Earth Awakens

The new book has five chapters, and it's still a new account. It took five days to write, averaging one chapter a day, and then it won the first place in the science fiction weekly list. It's amazing, awesome! (Broken sound) Yuanfang, what do you think? A new divine book?

When will it be put on the shelves? When will it break out? It's not enough.

He said that he had been reading it since the author's fourth chapter, and he has been reading since then. He just took a break and read it. I hope the author can keep up the good work! The student has no money, so he can only give you all the starting points.

━┳━━┳━I realized it was too early, that's all

Reward five hundred. Come on, author. If you don't write it, it will be listed on the shelf and subscribe.

There have been a lot of eunuch books on the shelves recently. Could it be that Qidian has closed down?

Come on, author. Six recommendation votes are given to you.

NB, it's only been a few chapters. It's too easy to bribe at the starting point.

The writing is okay, but I just don't like the heroine. It's not that the heroine is bad, it's that the heroine is too good. She has super talents, is extremely beautiful, and has extraordinary luck. She is also devoted to the hero, extremely considerate, and never leaves him before he becomes successful. Such a perfect heroine. It's too non-sticky and too formulaic. There are too many books for this routine. If the male protagonist doesn't get the golden finger, what will the female protagonist do? She will continue to wait for the male protagonist to leave in shame. After watching too many tall female protagonists, I still prefer ordinary female protagonists.

I would like to make a suggestion, passers-by should be less surprised. If you spend so much time writing about what people around you say about school belles, geniuses, etc., It will not make people feel that the protagonist is awesome. Instead, it will make me feel that passers-by are just support. Although some plots are reasonable, they are not important and there is no need to write them out. For example, the protagonist has to have breakfast every morning and what he eats. , You need to write, it is not necessary at all, and the dialogue between passers-by is also unnecessary. It is enough to say one thing a few times. Is it necessary to repeat things like school beauty and genius? Obviously it is not necessary. If you write too much, it will make people feel that although there are many words, the plot has not advanced much, but it makes people feel irritated. Personal feelings, I hope the author can think about it carefully