The Odd Number of Douluo

The author is so bad, Hermione has improved it to the point of disgusting her to death. Can you, a small author, change the book written by a master?

I originally thought the settings were okay, but when I saw that Wuhun was a mobile phone and computer, it crashed instantly and I lost all my expectations. Really.

Haha →_→, Wuhun is a mobile phone and a computer, so I can barely tolerate it. After all, the writing is okay, but, haha ​​→_→, the principal is Dumbledore, and the heroine is Hermione, haha ​​→_→, try your best, this novel will be destroyed by you sooner or later.

Well, I personally think the idea of ​​martial arts is pretty good, but the soul skills have nothing to do with mobile phones and computers. I feel like this is far-fetched. For mobile phones and computers, I can't think of attack skills. If the protagonist can be written as an auxiliary type, such as long-distance communication skills. Of course it's just my feeling

It's better to read the original work and just watch the ending. You don't need to read the previous ones.

Not interesting. So many fan fiction novels all revolve around Tang San. Forget about surrounding it. At least he stole the heroine. Wuhun Palace must win! Long live Bibi Dong!

Any sidekick in Douluo is more beautiful than Hermione

Although the book is finished, I still want to say something Soul Skill: Telephone Card Make a phone card and attach the card to any object to make calls 😆

The writing is okay, the plot is pretty good, not to mention the updates. But the author has never thought about why Mao's grades are so bad. I don't know what to think. There are so many female supporting characters in Douluo who are single and have quite a lot of roles. However, getting an original heroine is a taboo for fans. Originally, Douluo has an extra protagonist, which is already difficult to grasp. It is also difficult to find an original heroine. , There are only so many scenes in total, and adding an extra protagonist requires a relatively large space to describe it. It is not something that the author can simply write about. In writing like this, in addition to setting the heroine, there is no strong supporting role in the character creation, and the plot of running with the team is like a doll, with no sense of existence.

The protagonist's character is not likeable, not like an adult, too childish. He is a cultivator, I am not lazy, I don't care if I have a soul ring, I just absorb it. And the author also opened a bug that makes the body invincible. In the Douluo world, beating the soul beast with your fist is also drunk.

How to develop, use photos to seal your enemies, or use flash to blind your eyes, I can't even make it up.

The eighth soul skill - the user you dialed has shut down, please try again later,,, sorry... Let someone punch the cotton, it can't hurt you,,,,, the ninth soul skill - your number is in arrears (stopped), please pay in time. . . . Drain other people's soul power😁😁😁😁😁

If you don't dismantle the cp, what kind of fanfic can you write?

I think you can use your mobile phone's spirit as a summoner and transform into Shura armor

I have an idea. Wuhun is a mobile phone. The first soul skill is game sharing, which can produce multiple signals. The receiver is stimulated with vitality and can draw a mental space. People with signal receivers can enter this space to simulate combat. The second soul skill is precision scanning. It scans the appearance of a soul master or soul beast when attacking, which can be loaded into the mental space for execution. To simulate a battle, the third soul skill is war song encouragement, which can be played. It contains ten modern songs. Its function is probably to increase attack power and resist spiritual attacks. The fourth soul skill is space teleportation. Use precise scanning to scan a place and you can teleport there instantly, ignoring distance and consuming 50% of the soul power. The fifth soul skill is signal interference, which can be used! Interfering with the opponent's soul power Use, the sixth soul skill is that if you are at the same level as yourself, you can download a seed on the opponent. Once the opponent uses the vitality seed, it will be activated, scan the attack characteristics of the person, and force the opponent into the promotion space to simulate a hostile self to fight. If you win, you can get out of this space. If you lose, ten souls will be permanently deducted. Power, the seventh soul skill is the soul power released by precise maps. The more maps there are, the bigger the map will be. The eighth soul skill is video calling, which can attach a mark to a person. As long as the mark is stimulated with soul power, an image of oneself can appear, and the communication with the other party ignores distance and space. The ninth soul skill has data limitations and uses precise scanning to scan any dead object for realization

I still didn't insist on reading it, it was too close to the original story line, and more importantly, the protagonist was in the story. The plot doesn't work, and forcing a female protagonist is even more pointless. The existence of this female protagonist is worse than not having a female protagonist.

I have been poisoned to death. This book is too poisonous. Mobile phones and computers. What can you do? Wuhun, it's so weird!

The power is comparable to that of a ninety-first-level titled Douluo. It takes a long time to fight against a soul sect, and then it takes a long time to fight against a soul king. It's so funny.

There are only a few Douluo fans who are not annoying, and the "many" others are either trolls in the comment area, or they can't afford to be banned.

There are a lot of Douluo Dalu fan novels, but only a few have their own creativity. It is recommended to read the table of contents before reading.

I'm sorry, the protagonist starts to cut and slash in all kinds of ways as soon as he comes to the back. It feels like Dragon Ball Super.

I just mess around at the end. Is this a common problem in novels?

As soon as I reached the back, the pressure became more and more intense.

Learn more about "Douluo: Son of Shura God"😁

Why do I feel that the author has never watched Douluo Dalu? I am confused by what I wrote.

This book is really well written in the front. It deserves to be a work of 18 years. Nowadays, the fan fiction is like Tang San, Licking Qian Renxue Bibi Dong, and the characters are falling apart, especially Yu Xiaogang. This character is miserable in the first place. In other fan fiction, his character has completely become a villain. Alas, this novel is really good. , It's a pity not to open a harem, Tang San and Xiao Wu can understand, Ning Rongrong and Zhu Zhuqing personally feel that they can accept it. In the original work, Zhu Zhuqing is a person with no shortcomings, while Ning Rongrong has a big background. There are too many private settings in the book, which directly forced away a large number of people. This novel is really good, especially at the beginning, but it is a pity.

It's over. I didn't remember the title. After looking at the content, I found that I had seen 😭😭😭 and continued the literary waste.

The front and back of this book are useless 😏

It looks good, but a bunch of garbage people who only know how to read white articles know nothing about it. The writing is so good!