Rebirth of Xuanyuan Martial Saint

I'm on vacation. I'll check out this book at home these days, and then I'll review it.

To be a martial artist, you must rely on rebirth, which is the beginning of tragedy and the beginning of compromise... If you don't like it, don't complain, I will continue my martial arts!

It's a long road ahead, thank you for your support! 🙏

In fact, I have watched martial arts for many years.

Today for some reason I suddenly remembered the movie "Swordsman" that I had read before, so I searched it, and unexpectedly found that the author was actually writing a new book. I couldn't help but sigh at the wonder of fate. Just like the surprise and wonder when I accidentally searched and found that the world was renewed again.

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Xiaoao 404 came out some time ago. It has been on my bookshelf for many years. From Eunuch to Dogtailed Diao and then to 404, I have been reluctant to delete it. I don't understand why. It's very melancholy. Last time you went back to the starting point to open a new book, I found that all your books were gone before I had time to read it. Today I clicked on the bookshelf and saw Xiaoao. I don't know what prompted me to click on it and found that it was back. I was happy and nostalgic. I saw that you have opened a new book and I made a post. I haven't read the new book yet, but I'll be back soon.

I have set you as the administrator, hehe, I wish you a happy coding, and I wish you a happy life. I am seventeen years old and in my prime. I hope more young people who admire martial arts can support you.

The story is great, and the general plot has gradually emerged. The key lies in the reader's reading ability and whether they can sniff out the clues in the article. Brother Dahai, how long did it take you to conceive the main plot of this story? Or is it accumulated over the past few years?

The chapter name of the latest chapter is wrong, sorry! I wanted to change it back but couldn't, luckily it didn't affect the text. If there are any errors in the text, please point them out in time.

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Millionaire, a wonderful story

The big sea, it's 2022, here's another chapter

Great work! Definitely collected it! Take your time and watch! Learn, learn! Come on! Welcome to visit us for advice!

Smiling proudly in the world, he came from martial arts. Martial Arts Data Storm Beast Fist.

There are not many people who write about traditional martial arts. I don't know how many people like it. Please continue to support it.

I added it to my favorites for the sake of the sweet and sour fish in the introduction. Good luck to the author.

I came here to read "Emperor's Ancient Pictures" and collected and subscribed to it. People should have dreams at any time, even in middle age. Together with Dada, never forget your original intention and forge ahead😊

The author's opening statement is very touching. Time has smoothed the edges of the frivolous young man, but it has not erased the dreams in his heart. He hopes not to forget his original intention, move forward with a heavy load, and finally achieve perfection. The general account of the association voted for it, author, come on!

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I really like the author so much~ Those who write martial arts must work hard! Let's bear it together!

Thank you for your vote and wish you good luck. It's not easy for everyone.

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Everyone please leave a comment👣, just like martial arts

The author's autobiography at the beginning moved me very much, so I took the time to read it slowly and carefully. The overall level of this article is a masterpiece. In terms of reading sense, there is a very smooth cross-narrative at the beginning. In fact, it is extremely difficult to fully express the grades, personalities, and levels of many characters in such a short period of time, but the first battle was indeed handled very well. It has the same purpose as the opening chapter of Giant. In terms of structure, it is indeed based on the spirit of traditional martial arts, the essence of sects, major national affairs, small personal relationships, and the dangers of the world, all of which are shown in pictures. The author keeps a good distance, and only in the white tiger's eagle's nest, in the sea of ​​fire and sword light, he has a kind of pride and expectation for the protagonist. A storm is coming today. Let me take your head and use it! The book is indeed very good, so it is very difficult to give an opinion. I have thought about it for a long time. If there is any shortcoming, it should be that the layout itself is too classic martial arts, which limits the freedom of the characters themselves. For example, let's take the Witch. Compared with Zhao Min, Mo Meizhi still lacks the charm of the Jiangnan girl. Hee hee, this is definitely related to the fact that the author is a straight man and a northerner. His writing style is thick and full of macho men. For example, let's take the Buddhist masters. The author really knows Jin Yong very well, but compared to the Buddhist masters in The Eight Parts of the Dragon, they are a bit different. As for the protagonist, his thick eyebrows and big eyes actually interfere with the peerless style of this champion. This kind of man is a man who carries a long knife and drinks strong alcohol. He is only suitable for a tutu tutu life. Therefore, what can be improved in this book is the richness and naturalness of the characters. They should have free personality and do not need to be defined by rough strokes or subject to narrative needs. Readers can naturally imagine. The author's writing habits smell like those in a large enterprise or system. This must be erased and the book returned to art and readers. True beauty needs no special description. For example, my sister Daiyu's appearance is not actually described in Dream of Red Mansions. Does she need it? I love each other~

I came here by invitation and devoured a few chapters without taking into account many details. Please don't be offended if my words are awkward. The author's writing style really impressed me. In the comment section of Mao Sui's self-recommended book list, the author's writing and stories are all very good. I clicked on them and looked, wow, this is an old author, no wonder. This kind of writing is naturally worthy of my careful appreciation, but strangely, after reading it for a while, I have more and more questions in my mind. For example, Yunzhong Hou was hunted for delivering a book, but he was considered a righteous man who sacrificed his life for righteousness. Why did he kill innocent people indiscriminately and snatch the secret books of the Demon Cult? If he is a villain himself, why should he wade into this muddy water? And why are you willing to hand over the scriptures? There may be answers to these later, such as this is a martial arts secret book or something, but I haven't seen it yet, so I won't care. Why did Yun Zhonghou hand the Buddhist scriptures to the protagonist and let him attract attention? If he really wants to deliver the sutra, he should let the protagonist leave with the sutra, while he or others draw attention; if he just wants to keep it to himself, then he should give the protagonist a book of whatever he wants or ask them to help attract attention and escape. Why can the two little guys in the protagonist group easily escape the pursuit of countless people? It would be fine if they were all salted fish, but there is only one elite member of the opposing demon sect who can trace the traces... (It is too bizarre to talk about ninjas) Why can a group of teenagers be more insidious and vicious than the people in the demon sect, and are proficient in hidden weapons and poisons, and the poison master was actually poisoned and (beaten) to death... Why are the six protagonists so good at fighting? He was clearly a fledgling boy, but he completely stole the limelight from Yunzhong Hou and his disciples. The immediate impression was that six genius boys were fighting against a bunch of novices in the righteous and evil ways, not to mention that Yunzhong Hou actually spent several hours teaching martial arts while on the run... All kinds of doubts lingered in my mind, and as I continued to read, they became more and more, and finally made me temporarily give up the idea of ​​continuing. I don't know if the author has explained it later, but I think I am not an atypical reader. The author is very good at using direct actions and dialogue to promote the plot, but there is a lack of explanation or foreshadowing in many places, which makes it very painful for readers who have lost track or are not on the radio... In the end, I still feel that it is a bit uninteresting to read. That's not to say it has to be humorous, but it's hard to have a plot design that makes people feel [interesting]. Of course, it's possible that I'm not asking for a clear explanation, and maybe there will be more exciting developments later, but I really feel that it's difficult to continue. In many places, such as when Yun Zhonghou spoke passionate words when returning the book, I thought it was a sign of being a little emotional. However, this section ended quickly, and instead gave me the feeling that Yun Zhonghou was pretending. But there was never any confirmation, which made me a little unsure about this role. I don't think the characters are black and white, they must all have a good side and a bad side, but that doesn't mean they are immune to emotional trends and always respond the most rationally. I really like the author's writing style, which is very martial arts-like, but the strange reading experience forced me to put this book down temporarily, sorry for that.

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