Traveling Across Planes and Realms

The plot was well received! But the details and writing... Need to be improved

I thought I had developed the Poison Fruit to its highest state, but I didn't expect it to be poisoned to death. Are you writing this novel with your feet? A mere 80,000-year-old spirit beast dared to hunt down Xiao Wu in the Star Forest? You probably haven't read Little Douluo before. Even if a hundred-thousand-year-old soul beast comes, he still has to weigh whether he can beat the Azure Bull Python and the Titan Giant Ape.

Well, how can I put it this way, I had high expectations for this book, but after reading Chapter 7, I really couldn't stand it. The plot is lacking, the writing is empty, the characters are not vivid enough, and logic is still needed and cannot be discarded. I don't know if there will be any improvements in the future. If there are any changes, I hope someone can reply to me later. I still hope to give some support to new authors.

It's all a mess, the plot is perfunctory and haphazard, the novel is written like a brief summary of its content, and it's all inexplicable.

Holy shit. This book is completely incomprehensible, it's a mess and it's perfunctory.

Is this a Level 4 author? ? I know why Qidian was severely beaten

The author should be a newcomer, but the plot is a bit messy, the writing is not good, the words are inappropriate, Duan Yu is unclear and the character is uncertain, and why can the protagonist adapt to the life of killing so quickly? Most people can't adapt, right? I advise authors to learn from the older generation of authors and see how they describe a character.

Isn't Xiao Wu and the protagonist a match made in heaven? What the hell is the Peerless Tang Sect! ? ?

I read a lot of comments about poison, so I took a look. Anyway, you can write better than me, come on, 😊😊

The humor is so bad, Douluo is so messed up that he becomes addicted after just three chapters.

The plot feels messy😵

I don't believe this book is poisonous. I will go and check it out before I come back to talk to you about my feelings. The poor way is gone.

What to say about this book? It feels like the author is doing it purely for his own pleasure. There are many problems with this book. For example, the location problem in Douluo Continent is that Xiao Wu's home is in the chaotic area of ​​the Star Forest, and it is impossible for Xiao Wu to cross the sky, the green bull python Daming, and the Titan ape. Even if they are not there, the protagonist can come out of the forest with just a handful of Barrett? That is one of the three major soul beast settlements in Douluo Continent. That's inside the primeval forest. The terrain is complex and soul beasts roam everywhere, my friend! You just traveled through time, could it be said that you were originally the 'strongest special forces soldier in urban literature'? Kill decisively, and no one can deliberately provoke you. Even if someone asks you for money to buy something, you still want to chop off a hawker's hand? There is also the characterization of Xiao Wu. Kao, I don't even know where to start! ! Let's take a look at Xiao Wu's setting first. Xiao Wu's real body, the Soft-bone Charming Rabbit, has a hundred thousand year soul that transforms into a human being. Living in the Great Star Forest, she is accompanied by the Azure Bull Python Da Ming and the Titan Giant Ape Er Ming, whom she recognizes as siblings. (Note: They are all 100,000-year-old soul beasts) So it's impossible for them to be absent when Xiao Wu transforms into a human! ! ! Don't tell me that maybe they weren't there for some reason, go and see how Xiao Wu's mother died! Moreover, Xiao Wu should have transformed after her mother died, and she and Da Ming Er Ming went to the Lake of Life in the center of the Star Forest to transform. The most important thing is that the character setting of Xiao Wu in this book is terrible! ! ! The character setting of Xiao Wu in this book is terrible! ! ! The character setting of Xiao Wu in this book is terrible! ! ! I said it three times! ! I don't want to write any more comments. Too poisonous! ! ! ! I made it to chapter eleven of this book, and I skipped two chapters. I won't say much more about the plot when the protagonist enters the academy. That's it (╯°Д°)╯ /(.□ . \)

Rewind one chapter instantly 💀

This book is extremely toxic. The plot is in the advanced stage of chuunibyou.

I shouldn't read this book, it's extremely poisonous

Dear Taoist friends, this book is so poisonous that poor Taoists will die from poisoning. Fellow Taoists, please be careful.

Dear fellow Taoists, this book is poisonous, and the poor Taoist has been poisoned to death. Please be careful when reading this book.

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So poisonous😓╰|･ิД･ิ |Pretty guy passing by

After reading the third chapter, I felt that I couldn't stand it anymore and I felt disgusting.

After reading the introduction, I didn't want to watch it when I saw that I became the murderer behind the scenes.