Super Magician

It's a low-intellectual novel that's boring and depressing to read. The world-building is quite interesting, but it's a pity.

I've read dozens of chapters and it's okay. But I feel like there are too many loopholes, so I probably don't have an outline, so just write whatever comes to mind. Although the idea is good, I feel like I am gradually losing interest 😅

Emmmmmmm, how should I put it, I have read more than ten chapters, and these things are really a bit embarrassing, especially the one with Shen Yue. It feels very watery, and the writing is not very substantial. Some parts are like moaning, as if the word count is watery, a bit scattered, and there is another problem. After saving more than 500 white crystal coins for more than ten years, his classmate just took out a thousand. This, without looking at the back, I don't know how rich he is. . . .

Uh-huh, I was blown away by the red envelope. After reading the first few chapters, I feel that if the author has time, he could revise it appropriately. It's a bit awkward. It seems that some of the words are a bit immature, and it feels like he is talking to himself. I'm not sure about the third golden chapter. Let's read the inside of this chapter. I don't know yet how the rest of it will go, but the previous words will lose some readers.

After reading a few chapters, I felt a strong sense of novice literature.

I saw the author entering the palace last night and he was bleeding. He must have been salted.

The author's writing is qualified, and it can be seen that he has a solid foundation in Chinese language, but his expressions are a bit taken for granted. I suggest the author read more other people's novels. I feel that the content you write is suitable for me, but not for readers. Many details are not explained clearly. I have read almost 100 chapters. The plot is very good, but it is very confusing. Sometimes I think I am not serious about reading the book, so I always turn back and find that you really have not explained it. I suggest the author explain some settings clearly first, otherwise the reader will be really tired.

In fact, the protagonist can work at the exchange office and exchange for the skill book after the upgrade is satisfactory. Anyway, no one else can find the skill upgrade book, so you can save so many points.

I think it would be better for the author not to name every character who appears, because they can't remember them at all or they are killed before they can remember them.

Come to pay New Year greetings on the fourth day of the Lunar New Year, and I will be filled with thoughts and smiles!

Looking forward to releasing the six Goblin Kings tonight. The expressions of those women 😏

The amount of updates in Chapter 4 still seems unsatisfactory.

This hyperactive blood vessel decreases by one level during the day and is too hyperactive.

I just saw Pigfoot and Emily exploring the ruins. It feels like the author is forcibly suppressing the IQ of the protagonist and supporting characters. If you are in a small village, and the villagers are ignorant and do not have good information, just think that Pig's Feet and Qin Xueer have weird names. After all, the vice president of Crescent College is a gold medal, but he has no idea about the name of pig's feet?

In fact, the protagonist should hide his talent. Not only cannot you tell your relatives directly and indirectly, but the items to be improved by the upgrading technique must also be given to others or relatives in a reasonable and small amount. In particular, you cannot give out the proposed items to your relatives at each level, because this will cause your relatives to stand out more and be more easily exposed. It's not that you can't express your talent to your relatives, but that you can't let your relatives bear this talent. Now that the protagonist is exposed like this, he will either not be discovered and grow up to be able to bear this talent, or he will be exposed but solve it in time, or he will be exposed and harm his relatives but be solved fortunately, or he will be protected by a strong person or powerful force, or his talent will be limited in the later stage, such as once a month, once a year, or once every ten years. In summary, the results of exposure may lead to hidden dangers, and exposure is better than hiding. Gou's role is still very great, at least it will not attract the prying eyes of the strong. The above is purely a complaint. The author can just take a look at it. The same applies to others. It will not affect the author's writing.

Generally speaking, there is no need to read Xiaobaiwen (not in a derogatory sense) for bookworms and the like. It is very boring. Middle school and high school students may still find it interesting after reading it. The names are quite stupid It has a good idea, but it is a cliché plot and a slightly contradictory setting. It is not beyond the scope of Xiaobaiwen. The writing style is also average, at the level of high school students.

God's favored ones are in danger, it turns out to be wrong common sense... This wave of operations, 666666

Is the protagonist the chosen one from the Aqua Blue Star or the chosen one from the Heavenly Dream Star? It was said earlier that the portal in the brain of the chosen one from the Aqua Blue Star can be teleported to the Azure Star. The portal from the chosen one from the Sky Dream Star can be teleported to the Heavenly Dream Star. How come in the article, the portal in the brain of the chosen one from the Aqua Blue Star can be teleported to the Sky Dream Star?

Add Bronze Level Upgrading Technique to the book's shelf progress, complete the book's shelf progress by +4, +4, and be promoted to the next level

Although it is possible to cross-travel, then there are problems, such as language problems and accent problems. Secondly, when you get to that place, if others doubt you and ask about your hometown, if you ask questions and don't know anything, then you will be in trouble.

The name of Tianmengxing is from the Western Middle Ages. It would be a shame on the part of the author not to reveal your Eastern name.

Being able to lift others up is a huge poison point

Why are the recommendations given to me all eunuchs or unfinished ones? Are the recommendations made by people who bought them? They are all eunuchs and they still forcefully recommend them. I'm convinced.

This is a mage, don't mistake him for a warlock.

It would be great if the author releases something more sometime 😃

Strongly request the author to update around 9 o'clock. . . I feel uncomfortable catching up on updates every day at 12 o'clock

As a warrior, when fighting against a Taoist priest who can summon and increase blood, what comes to mind is to attack the summoned beast against the opponent's magic? I have to say this is a bit exaggerated. Everyone knows that when PKing with a Summoner, one must go for the Summoner.

What kind of combat system is this? You can use a dagger to cut off the warlock's fireball😅😅

Warlocks are useless on Aquamarine. Not much better than a chicken. It looks boring.

All women are written as unreasonable savages by the protagonist, which is disgusting