The Dark Wizard of Hogwarts

The plot is very interesting, but Chapter 20 of Pig's Foot has experienced the child abuse incident, the abduction incident in Knockturn Alley, and the vampire incident in the Forbidden Forest, leaving no room for breathing. The story is still very interesting. It does not stick to the plot of the original work, but is based on the framework of the original work and adds flesh and blood. Although pig's feet will not see rainbows without going through wind and rain, you will get tired of seeing rainbows all the time.

In order to learn black magic, Piglet found Dormammu, and then...

My thoughts are that the three unforgivable curses are all about the soul. The protagonist cannot just learn black magic, but needs to improve it, such as developing the Avada Kedavra with tracking or magic defense penetration, etc.

The writing was pretty good before and just after entering the school, and then it got to the plot of the thousand years ago. In fact, the plot design was okay, but it felt like it was too long. About 30 chapters went to the thousand years ago, and it took more than 100 chapters to come back. This is not an infinite novel. As the first copy, it is obviously too long. Judging from the chapter in the middle, a lot of people should have abandoned it. Then after returning to school, because the plot of a thousand years ago was too long, the strength was too high, and then the author tried every means to weaken the protagonist, but in fact many people did not like this design. Moreover, it is not enough to limit the strength. Sometimes, the IQ is forcibly lowered to ensure that the villain is not crushed. It is indeed quite uncomfortable to watch. There are also some details and various orientalized terms that conflict with the original settings. Finally, the most important reason why I gave up was that this book gave me the impression that it was a fantasy novel covered in HP. There were only a few of the more than 200 chapters in the academy, and there were not many magic-related plots. There were also dragon vampires, grading wizards, and the old man in the ring (Ge Pell) and other classic fantasy settings, and then it also includes classic urban novels like pretending to be caught in the villain's lair, pretending to beat the villain to recruit a younger brother, building a base, and finding instructors for training. If you write the same thing even if you change the HP world view, then why do you still use the name Harry Potter?

The ups and downs of the collection prove that there are poisonous points in the book, but Qiufeng doesn't know what makes you book friends unhappy, so please express your opinions and point out what makes you unhappy. Please, please, everyone can leave any comments. Writing alone is like crossing a river by feeling for stones. If you can help me, I will be grateful.

The protagonist and Harry Potter have one thing in common. There is a problem with the protagonist's halo!!! He has no strength and no talent, but he can trigger a series of strange things and offend a lot of people. The bad guys can always plan a conspiracy in advance, but the good guys (such as Dumbledore) don't care about anything. They are as efficient as government civil servants. Every time something goes wrong, they come slower than the police. To put it simply, the main character, Harry Potter, they can survive is a coincidence forced by the author. In reality, he would have died tens of thousands of times. This is not true or unreal, it defies logic. It's like, in reality, you can't win big prizes by buying lottery tickets, but in novels, you keep winning prizes, winning prizes every day. It's inconsistent with logic, you know?

It's all bugs... It feels like I started writing it after watching the movie without reading the original novel. In just ten chapters, heirloom wands are being sold for cheap, Being a pig brother on the way to school, Good guy Snape, Inexplicably talking to a girl I don't know well in the school doctor's office about the bad qualities of mobile phones and other Muggle items, Pouring Hagrid's good beef soup I made my own milky white beef soup, (It's a thick soup pot, I added a thick soup pot!) After a few lessons, I felt that I was very powerful. I ran away from Hagrid in the Forbidden Forest and wandered around. Then I faced the enemy in an instant and inexplicably used the Half-Blood Prince's unique magic, Shen Feng Wu Ying.

It's poisonous from beginning to end, and it keeps abusing the owner. The author even asked people who didn't know why the collection kept dropping. I suggest the author just make it eunuch. There is no need to write it down. Don't you understand that it still can't be put on the shelves?

One thing followed another in such a hurry, and before one hole was dug, several more holes were dug in front of it. Not many readers like this kind of novel that keeps digging holes.

Is there a female protagonist? I don't think it's the best.