I Raise Zombies in the City

Emmmmm, I suddenly discovered a miracle today. The author's big cover actually reveals something! ! ! ! ! !

Four recommendations are given to you, let's develop well😄

Dear author, can you take me to fly when you return to earth?

Hold on, hold on, don't worry, we haven't even tested the waters yet! No one has written about this idea. If more people know about it, the data will definitely get better. With such a small number of words, most people will keep it. Although this book is too unsuitable for the author to be kept... This cycle seems a bit awkward 😢

Six recommendations are given to you. If you don't develop well, I will send you a blade.

Just hold on, right? Really well written. I feel like I'm getting something wrong. I've been a bookworm for six years. Leave a message.

Don't complain and work hard to update. Newcomers' early data is exploding. What are you thinking, unless a certain treasure makes a move?

This is the sharpest cover I have ever seen 👍

Bad review on the cover, but he actually has white underwear to wear, shouldn't he be completely naked?

The author has abandoned the book and won't update it anymore.

Why are you watching the protagonist ascend the throne?

I will give you 100 coins to strengthen your points.

I have to say that the author's creativity is good, but there is still a big gap between the writing style and the rhythm I'm not being shady. I'm just talking about the shortcomings Actually, the main line is a bit unclear and the power system is very confusing The timeline spans a bit long in the blink of an eye, like ten years. If it were written by an experienced author, these ten years would be a very good timeline In addition, the author may not have conceived his own plot when writing, so he thought of a little bit and wrote a little bit, or he had an idea but couldn't write it The protagonist was very failed in shaping the plot. The portrayal is sluggish, and the thinking is as big as the brain. We often say running accounts, which is the way of writing, what should I do today, what should I do tomorrow, what should I do the day after tomorrow, I eat eggs in the morning I also eat eggs in the afternoon But the author is what am I doing today? Well, and then it goes directly to a week later I always feel that the author is stuck, yes, it is stuck, there is no small plot branch The idea is good, I hope the author can see the shortcomings of his article