Bug Hunting in the Main God’s World

Let me just say that I felt very bad after watching the beginning. The bad points are as follows: 1. See the school beauty again! Frankly speaking, I didn't know what a class beauty or school beauty was from elementary school to university, so when I saw someone talking about a school beauty, it felt like a joke. 2. Being ridiculed for no reason! It's just giving money to a beggar. The reaction from the students and the ridiculous image are hard for me to accept. Just like when you see your classmates playing games to top up money or buying action figures and peripherals, you will be surprised at most, and they will jump out and say that you XX actually spent money to top up games or buy figures and peripherals. Even if there are, you are a rare idiot and cannot be together. 3. Leaving the team seems abrupt! Just like before the college entrance examination, if you were distracted and fell asleep in class, the teacher would appropriately punish you to stand in the back and wake up. You would neither shout out like that classmate that the teacher hates you, which is really unbelievable, nor would you directly say that I should go home and review by myself, but the teacher still thinks highly of you and thinks you have courage. 4. Strength is a mystery! It starts directly with Tian Boguang and Yue Buqun. This is obviously not an invincible situation like One Punch Man at the beginning. The growth in strength is very confusing. 5. The plot is smart! I won't talk about Tian Boguang's part, why would Xiao Linzi believe you? Yue Buqun didn't have any obvious problems in the early stage. It's like someone suddenly told you that your parents raised you to kill you for meat. Would you believe it without thinking? Also, Yue Buqun would fight directly with the protagonist, which was very helpless. 6. Smart protagonist! I won't talk about the wild ball boxing part anymore. Let's talk about planning. Why does Lin Pingzhi need you to help him like this? Or why go to Huashan? I don't feel the meaning and purpose of doing this. Since you know this world very well, why don't you hurry up and plan? I really can't stand it when I see this. The above is my feeling after watching the first world. Everyone is welcome to like and approve, and rational discussions are also welcome.

I hope the author can improve it. Some points can still be written better, just like the subjective consciousness should not be too strong. You always say that Yue Buqun is hypocritical, but you have never thought about Linghu Chong. He was very good at the beginning. This kind of subjective consciousness should not appear. You must analyze rationally and do not objectively emphasize what you think. The protagonist is really too thick-skinned. China is a country of etiquette, and the readers are naturally not the group of SDs in the future world in the article, so the readers are still humane. Lao Yue feeds him, drinks for him, and practices martial arts, just because he is good at light kung fu and walks without making a sound. Moreover, the protagonist beat Lao Yue in just a few chapters? Has Lao Yue's internal strength been eaten by a dog? He can't release it even with a single blow. .

Does anyone else think of buy as rbq deduction like me?

Now that I'm not in prison anymore, I've made up my mind~

When I saw Chapter 14, it was written that Lao Yue was persuaded to quit. Lao Yue was always cheated. He devoted his whole life for Huashan and regarded Linghu Chong as his own son, but he was cheated by this guy!

I hope the author will change Chapter 9. After all, Yue Buqun was fine at that time and had a reputation for fighting mountain bandits. It was just because Linghu Chong was too temperamental (too deceitful) that Yue Buqun's pressure gradually increased and he reached the end.

The first paragraph of the first chapter is all about linen clothes. In the fourth chapter, when the protagonist looks at a woman, the clothes directly change into the modern short-skirted high school girl outfit. Not to mention that the clothes are not suitable for ancient times, but there is no time to change clothes. Could it be that they were changed on the street.

When using the flower-twisting finger, the descriptions of the protagonist are: The protagonist smiles slightly When you pinch the flower and smile, I will become a Buddha. Poke a few bloody holes Can you change the description?

I just read the first ten chapters. I don't want to talk about the so-called power system and why you can compete with Tian Boguang so quickly. I will just talk about why I gave up the book. The first is to use Shen Xingbai to transform the violent wind sword technique, and the other is to have a drink with him. Can you, the author, make up this nonsense about being a modern person and not having any special opinions? Why does Tian Boguang want extreme lightness kung fu? Originally, Tian Boguang's Qing Gong was good enough. Who could catch him if he learned all kinds of magic moves? How many times did Wei Xiaobao use his magical power to create many crises? If it were Tian Boguang, even Master Bujie wouldn't be able to catch him, right? He was originally a lewd thief, but now that he has learned how to change his ways, how many good girls will suffer? Does the protagonist still have some conscience?

Let's end King of Fighters. This part is so disgusting.