Battle for Theroth

Damn it, someone actually rewarded me. Bining Snake Monkey, thank you! Thank you! 😭 I'm already crying

Are you writing online articles at a publishing level?

I read a few pictures because I won a red envelope, and I feel that the author's writing is okay, but needs to be improved. I remember that the preface said that he wanted to write a world instead of a novel. I think this is a big problem. This concept is usually only thought like this by novices. (Of course, the great among the great may also think so, but the author is obviously not) Write a novel well It's hard to say, you have to position yourself well, it's a matter of attitude, otherwise it will give people a very long-winded feeling like your novel, a very long-winded feeling. This is caused by your writing power and poor plot arrangement. You have to work hard to write the places that should not be emphasized, and write down the places that should be emphasized due to lack of experience. It's not good, it's just like a foot wrap, and it's a foot wrap stained with mud. I suggest the author write more clearly, don't be too ambitious, and be more commercial. (Of course, it can't be too white, that kind of white writing is really disgusting, but a little white is still good for newcomers.) Sharpen your writing skills, and finally let me talk about the style of your current novel. It is actually relatively niche, and the writing skills are not good, so no one will read it at all. I don't like this pig's feet, and the personality is too "realistic" (that is, too real). I think the protagonist of the novel must have a distinctive personality and cannot be written based on the author's personality. Instead, it must have a certain logic and cannot be emotional, because the emotional writing power cannot be controlled at all.

It will be on the shelves next Wednesday, January 30th. I hope you will support me a lot.

The accumulation of two million words is the foundation for your next book to become a god. Time will never let down those who are willing.

I see you, the author, giving me flowers for my book list. I feel really embarrassed. My little book list is still too little help to you. I personally suggest that the author if you have money can send you a chapter monthly ticket red envelope, or a chapter recommendation ticket package, and put it in the latest chapter. This can not only increase the number of votes, but also promote subscriptions. The publicity effect of this book may be better. Finally, I wish the author that your work will sell well.

The name is too dramatic... It's really like Nicholas Zhao Si's sense of déjà vu, and he can't look straight at it.

I will do my best to bring readers good works

After reading the beginning, I feel that it is the same as the Warring States Period. Qin wanted to unify the earth, but other countries did not agree and wanted to resist, plus elves and dwarves and so on.

You have a Western background and Eastern dialogue names. You also beep when typing, and you hit the second number again. It's very dramatic. Even if you want to watch the subsequent plot, you will be dissuaded by your writing style.

It feels so weird to use Chinese names in a fantasy world. In particular, almost all magicians use Chinese-style naming, which makes them look like a cultivator using a foreigner like George. Very disharmonious

The author's efforts are completely out of proportion to the rewards. There are more than 2 million words and only 30 comments. No one wants to read or waste time. I hope the author uses this perseverance in the right place. If he finds the right direction, I think the author does not say that he is popular, and medium-level popularity is not a problem

I think the author's explanation of personal names makes sense, but at the same time the author ignores two key points: First, global culture is indeed constantly integrating, but this is still far from being fully realized. The successful integration of individual cases cannot ignore the fact that the cultural differences between countries are still very huge; second, the actual situation of online novels is not considered. Most readers are still quite resistant to the practice of using Chinese names in the Western fantasy world. Forcibly resisting the mainstream view is an approach that does more harm than good. Based on the above two points, it is better for the author to find a way to distinguish the races in other directions, such as using Splittooth as a surname for the orcs, and Oakheart as a surname for the elves.

This is one of the few people who was brought in by the Silver Alliance and even came here to delete the book. The opening chapter persuades them to quit.

The writing is very good, it's a Western fantasy. Using a Chinese name can easily dissuade people. I would like to advise you not to criticize.

Many people say that the author's writing style is good. I look forward to the author's next book.

Western fantasy novels should not use Chinese names and descriptions should not be written in a Chinese style. Just like when you write a domestic historical novel, your protagonist is Olivers. Do you think anyone will read it if you describe it in a translator's tone?

They say writing is good, but what is so good about writing? Let's not talk about the prologue. As for the combat and career settings, I was confused at first, but that may be why it wasn't developed. After entering the main text, the protagonist's 20-year-old setting is very poisonous, and the subsequent dialogue with his friends feels like a primary school student's dialogue. Then there is the description of how much he loves his mother, especially the explanation of why he is 20 years old and doesn't even have a part-time job. I was dumbfounded by this reason. A healthy young man who is lazy and idle all day long, eating and drinking all day long, dares to say that he loves his mother? Finally, I would like to explain why I say that the protagonist's dialogue is mentally retarded, because from the very beginning he is thinking about fairness and unfairness, which is extremely blunt and without reason or logic. Would a lazy man who spends his days eating and drinking think about how to change his problems without external help? Does he observe social situations? If he had this ability, could he eat and drink until he was 20 years old? Don't write about ordinary people doing the protagonist's things. He must have the protagonist's personality and characteristics in order to do the protagonist's things. I've just mentioned the professional bug, it's not too poisonous, it can be explained by a fantasy. After reading a dozen chapters, this is how I feel now.

After reading a little bit, I can feel that the author's writing style is quite good, but the name of this character is really confusing, and I always feel that there is something weird about it that I can't get into, ugh~~~

Brother, you are a Renaissance person. Let's talk about it. You are a Renaissance person and people use Chinese names. This is tasteless. Since you are pursuing excitement, you have to follow through to the end Let's save it first

The magician has a Chinese name. Could it be that he is referring to a holographic online game?

"An old man who time-traveled and picked up rags and made a living by making bad movies" [Mental patients have more happiness] A director graduate from his past life accidentally time-traveled into an old man who smelled like sheep and picked up rags. He was arrested for killing people at the beginning. He had a miserable job in variety shows. He was professionally incompetent, and he blackmailed people with group performances. Broadcast begging and exploring ghosts to scare people, crack down on counterfeit goods and sell fake goods, make horror videos to scare people, make short skits to scare people, and make bad movies to extend your life After that, you can travel to infinite planes and other worlds, collect movie materials, and return to reality on the big screen to scare the audience

To be honest, the intertwined Eastern and Western settings are really too weird. When I first watched Douluo Dalu, I thought it was an Eastern fantasy, but suddenly there was an Oscar or something, and I couldn't stand it anymore.