The Dark Wizard of Hogwarts

Abused throughout. Dumbledore can't find the vampire professor? They found a problem but did not take any precautions. The two students investigated on their own? Why is the protagonist sleepy, why is he jumping on the broom, why is there something wrong with his blood? Forget about the original work, why is the protagonist sent to the Forbidden Forest? The same goes for the four giants, who don't care about their disciples. Don't they know that practicing black magic can lead to changes in temperament? All in all, all the powerful ones are just trying to make a fool of themselves, and only the weak protagonist is jumping up and down trying to save the world. I really don't like this style of relying on the halo of the protagonist to keep dying but not die. The creativity is there, but the plot is terrible.

First of all, there are enough fan works that completely copy the plot of HP. If you search it, you will find a bunch of them. If you don't like the book, just quit silently. There is no need to complain here. As a HP fan, the plot of the original work that I have read dozens or hundreds of times will be boring. Occasionally, I will see some different plots. To be honest, I'm really surprised. HP has a big background and can say a lot, but the original work is only limited to Hogwarts and a few key characters. This is a pity to me. After all, there must be many things we don't know about such a fascinating wizarding world. This is where fan works can be used very well. I think it is a good thing to not stick to the original work and should be encouraged. Then let's talk about what I personally think is the biggest problem in this book: the plot. First of all, as a starting point novel, it must be interesting. Does this book have it? Of course there is, such as the transformation into a huge black dragon a thousand years ago, but in terms of senses, the reader is just happy at first, but the protagonist is over, and the early foreshadowing is too tragic, resulting in a feeling that the reward is not proportional to the effort. The plot must have ups and downs and a reasonable proportion, so that readers will not feel too uncomfortable watching it and more people will watch it. In general, it is a good book with novel ideas and good writing style. However, I hope the author can balance the balance between cruelty and pleasure in the plot arrangement. Come on, I am optimistic about you!

It's a pity that I can't give a negative review, otherwise I would give a negative review to a book like this in one day! ! ! Even those who said nice things, I suspected, were invited by the author to forcibly lower their IQs. Even the professors were able to beat him at the beginning? ? ? After a while, you will be at the first grade level and you will be unable to cast any spell! ! ! Compared to when he was just taught how to throw the killing curse? . Hehe

To be honest, the first 40 chapters gave me a chaotic feeling, but from then on I can see that the writing skills have improved and the control of the plot is getting better and better. If the speed can be increased again, it will be perfect. Even if it is limited to this, the current quality can be regarded as food and fodder for Harry Potter fans. This week's recommendation is yours, you deserve this honor (PS: Don't blame me for getting a vote after talking for a long time, I have no feelings)

The little wizard who just entered school will have a magical edge?

The book is very good and updating is a pain in the ass.

How can I put it this way? I really want to support the author because the writing of this book is okay, but the plot is really vicious, so why should I abuse the protagonist? Have you continued to abuse me since the beginning until you returned a thousand years later? If you are interested, read this book about abuse of the master. I can't stand it.

I vomited. Author, have you never read the original work? When did Hagrid's brother appear? Now Harry hasn't gone to school yet and his brother has come out? Not to mention that the life-killing curse was used too carelessly. Not determined enough. Didn't you have the determination when you walked into the alley and was about to be killed?

After reading a hundred chapters, I also feel that the past content is too much, but it is very interesting. Come on, the author. I feel that the author's writing style is more like that of other platforms, so I am not used to it.

The plot is very interesting, but Chapter 20 of Pig's Foot has experienced the child abuse incident, the abduction incident in Knockturn Alley, and the vampire incident in the Forbidden Forest, leaving no room for breathing. The story is still very interesting. It does not stick to the plot of the original work, but is based on the framework of the original work and adds flesh and blood. Although pig's feet will not see rainbows without going through wind and rain, you will get tired of seeing rainbows all the time.

In order to learn black magic, Piglet found Dormammu, and then...

My thoughts are that the three unforgivable curses are all about the soul. The protagonist cannot just learn black magic, but needs to improve it, such as developing the Avada Kedavra with tracking or magic defense penetration, etc.

The writing was pretty good before and just after entering the school, and then it got to the plot of the thousand years ago. In fact, the plot design was okay, but it felt like it was too long. About 30 chapters went to the thousand years ago, and it took more than 100 chapters to come back. This is not an infinite novel. As the first copy, it is obviously too long. Judging from the chapter in the middle, a lot of people should have abandoned it. Then after returning to school, because the plot of a thousand years ago was too long, the strength was too high, and then the author tried every means to weaken the protagonist, but in fact many people did not like this design. Moreover, it is not enough to limit the strength. Sometimes, the IQ is forcibly lowered to ensure that the villain is not crushed. It is indeed quite uncomfortable to watch. There are also some details and various orientalized terms that conflict with the original settings. Finally, the most important reason why I gave up was that this book gave me the impression that it was a fantasy novel covered in HP. There were only a few of the more than 200 chapters in the academy, and there were not many magic-related plots. There were also dragon vampires, grading wizards, and the old man in the ring (Ge Pell) and other classic fantasy settings, and then it also includes classic urban novels like pretending to be caught in the villain's lair, pretending to beat the villain to recruit a younger brother, building a base, and finding instructors for training. If you write the same thing even if you change the HP world view, then why do you still use the name Harry Potter?

The ups and downs of the collection prove that there are poisonous points in the book, but Qiufeng doesn't know what makes you book friends unhappy, so please express your opinions and point out what makes you unhappy. Please, please, everyone can leave any comments. Writing alone is like crossing a river by feeling for stones. If you can help me, I will be grateful.

The protagonist and Harry Potter have one thing in common. There is a problem with the protagonist's halo! ! ! He has no strength and no talent, but he can trigger a series of strange things and offend a lot of people. The bad guys can always plan a conspiracy in advance, but the good guys (such as Dumbledore) don't care about anything. They are as efficient as government civil servants. Every time something goes wrong, they come slower than the police. To put it simply, the main character, Harry Potter, they can survive is a coincidence forced by the author. In reality, he would have died tens of thousands of times. This is not true or unreal, it defies logic. It's like, in reality, you can't win big prizes by buying lottery tickets, but in novels, you keep winning prizes, winning prizes every day. It's inconsistent with logic, you know?

It's all bugs... It feels like I started writing it after watching the movie without reading the original novel. In just ten chapters, heirloom wands are being sold for cheap, Being a pig brother on the way to school, Good guy Snape, Inexplicably talking to a girl I don't know well in the school doctor's office about the bad qualities of mobile phones and other Muggle items, Pouring Hagrid's good beef soup I made my own milky white beef soup, (It's a thick soup pot, I added a thick soup pot!) After a few lessons, I felt that I was very powerful. I ran away from Hagrid in the Forbidden Forest and wandered around. Then I faced the enemy in an instant and inexplicably used the Half-Blood Prince's unique magic, Shen Feng Wu Ying.

It's poisonous from beginning to end, and it keeps abusing the owner. The author even asked people who didn't know why the collection kept dropping. I suggest the author just make it eunuch. There is no need to write it down. Don't you understand that it still can't be put on the shelves?

One thing followed another in such a hurry, and before one hole was dug, several more holes were dug in front of it. Not many readers like this kind of novel that keeps digging holes.

I feel that many of the author's settings are too rigid. You can add your own ideas based on the original work, but your settings feel very inconsistent with the original work. The details are a bit rough, and the protagonist looks very wrong right from the beginning.

The author could write more about life and tone down the plot, it's too intense. . . . . .

There is nothing to criticize. I am just curious that the author is working overtime and getting sick, and the intention of writing the book is to make some extra money. So why do you keep writing these cruel chapters? The plot in the early stage of the time travel has not actually collapsed yet. The power system in the back is already weird. It creates gimmicks forcibly, and the forces must be opposed. There is no foreshadowing and no turning point, so how can this book be sold? This does not mean that good works should follow the rules, but judging from the list, light-hearted fan fiction can better motivate readers. It is better to write side stories than to add too many themes of your own. This simply changes the taste.

Is there a female protagonist? I don't think it's the best.

A bit of advice, I think Harry Potter fans mainly want to see the main plot, the interaction or confrontation between the protagonist and the trio. Now the plot of the side story is a bit long, it depends on the author how you control it. It would be great if the independent story of Gaiden could be written well and original. If you can't grasp it, it's better to return to the main line as soon as possible. By the way, I would like to ask the author, if the protagonist returns to the original time, how long will it take for the original world to pass?

It's a natural aura that attracts monsters. No matter where you go, someone will hit you. . Half of the vampires in the school, Lao Deng, wouldn't be able to spot him. It's funny. If vampires were that powerful they wouldn't add luxurious potion formulas. 😅 Vampires in HP are terrible in combat. Generally, Aurors should be easy to defeat. Vampires are a first-grade course, and there are vampires in the fifth-grade club for fun 😅 Your vampire's combat power has been enhanced too much. . .

It looks very good (≧∇≦*)

What I wrote was embarrassing to me. . . Shadowless Blade, Professor Snape's original magic! ! Just saw it in the library? ? ? Anyone knows it? ? Arranging a boss vampire looks awesome, but is it difficult to defeat a first-grade kid? ? ? Unicorns come in black! ! Black magic can be learned casually. Dumbledore stupid dog? ? Don't you know that your professor has a vampire? ? When you have a problem, you don't want to ask an adult for help, but you have to investigate it yourself. Does that make you look awesome? Or is it that after fainting twice, there is no panic or alertness at all? ? Someone actually commented well? When I came in, everything I saw was poisonous! ! !

The author's writing is very good, but some settings are not clear. The magic that restores the house to its original state is to restore it to its original state. For details, please refer to Fantastic Beasts 1. Hogwarts was originally the castle of Salazar and Slytherin. It was not made out of thin air. There are many other settings. Many readers were poisoned by the unclear settings.

Alas, although most HP fanfics are about eunuchs, this one is at least finished, but the quality is poor. . . . . . Not very good

Abuse of the main article. If you don't like it, you can leave. I have a big head and the writing is a bit confusing.

It's too cruel. Whoever reads novels comes to be tortured. Life itself is very hard. Reading novels is for fun, not to make it miserable. Just like if you are a prostitute and choose an 80-year-old aunt, the ones who are interested are basically in the minority.