.

Heroine, you should move out, but you haven't moved out yet. You've been fussing over a few clothes for months... The plot is dragging on~

The more I look at it, the worse it gets! It feels like there is intrigue. The story goes back and forth about the fights between the four families. No fame.

The male protagonist of this book is portrayed in a misleading way. People with extreme personalities or people with mental illness, what the author wants to express is that as long as there is love, they can be influenced. As long as you teach people to be kind and guide them well, all the hardships will eventually be rewarded... If many little girls fall in love with people with extreme personalities, they will either stay together or die together. This is such a terrible thing, a terrible theory... I completely disagree with this view. It is the right thing to stay away from autistic people and people with extreme behaviors in love partners... My deskmate in junior high school was in a relationship with a boy. Later, I found that the two were not suitable. She wanted to break up, but the boy did not agree. She didn't care much about the boy. One evening two months later, the boy came to the girl's community to look for her and wanted to talk to her one last time. The girl insisted on breaking up, and the boy strangled her to death downstairs of her house... I was in my junior year at the time, and this incident taught me to stay away from people with extreme behavior. My deskmate studied well, had a cheerful personality, loved talking and laughing, and was not someone who disliked poverty and loved wealth. He left at such a young age... It was because he found that it was inappropriate to fall in love with a person with an extreme personality, and a young life disappeared...

So far, I feel that the heroine is weak and has no independent opinion! After being harmed by my uncle and aunt, I was still grateful, but after being sold by my husband's family, I still naively wanted to find out. If you are willing to let others manipulate you anyway, why bother to go against the Lu family in the first place.

The writing of Z is too bad. I don't know what kind of loser the author wants to turn the heroine into.

After reading a few chapters, I decided to abandon the article. The writing is okay, but the plot design is too imaginative. Yan Yan had two backers, the Queen Mother and the Emperor, so the Lu family only dared to mess around because they were in trouble. The development of the story actually made her marry the person who almost killed her? I really can't stand it

At dawn, the sky was just bright, but Feather was already walking on the street that had not yet woken up. Today is an important day, I am going to meet a book friend. Although it is still early and people are probably not up yet, Feather has already arrived at the door of the book friend. Standing outside the courtyard, waiting quietly... After waiting for a long time, the courtyard door finally opened. Hey! This book friend! Remember me? Let me stop by and check in! I have been collecting your books for a long time. You don't even know it, but today I made a special trip to see you. Oh, by the way! This is my book "Wind, Rain, Fantasy and Thunder God". Do you want to read it too? Come and sit at my place if you have nothing to do, have some wine and some tea, we can talk about life and ideals. Okay, I won't disturb you anymore, you can continue creating! It's time for me to go back. Don't give it away! Why are you so polite? Stay! After seeing you for thousands of miles, we must finally say goodbye. The green mountains and green waters will bring us a bright future!

The Lu family has such a beautiful idea. Does the Yan family have no brains? If we go by our previous assumptions, the Yan family felt sorry for the Lu family and married off the second young lady. In this situation, if you really want to get married, isn't it clear that the two families are collaborating to design Yan Yan, and he wants sisters to marry easily? The Lu family has lost its reputation anyway, but they still have a good reputation. Both sons have married wives. Not only has the Yan family lost money, but they also have to bear the reputation of neglecting orphans and having a lax upbringing. Will the next daughter be married? For the sake of your eldest daughter, do you ignore the other children?

Will the male protagonist turn into Lu You or Lu Ming in a roundabout way? Wow, he turns out to be a destined "enemy"? It would be boring if that were the case

It's hard to say this about the heroine, it's all a grievance. But I am worried about this and that.

Some people actually say that the writing is good, ha. The part about guessing riddles is so funny. The words for the riddle actually appear on the face of the riddle. It's completely devoid of common sense.

Don't worry too much about Yan Tong. She will always choose her own sister at critical moments. If you worry too much, maybe her family will say that Yan Yan is relying on Yan Tong's marriage to win over people if she has something in the future.

The first chapters of this book feel very long-winded, and then some chapters are very exciting and enjoyable, but the ending is not particularly exciting. After reading the whole article, I would like to give some suggestions to the author. It would be better to strengthen the logic, frame, context, and structure diagram to be clearer. Also, some chapters are rather wordy, and I always worry that the explanation is not clear.

Why is there a chapter missing? The Lu family is really troublesome

Missed Chapter 692!

The relationship between the male and female protagonists is very cute, but it feels like the royal family is like a neighborhood committee, mediating family disputes all day long 😂

Lu Jin should not have planned to marry his grandson. She was not suitable at all, so she insisted on marrying him. I felt that both Lu Jin and his grandson were not lovable. I felt that Lu Jin's character could survive in the palace. It was too contrived and fake. The grandson loved Lu Jin's free and easy special look, but at the same time wanted to change Lu Jin to make her meet the requirements of the palace. Isn't this very contradictory? Both of them are awkward!

A very good article is a story about different people and is not the same as others. Like 😍,👍👍👍. Looking forward to the next work

I bet the author's academic qualifications are definitely not high... There are too many common sense mistakes.

Can't the two chapters be connected? Did you lose one?

Except for the male protagonist, Yi and the Lu family have more or less troubles when they are together. There are too many troubles.

The plot is so procrastinating. It's been dozens of chapters and I still haven't gotten married yet. I'm dizzy.

At first I thought the heroine was a bit frustrated, but later I found out that it was completely enjoyable.

The author's writing is good. But I was put off by the comments. In fact, it is mainly the general style of writing that has become popular in the past two years. Even the writing about women also talks about political power and the pursuit of family, country and world. Pure inner-city writing is no longer popular.