This Star Is Messing Around

First The character Ouyang Mingyue can be kicked out of the male protagonist's life circle prematurely. Second The male protagonist's character could be stronger, but now the protagonist's cowardice is simply a shame for a time traveler. Third To be honest, I was very angry when I saw it later. Fourth The bastard with the surname Han should have written it off as soon as possible.

"A Serious Book Review" Preface: I have read thirty chapters, and I will only briefly talk about these thirty chapters. Try to remain neutral and comment civilly... Because some issues are entangled together, I will not list the plot, writing style, and character breakdown separately... After reading thirty chapters, I feel that this book is too hard... Interruptions, flashbacks, introductions, narrations... Etc. Wait... The author uses a lot of formulaic writing methods, and it is written in a literary and youthful way... It gives me the feeling of "I can go with the crowd just to eat, but I have my own persistence"... It's not that it's not good, but you have to know that writing power is not something that you can just write a few chapters... And it can be seen that the author has a lot of ideas, and he wants to have full characters and full characters. The plot is full of ups and downs, and at the same time, it wants to lay down the foreshadowing... The result is that it feels vague and unclear, and at the same time, the characters are written a little too far away from reality (this realistic understanding is only my personal understanding, because the narrative in the article is often written in a realistic and dark way)... It makes the reader's reading experience very bad... In fact, the simplest way to test whether a novel author tells a good story is , just read the story through to see if it is smooth and reasonable (you can try it and you will know after you try it)... The protagonist in the article does not know how to time travel for more than ten chapters, and "ignores" all doubtful points, and the supporting characters such as Mingyue and Yanran are highlighted and then marginalized... It's too ingenious, buddy... Readers with a little experience in online writing can feel that you are It's a burial pit... But your burial pit really doesn't have the feeling of "holding the pipa and half-hiding your face". It just puts it there clearly so that people can guess it, and then fill it in in the subsequent plot... In fact, if you really follow the "little white text" route, I won't mention these. After all, the level of various routines purely depends on how well the author handles them. If the reader sees "hot-blooded", then it is good, if the reader sees "cliché", then it means they have to rush out... But when the "writing skills" of yours came out, they were not of this standard... I can see that you want to write the protagonist in a more three-dimensional way, but don't you think it is redundant... Do I know him, do the readers know him, does this protagonist have a prototype in reality? I answered for you... No... This is both Otherwise, why bother talking about those things that are and are not? Why not just put them in the plot and slowly introduce them... This is a literary youth and a cliché. How tiring it is to read. The vulgarity is the realm of elegance. To put it bluntly, you really can't reach it, so why bother to be so tired??... Why don't you just describe it in vain... Keeping a running account is smoother than yours... This book, I guess it's just like those stream-of-consciousness books, divided into two categories: "I think I understand it" and "What's this about?"... To summarize... The routines are old-fashioned, the plot is handled too hard, the characters are not pleasing to the eye, the IQs of the protagonists fluctuate depending on the plot, and the writing is semi-skilled and youthful... Above... Ps. In the book reviews of this kind of reality-conscious dark novels... There will always be some fans who say, "If you have the ability, write it yourself", "If you don't want to read it, go away, BB"... But if you ask them to say what you have seen, they can't say anything... (Dog head, funny, wink)

It's so poisonous. Forgive me that I can't stand it anymore.

In the first chapter, she was a chaste and fierce woman, but in the next chapter, she lets people sleep with her wherever she wants, and her character is completely ruined and she is still watching JB

It's my first time writing, and it's good to write like this. There's no big problem with the writing... But can it escape from this bloody... Sensational... Plot of Qiong Yao's idol drama? To be honest, no reader with any advanced reading skills will like this kind of article, and even if you read it, it is just to pass the time... Subscription is impossible! If you want to write it well, I think it should be closer to life, and the protagonist should be more normal... No harem, just struggle to get the upper hand, be more real... What can impress us readers who love urban literature the most are things that make them feel the same way, or in other words, feel that they are around them. Not this, the story of a cold daughter with a double surname and a Phoenix man... This is no different from the male version of a domineering president falling in love with me...

Chapter 153, if you haven't been poisoned by this point, then you are the strongest Shennong. The style in the early stage was okay, but now the plot has completely turned into a romance novel. Either it is related to this woman, or it is related to another woman. Moreover, the protagonist is still wise and does not have any behavior that a man should do. I don't know if the author who created the protagonist is such a person in reality, so I have nothing to say.

I left. I came back. I don't feel happy if I don't spray it. What are you writing? I'm kicking here and there. I'm writing whatever comes to my mind. I'm trying to force my wits down. I thought my ability to accept it was pretty good. I'm sorry, but I'm a loser. The copyright is messed up. I don't register the copyright for the songs I write. It's enough to suffer a loss once or twice. How many times in a row do you treat everyone as a fool?

There are probably the following types of books that I have read that are as poisonous as this one! 1. It was written that the protagonist fell in love and then forgave him. 2. The protagonist's childhood sweetheart was someone else's mistress, and the protagonist took over after having enough fun. 3. The protagonist is repeatedly tricked by his so-called friends, and treats them as brothers, wishing that women would be divided into half. 4. Why give away a woman, give away a company, give someone a slap in the face and not take revenge! Well, that's right, adding up all the above, the toxicity is probably comparable to that of this book!

However, after reading Chapter 10, I still feel more and more disgusted. The protagonist has been playing on the mobile phone for several days and has not discovered the time travel.

I couldn't hold it in any longer and died of poison. Actually, this type is okay. I've seen similar ones before, but they weren't so vicious. To be honest, the protagonist here has very little emotional intelligence. The author's writing skills are really getting worse as he writes. There are also many repeated chapters, the names change from time to time, and there are all kinds of vicious things written about the dark side in it, but the people in it are really so brainless. . Can't bear it anymore

The writing is good, the typos should be nitpicked. I see that there are no obstacles anyway, but it is true that the protagonist's IQ is zero in some aspects. After being forcibly set below the normal IQ, he becomes very smart at some point. To be honest, I have been reading it with my heart. This novel is not suitable for today's cool novels. The paper is a better way out. In addition, the protagonist is afraid that the content of Sanlu milk powder exceeds the standard. Sometimes, it is simply IQ reduction. Having said this, the change in writing style of the next book may give you motivation to read on.

I've read less than twenty chapters, and I can't stand it any longer. I'd like to give this song to the author, bye bye.

The cover is green light, tsk tsk tsk, do you understand?

Sorry, I refuse. The author of this book has a good idea, but unfortunately the three golden chapters are not a joke. In Chapter 13, the author realized that it was suspected of time travel? So Chapter 13 was very interesting. It's a pity that someone took off their shoes and put their feet on the opposite seat on the plane.

I just started reading it, and after reading the first 12 chapters, the author's book is still somewhat attractive to me, but the pig's feet are silly at the beginning. At least after arriving at the police station, I should have realized that it is not a different world. I hope that I can focus on describing the inner world of Pig's Feet later when I realize that it is not the same world. The pretending to be crazy and acting stupid in the previous part is just a refusal to accept the reality. I feel that this is very touching.

This book is extremely poisonous ☠️, even 11-year-olds can't survive it, so read it with caution

This book is indeed a bit discouraging. I think it will be better after seeing it. When I read Chapter 10, I felt so angry that I couldn't stand it. The protagonist was really miserable as the scapegoat.

Frustrated... I feel so brainless.

I haven't seen such a vicious novel in a long time. You still have to change your account to scold me. If you don't say too much, it's a waste of time. You can figure it out yourself.

Is this protagonist ***? After reading three chapters, I immediately changed the book to wash my eyes.

Come on, author. In the future, when writing novels, you should confirm the outline and don't have multiple versions of a chapter, which can easily confuse people. That is not a side story.

I just read the first few chapters and I have to complain, is this protagonist Dubby? The money is different, is it still the same world? ? ? I can't even react to this, I can't stand it anymore!

It's really poisonous. The protagonist may be a retarded person. After reading more than ten chapters, I felt that I couldn't stand it anymore. I decided to read the book reviews, and then I couldn't stop it.

It felt like it was still watchable at the beginning. The protagonist traveled through time, but then he didn't know it. He thought that others had admitted their mistake. He ran to the hospital and was beaten up. It was still watchable here. Although it was a bit poisonous, when he woke up, he didn't realize that he had traveled through time. He just thought that they had admitted their mistake. This was too much. Then it became more and more poisonous, almost becoming poisonous. . . It hurts the eyes.

The author must have been hacked, it's poisonous. But how can there be so many "great masters" in the book review section who say it is so serious. It is even more unintelligent that the heroine falls in love with the hero just after divorce. Habits are a terrible thing, and so is possessiveness. After three years of getting along and the male protagonist's silent dedication, it would be nonsense to say that you don't feel like a passerby after the divorce. Is it poisonous to recite poetry at a press conference? Is your answer to the reporter's question correct? What I personally find more difficult to accept is the plot of renting a house... A co-tenant whom I don't know hacks you and hits you for no reason, but in the blink of an eye he acts like a normal person and isn't angry at all? Any normal person would be so angry that he would explode. What's more, the male protagonist is a star. Public relations, prosecution, and relocation are normal.

I just finished reading all the chapters of the update. I personally feel that the character design of the protagonist is basically the same. In this case, it is best not to let the protagonist have an affair with other women, because the entire Internet is hacking the protagonist, and he is hacked into a scumbag. At this time, there are two ways, one is to quickly clean up, and the other is to let the protagonist The character continues to walk alone, and when the truth is revealed, he will gain the guilt of the people who eat melons. If he chooses the second path, he cannot let the protagonist have a harem or have an affair with some women who come over and become a scumbag. The protagonist needs to maintain this faint sense of melancholy, loneliness, and this is the situation.

I have been a man for two generations. I still want to give away my underwear when I see a beautiful woman. I am also drunk. A quasi-diva manager is still like Xiaobai. Dear, you really have the "power" to reach the gods! Admire admire

Even if there are a lot of songs, no one would give 5,000 to a stranger for five songs, and one song is okay as a gift. This is too low-priced, extremely toxic, and forced to be embarrassing.

I can't stand it anymore. I got to chapter 16. The chapters are poisonous and I can't explain anything clearly. I feel that the protagonist's IQ is lower than a retard.

I just wanted to know what the author was thinking. He said that Ouyang Mingyue was secretly married to his brother, his ex-wife, Yang Yunruo, and Mo Yan. I don't know if it was plagiarism or what.