Drunk Among the Flowers on South Lane

Dear friends: This novel will come to an end today. This book is an attempt that I forced myself to make. Not to mention the results, at least the small goal I set for myself was accomplished. I breathed a sigh of relief and a sigh of relief. I saw that many readers and friends had a strong sense of immersion during the reading process and imagined a lot of follow-up. I felt particularly ashamed... 😥 Because this part of mine seemed so messy compared to the ideas in your minds, I set a new goal for myself. You may have guessed why I say this. Many of the foreshadowings have not yet been explained, and many people have only appeared in a hurry... Yes! This book is not over yet, there is a follow-up waiting for you. Will you still wait for my slow updates and tolerate my typos and minor bugs like now? Anyway, this part has come to an end. The above are some of the things I want to say from my heart. Thank you for your company in the book review area. I love you. Next, please walk side by side! The second part will also be updated every Monday, Wednesday and Friday! 😊

The entire novel has been published more than half way, and to be honest, I don't know what to say. Apart from being excited, the only thing left in my heart is gratitude. I have been updating here for nearly a month. I am very happy to receive the support and encouragement from so many book friends. It also increases my motivation to continue writing. In addition, many friends said that the progress is too slow. In fact, the story itself is either too ups and downs or too light. But you are right. If the story is too thin, it does not seem to be sustainable. I will refer to your opinions. Currently, the second part of "Kan Hua Nan Mo Zui" is being created. The second part will extend the story and the subsequent content will be more exciting. Thank you for your support and follow-up updates~ I will work hard! 😊 (PS: Continuously updated every Monday, Wednesday and Friday! ✌️)

The writing is very good, and if the current development continues, it will definitely be a good book, but it is a pity that this kind of book is destined not to be a big seller... A group of people who read online novels cannot appreciate this kind of article.

This book is a serious book, if you want to watch YY sex or stallion harem sex, please go away!

Try submitting to magazines. It is undeniable that the writing is very good, but the online article website is really not suitable for this book. The online articles are just fast food slaps in the face, and many people can't calm down to read it. But I still hope it will get better and better.

To be honest, this book doesn't look very good at first glance. It gives you no sense of immersion at all. It was created entirely for the sake of creation. Simply put, it has no atmosphere of real life. But from another aspect, art comes from life and is higher than life. Novels are to magnify and exaggerate things in life in an artistic way to attract readers. From this point of view, the author has very good control. At least I was "fallen". I was picky and watched intently. And when you calm down and read this book carefully, you will find the advantages of this book. Every tiny movement and look in the book's characters are filled with expressions of love, which is really rare. They are also very good at using the surrounding environment to set off this expression of love, as if everything around them grows for love. I don't read much romance novels, nor have I written any novels of this type, so I won't comment too much on the story structure and plot settings of this book. I'll just make a few comments on the author's description of the characters and time. I don't think I'll be offended if it's not right. First of all, there are the characters. Strictly speaking, this book is not an online novel. Even physical romance novels sold on the market may not be so attractive. The most attractive thing is actually the portrayal of the characters. There are not many characters in the novel. After roughly reading nine chapters, I went back to recall and wrote down Qin Zui, Song Yanfei, Nan Mo, Chen Xu, Qin Zui's mother Yuan Mouzhi, and Fu Mou from Qin Zui's company. The others cannot be said to be unimportant, but I didn't remember them. What readers can remember is often the main character of a book, so the author is describing these people. It must be more detailed, and the more detailed the better. The author has done a good job in this regard. The only shortcoming is that for Chen Xu and another classmate who works in the company, although they are not the protagonists, I believe that they will not disappear for a long time. What I feel now is that whenever something is going to happen, these two people will definitely appear first to give warnings, as if their existence is to give the protagonist a warning. Their characteristics and personalities are not sufficient. After all, they are also secondary characters. The author can at least give some face. Then there is the time. The author spends a lot of space describing Qin Zui's romantic time with Nan Mo in the past. The writing is beautiful, but the flaw is in the alternation between reality and the past. I personally think the distinction is very blurry. I have turned the page in at least two places and thought it was in the past. For example, in the second chapter where Chen Xu wakes up with a photo, I understand that the author wants to create a feeling that the protagonist is unknowingly falling into memories, and that the protagonist is lost in the past. But I tell you seriously that this is not good. If it is a TV series or a movie, it is a matter of one shot. But after all, this is not a TV, let alone a physical book, and it is an e-book. Few people who read online novels will look back to find the reason when they are confused. Most people will give up the book after this situation occurs again. After all, everyone mainly reads online novels to relax. Of course, if the author's ultimate goal is to publish a physical book, then it is another matter. Both praise and criticism come from the heart. Again, don't be offended!

The plot of watching the male protagonist and Nan Mo fall in love is really vivid and has a strong visual sense!

The evil people are talking about people like Fu Sheng. How could I start to think that others are not bad? Now that I have been ignored, a character who has always been ignored did something shocking, putting Qin Zui into a passive situation. However, Qin Zui wants to make a comeback but needs Nan Mo to step forward. This can be connected before and after. Wow, there is nothing wrong with it. It even deepens the connection between Qin Zui and Nan Mo once again. It seems that the author is planning to let Qin Zui and Nan Mo continue their relationship. Well, if it is this ending, I will be very happy to see it, and it is her biological mother. I can't write it as happy as I want! Seeing that Nan Mo was still living in the same environment as Qin Zui in the past two years, I felt sad. Qin Zui couldn't leave but got married. Although the marriage couldn't last now, he finally got out of the heart of broken love. Nan Mo seemed to have never changed, Qin Zui would always be The person she loves the most is still renting the same house and eating in the same restaurant as before. Apart from the fact that the male protagonist is no longer around, everything else remains the same. Such a woman makes people feel heartbroken just looking at her. I feel that even if she has a big reason to leave Qin Zui, it is worth it. It is really difficult for her to be forgiven and loved. Even if her work is in the dark or someone pokes her spine, it is not as heavy as her love for Qin Zui. If such a person is let down, I really want to scold her, and Song Yanfei is like that here Well, I really don't want to have anything to do with her. In terms of pain, Nan Mo should be in much more pain than Song Yanfei, but Nan Mo's heart is not twisted and Song Yanfei is no longer herself, so in my eyes she doesn't deserve sympathy, because she brought it all on herself!

Now I am only filled with sadness and unspeakable sadness. This is really the rhythm of trying to torture people to death. Now I would rather not know the truth why Nanmo broke up in the first place. Although I still don't know the specific reasons, but I am just one step away from knowing the truth. On the contrary, it makes people timid and dare not find out. The truth they are afraid of knowing is It's so sad. Just knowing the past of Nan Mo's graduation year makes me uncontrollably sad. There is also the child who died young. We were just a little bit closer to seeing him come into the world. Then it suddenly stopped, like a punishment from God. What did Nan Mo go through during that time? The death of her mother, the death of her child, the breakup of many years of love, is it too cruel to let a thin girl bear all the burden? If her life is hard, then at least she is happy, but it is obvious that all Nanmo's happiness has stopped after leaving Qin Zui, and she can only see her true smile when she meets Qin Zui, not to mention still doing such a job, Qin Zui's The words were like knives, cutting into Nan Mo's heart one by one. Even I felt the sadness, helplessness, and indifference in the end. That change of mood made me feel sorry for Nan Mo. Li Ziqin was really a special being. I always thought that he liked Nan Mo, so he gave Qin Zui false information to make Qin Zui give up. But now it seems that Li Ziqin Ziqin knew all the truth, but he helped Nanmo conceal all the facts. What was going on in the process that Qin Zui couldn't know. Sometimes when I think about it, I really hate Nanmo's strength. Since we are the ones we want to get married, we can just bear the difficulties together. We always leave each other for the good reasons of the other, but regret it after meeting each other. In other words, Nanmo is She was greedy for the good things Qin Zui brought her, so she asked Qin Zui to give her a ride on the pretense of being on the way. She wanted to get closer like this cautiously, but had no choice but to push away. Such Nanmo was filled with a desolate atmosphere. There were waves here, but Qin Zui obviously couldn't care about Song Yanfei's side. Problems arose at the same time between the predecessor and the current one. Where would Qin Zui go in the end? This is the main problem! As for Fu Sheng, I can only say that he has that kind of sensitivity and can detect problems very keenly, but I think he is too vigilant. Even if Qin Zui is really busy for Nan Mo, I can't conclude that Qin Zui is sorry for Song Yanfei. After all, the story of Qin Zui and Nan Mo is not It can be explained clearly in a simple sentence or two, not to mention that there is a lost life in the middle; but Fu Sheng's psychology is understandable. After all, he likes Song Yanfei and hopes that she will live a happy life, so it is understandable that he wants to find out some truth for her! The current situation gives me the feeling that it is a mess that keeps getting sorted out. It is the feeling of separation and separation that lingers in my heart. I cannot say whether a person is right or wrong. I can only explain it best with a sentence of fate. Of course, this situation is caused by the author himself. I have already predicted that there will be no more cruelty in the future, only the most cruelty waiting for me. My little heart needs to calm down and wait for the next round of excitement. Come on and update!

I feel like I'm about to get to the bottom of the truth. This is the rhythm of a love triangle. Go ahead, it's a big detour. The update is still so slow. Isn't this the rhythm that makes me anxious? Qin Zui and Song Yanfei are married, but there is still a place for Nan Mo in their hearts. Although Nan Mo doesn't know her current situation very well, Qin Zui's heart must remain unchanged. Song Yanfei likes Qin Zui, but Fu Sheng likes Song Yanfei. Can this relationship get any more messy? Moreover, Fu Sheng, who never went shopping, actually bought Song Yanfei a valuable birthday gift. When it comes to the person he likes, he is so unnatural. Why do I feel a little pitiful for Fu Sheng? Is the woman they are talking about Nan Mo? If so, has Nan Mo actually given birth to a child? This information is a bit big, I need to digest it carefully, so where is the child now? When will it appear? However, Nan Mo's style of grabbing orders is really admirable. Although it is a bit bold, I have to say that it really works, especially for men. I like the character of Nan Mo more and more. What has happened to such a rebellious woman in the past few years to make her look nothing like her before? I always feel that there is a sad story behind it. Should I prepare tissues? Please hurry up and update it. I can't get enough of it. I'm so impatient to wait!