Can't Finish Practicing the Exercises

As an old bookworm, I came across this book by chance, and there are still some things I want to say. First of all, the overall reading experience of this book is quite good, and it reads very smoothly. There are really not many authors who can do this well. Many new authors only do it well in the second or even third book Then the author's settings made me feel like I was in front of my eyes. It is bright, highly scalable, can be spread over a wide area, and the background setting is also very grand, which is conducive to later development I have mentioned two points that I think are very good. I will talk about what I personally think is insufficient. The master made a mistake 1. Most novels in which the protagonist is set behind the scenes, and then the supporting characters unfold the plot have been thrown into the street. It has nothing to do with the writing style and plot. Not big. The most important thing is that this writing method is quite weak in terms of popularity accumulation, and the accumulation speed is too slow. After all, people are too impetuous nowadays. Unless it is an author with a certain fan base, success can only depend on luck 2. Too lengthy branch plot, there is no need to elaborate on this 3. Too little fun, personally I think coolness is a must. Take the game as an example. The mission system gives you small goals and allows you to complete them one by one to stimulate your motivation to continue playing until you are completely absorbed in the game. This is closer to the concept of coolness, so the upgrading flow is rampant at the starting point Finally, I wish the author success 🙏🙏

This book is considered a masterpiece now. It depends on the author's control and not to imitate some authors who are too complacent and stable. Then it will be fine. I also hope that the author will sign the contract as soon as possible and put it on the shelves as soon as possible! Come on!

What a resume, what a boring plot! Author, you are so good!

There is no logic in the story. It feels like the author is deliberately setting up a foreshadowing, but the pretense fails! The main plot of this book should be that the protagonist enters another world, but instead it becomes something like the Liaozhai Heroes Meeting, where Taoists and demons are eliminated and they fight in a big league! In short, the writing style is good, but it is too messy and the story is too messy!

I was attracted by the first two chapters, but after reading it, I felt confused.

I just read the introduction and it seems good, now let's start reading the content!

The new world of Del Continent was instantly confused. Has the protagonist been changed? What is the Immortal Sect like now? ? What about the atmosphere of raising a sign to soar across the world? ? It's so confusing when you write it like this. Since the top level of the protagonist's power is already on the same level as the gods, why don't you write it smaller? Let's make a bigger layout. Although I am a reader and shouldn't point fingers, I sincerely advise you to give up.

Let me see how many readers there are!

To be honest, although I don't know how well the main text is written, after all, everyone's writing style is different, and most of them are immature, but these two settings really surprised me. I have read a lot of infinite novels, fan comics, and system novels, but these two settings in this book are the only ones that are really scary and inspired me a lot. Thank you! ! !

This post is specifically used to collect names for supporting roles. If you have elements you want to see, you can also mention them!

Let's quickly restore the protagonist's memory before reincarnation! !

This book continues to be serialized in Zongheng and has been renamed "Searching for the Endless World Sea". Friends who are interested are welcome to read it.

After reading more than ten chapters, I still don't understand what is being expressed.

The protagonist appears awesome, but then just goes with the flow, without a prominent theme, and it leaves a question mark on his forehead!

After reading more than a dozen chapters, the main line is not clear, I have no sense of involvement, and I am very tired. The novel is for leisure, and few people stick to it.

The content does not match the title of the book. The title emphasizes the many exercises, but the content is all about telling stories, and it forcibly adds a conspiracy flavor. It digs so many holes and is very annoying.

I haven't recovered my memory after reading Chapter 20, so I say goodbye

How many people have forgotten the name of the protagonist? (You are not allowed to look in front)

The beginning is quite exciting, what happens next 😰

The protagonist died as soon as he appeared on the scene. In my opinion, amnesia is equivalent to death. What is the most important thing for a person? Apart from the body and soul, it is the will. The important component of the will is memory. Without memory, the protagonist is still the protagonist? !

The setting is hidden too deeply. The first volume is a bad book, and the second volume is the author restarting a novel. Why do you want to put them together? Author, it would be great to just restart a novel!

The group drama is a mess, with no sense of the protagonist's presence

What's the old monk's name? Missed something?

What the hell? ? ? Can't read……? ? ? ? Time travel and amnesia... Is it too fake? ? ? With the help of the system... With Daozang... He became a god instantly... Ah? ? ? He actually lost his memory... Huh? ? ? ? Time travel... It's possible for the protagonist who has become a strong person! ! Amnesia... It's unreasonable for a strong-level existence... Huh? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?

Why don't you finish the book here first? Is it okay to be a little moral?

In fact, I'm really wondering why this book hasn't been signed yet. _(:з∠)_I feel like I'm being targeted.

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I'm ashamed to say that I've started a new book. I plan to rewrite the story of the first book, so my brothers can support me~

Uh () = Finished the book?

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