My System in Martial Arts Has Many Pitfalls

Haha, traditional martial arts turned out to be like this, they have learned a lesson.

I see this is my first book. I hope the author can write it well. If there are any bad things, please give me your comments. After all, no one has a first time.

It's divided into multiple sections, and when you watch it on a mobile phone, it's very tiring to read one section per page. Also, it's too watery, and the various unimportant introductions are too wordy.

The book is okay, but there are so few reviews.

The timeline is so confusing. How could Lianchengjue be in the Qing Dynasty?

Liancheng Jue seems to be from the Ming Dynasty.