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Can you tolerate all kinds of targeting during the game and malicious erasure of points after the game? Well, you endured it for the bonus, and then you went out and said a few words to your people and then left? What kind of operation is this? Is the protagonist such a softie? Do you still have a good impression of others?
The protagonist always likes to complain to himself
Maybe the author thought it was very humorous, but I really couldn't stand it, it felt like a drama. Those super old memes are so embarrassing to write.
The writing is good, and the details are very detailed, so it feels a bit slow, but if you accept this rhythm, there are actually no bugs, which is quite rare. Come on
It is undeniable that the writing is very good, but I was poisoned. I thank the author for his hard work in writing a book for readers, but he was ridiculed and had to go to try out with other people's teams. I felt very uncomfortable when I saw this kind of humiliation. Maybe I am too young and don't know how to tolerate it! But there are too many such things in reality. Reading novels is just for entertainment. You... Goodbye!
Let's give up for a while. As of now, I personally don't think there are any bugs in this book. But personally I think one of the biggest shortcomings is that it's not fun at all! The twists and turns you wrote about the game were right but you made the supporting characters unlucky! Then arrange for the protagonist to recover some losses, so that we will feel more comfortable watching. But how do you write it, all kinds of abuse, all kinds of unexpected things, all kinds of decision-making mistakes? Although the game is like this, you can't give readers a sense of satisfaction, and they will feel frustrated and don't want to read it! Another point is that it is best to arrange for them to eat chicken more times, just like the anchors on the live broadcast platform. If a technical anchor cannot eat chicken once a day and kill several people, no one will definitely watch. The above are all my own opinions. If you are not convinced, you can hit me! !
In fact, it's not bad. The plot is quite logical, and it feels very immersive. However, it will dissuade some passers-by who rarely watch the game, but it is quite attractive to senior game audiences.
Just read the previous article and give me some suggestions.
First of all, I saw around chapter 70, which is the end of the first offline game. There are a lot of flaws. First, this is an Internet cafe game. You said that there was a shady team to maliciously form a team to prevent the protagonist from winning the championship. I can accept it. As a result, the protagonist defeated the villain and won the championship. It was great. A professional coach came out and said that the protagonist used bugs and I wanted to be fair. You can't win the championship. You also invited the protagonist to try out? ? Then where were you when others maliciously formed a team? Where is the justice? Don't tell me you didn't see it? Secondly, the protagonist of the trial actually went there, was sprayed like a dog, and tortured like a dog. He admired her very much, and even wanted to join after seeing the meaning. Then why did you live broadcast against the sniper god Zhou Lili before, and show off your anti-N non-human marksmanship? Thirdly, if you want to write like this, it's okay, but then you don't write about the system, just write that the protagonist is a talented ordinary person who grows up through failure, because writing about the system almost means that you have to write a cool article, but as a result, you write about the system and you write unhappy. Isn't this making things difficult for me, Fat Tiger?
It's a good chicken-eating article, but why do I feel like no one is reading it?
Keep at it! There are fewer and fewer articles about eating chicken.
Have you forgotten the system? I've only read chapter 180. There must be at least 40 or 50 chapters where no system appears.
Let's talk about this novel. It lacks a kind of excitement. I have written hundreds of pages and it's all frustration. Who wants to read this? The reality is already difficult enough, but reading a novel like yours is depressing? The writing is very real and has a certain depth. If you want to write such a profound novel, why not write serious literature?
I think the writing is very good (●°u°●)" It would be a pity if you were dissuaded by the comments below. Unfortunately, the writing is really good. Popular science chicken professional team
Very nice, realistic, better than any other 98k
Where did that golden finger go?
The content is okay, but the name is too persuasive.
I just made a full order and am ranked 16th on the fan list. Only 16 people have fully ordered? ? ? Does the author rely on perfect attendance😰
Why is there no recommendation for such a good chicken novel? I went to the category section and found it myself. By the time I found this novel, more than 700 chapters had been updated.