Marvel's the Strongest Man on Earth

I'm so cruel, killed at such a young age

Break up the sentences. Pay attention to the breaks in the sentences, the author. It's okay to add a few more punctuation marks!

Write well, write well

Was the system designed by SHIELD? The U. S. Imperial government and S. H. I. E. L. D. Don't care about things that you have to worry about. I just want to ask, what the hell are you doing?

If it's okay to put the plot on the shelves, you can order it all

Really, the author shouldn't write it anymore, the eunuch can forget it. It takes two days and one chapter to squeeze out the toothpaste, which is so painful.

I feel that the protagonist's compulsory education in his previous life taught him knowledge but not how to be a human being. After watching it for a long time, I didn't mean to ask for a virgin, but he didn't have the most basic human nature. If there is no system, he is a waste. If he has a system, he is a waste.

Forget it -_-||Give it up, I'm thirty now, I guess this book won't be finished by the time I get on the iron plate and into the box 😡😡😡

(((((((((((っ･ω･))っ(σ｀･ω･´)σ Take off!

This filter can be darkened a bit, just like the black tone of DC. Also, it's better to write less adjectives like pretentiousness, it feels very inappropriate. Pig's Knuckle is a martial artist who has gained his skills through hard training. From what I have seen so far, the training in the Kame Sennin dungeon is too weak, and when it comes to the super-killing girl, the dialogue and behavioral descriptions give me a very inconsistent feeling, like suddenly gaining huge power, but the spirit is not up to par. A martial artist is as motionless as a mountain, but one hair can move his whole body. As fast as wind, as swift as fire, and as moving as thunder.

You are the first one to make fun of me in such a disgusting way. If you don't agree with me, I'll say goodbye.

It's over when Piccolo dies, so why force him to become stronger! What a shocking change!

Write well, write well. Only successful writing can succeed. Come on. At present, the chapters are not enough to read, but the writing is not bad. I hope it will continue. Exceptions and common sense cannot make mistakes. Book friends from Qidian like to find comments about common sense.

Why not just wish for all the memories of Sun Wukong's martial arts, no need for anything else, just about martial arts.