Pirate's Desperate Revenge

It's a bit messy! But he didn't embrace the pirate's thigh, and he had a very upright outlook! Pirates are not good birds at all, including Whitebeard! There are definitely many people who died in his hands! I think the main character should go to the navy! Because there will be the most reasonable and advanced teaching anywhere! You can get the power of revenge! I also hope that the protagonist can be over three meters tall! It's best to be a general!

Whitebeard still takes good care of the people in his sea area. , Refer to Fishman Island. . He is not an aunt. Whitebeard is quite moral.

The three views are correct. How can Whitebeard be a Rocks crew member without blood in his hands, and Whitebeard is an extremely protective person. You will be like a dog opposite him. Kaido is also very good to those who have the ability. Big Mom relies entirely on blood and annexation, the red-haired original team + cannon fodder.

The idea is good, but the content is not.

Why are your punctuation marks so messed up?

It is recommended to learn more about writing techniques. It would be a pity for good ideas not to be supported by writing. In addition, Whitebeard was already over 70 years old when he appeared. The way to maintain his territory was to collect his godsons, each of whom led a pirate group. The income from the territory is taxation and business. Within the territory, the Whitebeard Pirates are the police and army that maintain peace. Bordering it is the territory of other four emperors, so there will be friction and fighting. The reputation of being the strongest in the world is enough to scare most pirates. Without a master of the same level, Whitebeard will not take action himself. Judging from the plot of the original work, the elderly White Beard is a typical stability-maintenance faction. If his bottom line is not stimulated, he will not be aggressive. I hope the author will do more homework.

Create a discussion. If you have a favorite character in One Piece , please tell me about it. I will ask him to appear earlier.

I can't see the protagonist feeling angry

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There is no time travel or rebirth, so why not watch the original One Piece?

This layout is so tiring to read. The punctuation marks of characters' speeches are still appearing and disappearing. It takes me a minute to break up sentences after reading a chapter. . . . It's simply uncomfortable

Is this in first person or third person? It looks like writing a composition.