Eat That Container

1 The world view of the work is unclear Neither the world political pattern nor the main contradictions of the world's major forces are obvious. For example, there are several countries in the world. What are the main characteristics of these countries? What are the main points of conflict between the church and the kingdom? Is it just the conflict between monarchy and theocracy or is it caused by some dark history of the church? 2 The plot is a bit small and the protagonist is very passive. Similar to classic Japanese comics, a huge kingdom relies on the male protagonist throughout the whole process. The eldest princess and the second prince are in conflict with each other by talking nonsense and asking the nobles to take sides. The male protagonist's current ability limit and specific scope of action are completely unclear. There is no exploration of abilities at all, and he has no short-term, medium-term, or long-term plans of his own. The protagonist's strength depends entirely on luck. He becomes stronger when he encounters a contained object. If he doesn't encounter it, he just waits. He doesn't take the initiative to become stronger and explore the world 3 Some parts of the plot are unreasonable After the eldest princess and the second prince confront each other, why do the nobles and ministers favor the second prince? This is a question. Logically speaking, a docile princess with no backer is in the interests of the nobles and ministers. Why would the nobles and ministers prefer the second prince? The second question is why the protagonist has no doubts about Qin at all. Although he was not satisfied with Qin's arrangements for him before, after escaping from Kai, he stopped understanding Qin at all, and did not even communicate or discuss his abilities and future with Qin. The third problem is that when everyone has questions, they just keep it in their hearts and wait for conflicts to break out. Why don't they sit down and talk frankly. It feels like they are just waiting for things to get worse and then let the male protagonist solve it. The fourth question is that although the Tree of Order suffered heavy losses before, Irene has been responsible for the affairs of the country alone since then. I am surprised. The scope of responsibility and power of the top-ranking organization in the country do not have logistics and civilian personnel. There are no specific personnel in the group. The blame division of labor, when problems arise, is not even dispatched by a small team. Even a team of ordinary people can be formed to assist Irene. What should I do if I encounter a task that needs to be tackled, what should I do if I encounter a task where hostages are being held hostage, or what should I do if I encounter a task that requires a large-scale search. The fifth problem is that the eldest princess made a mistake in her decision-making and nothing happened. Logically speaking, although the public does not know about the ability person, the ministers, kings and nobles must know it. They want to kill the Order Tree without asking, because they think they have lived too long. Inexplicably, everyone wants to kill the Order Tree. It is understandable that the second prince is controlled, but the price for others to exchange benefits with the church is even greater. They don't even calculate their own input-output ratio. This is really a forced reduction of IQ The sixth problem is that the protagonist is a time traveler and has a library. He has no intention of transforming the world or even gaining benefits through knowledge. , I'm afraid it's not a fake protagonist. After gaining the power of Mr. Qiang, he can completely modify various weapons by himself and then forcibly modify the technology tree. The male protagonist went to move bricks. It's amazing I really like the setting and supporting characters of this book. I really hope that this book can be ordered in the tens of thousands, but the shortcomings do exist objectively. I offer two meager monthly tickets and hope that the author can write better in the future

If the fire spreads, the furnace can be extinguished; isn't this furnace just like the emperor of the empire who wants to live in an ignoble existence and should have exterminated itself long ago.

The following is just my personal opinion. Let's talk about the shortcomings first: the plot in the middle and later stages of this book is slow, and there are few updates. The plot is boring and a bit obscure. It is tasteless to eat, and it is a pity to throw it away, so it is thrown on the bookshelf to fatten up, and then forgotten. Improvement suggestions: 1. Simplify it a little and speed up the plot. This will make it feel like there are more updates (although it is still less). 2. Add some cool points. It is better to have others say it than to brag it yourself or the author. 3 I don't know whether to say this or not. Well, what do I want to say? Forget it, that's it

Three stars out of five. The mainstream of steampunk mystery is still far away from the Lord of Mysteries~(￣▽￣~)(~￣▽￣)~

Cthulhu or SCP are relatively niche subjects, so don't have too high expectations at the beginning. My personal suggestion is to change the classification of works. Readers in the two-dimensional area are more inclined to daily, happy, and pleasant content, and do not like dark and weird types like Cthulhu. My suggestion is to move to the fantasy area, where the audience is relatively large. Currently, the only Cthulhu-themed movie that is popular is Squid's "Lord of Mystery". This is based on the fact that "mystery" is only reflected in extraordinary abilities, and the overall atmosphere is warm and cozy. Other Cthulhus in the true sense such as "Soul of Negri" and "Demon Sage" can only be regarded as second-tier, which is a bit shocking, but I still hope that the author will be mentally prepared.

The protagonist can't even afford to eat, but he still wants to save the world? Isn't this just taking carrots for granted and worrying less? If the sky falls, a tall person will hold it up

The author's writing style is good, and the writing style is eye-catching. To be honest, it has considerable strength and it is a work that can be read. The criticism of this book is that the author advances the plot in a hurry, as if there is no outline, which is also the reason for the poor performance. Looking at the writing style, this book is almost the same as a mystery, but it lacks the steadiness of a cuttlefish to advance the plot step by step. It is more like writing randomly, just like a daily article, it just misses the mark. But different from the unit drama form of daily novels, the creation of this kind of fantasy novels obviously needs to consider the continuity of the plot. In comparison, it's like the famous appendix patient Okouchi, who starts off strong, starts making a few random moves in the middle, and ends up with an appendix. His talents were wasted.

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After reading a little bit, I don't feel very good. The author put some thought into the structure, but the pig's feet are too mentally retarded.

What a pity. In the early stage, it was really good and imaginative. But in the later stage, the author's performance was poor and he didn't write well.

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It's very interesting. I didn't expect that it died suddenly instead of being popular. Does the author have any new books?

I just watched a dozen or so films and there were so many female supporting characters. I instantly lost the desire to read any more. It's different from the dark twist I imagined. It's like playing house. What a disappointment.

The story line is too far-fetched, and the character is suddenly so mentally retarded that I can't stand it anymore.

Really, have 67% of the people who have read Breaking Fist really read this book?

To be honest, I really thought the book was pretty good at the beginning, but when Sister Kesana appeared, the chaotic female relationship made me nauseous. It was a bit... What the hell? Feeling

Did I not look carefully? I feel like there are some things that were not written before. After a few pictures, I defaulted to writing it myself. For example, in the beginning, only Sera's brother died, and nothing else was mentioned. Then dozens of chapters later, it was suddenly said that Matthew, the woman, and Sera's brother were all dead, as if by default that he had written a plot.

The plot is like an urban harem king, with girls appearing one after another, such as the little maid with multiple personalities, the protective sister, Qingmei who looks low-key but has a high status, and the princess who is studious and loves adventure. . . It's obviously a Cthulhu-style novel, but I feel like laughing when I look at it.

The protagonist is really cowardly. I didn't feel any pleasure watching it. It's really frustrating.

I'm still wondering why there are such cliches of female police officers. It turns out it was a novel written in 18 years.

Come on! Very beautiful! Please update qaq

Seeing now, whether it is knowledge, royal power, or divine power, they all have the ability to enslave ordinary people, extraordinary people, and awakened people. For enslaved people, they have a natural affinity for their slave masters and can easily develop into fanatical believers who are willing to sacrifice everything for the slave master, whether it is body or soul. It seems that only the sword has no ability to enslave the soul. The protagonist is the master of knowledge, the master of the crown, and the master of the divine dog.

Hmph, it's okayThree tickets are given to you. If you keep it up, it will be okay

Just two police officers in one city? Or is it just a captain named Irene, and a half-assed protagonist who just accidentally became extraordinary?

Why is 19 missing? I looked at it and said, "There seems to be something wrong with the plot."

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The subject matter of the book is good, but the protagonist is always in other people's calculations, which is too frustrating. I read the book for pleasure, not for cheating 🙂

It was painful to watch, and the protagonist felt too cowardly. Not pretty.

I love this book so much (⑉°з°)-♡

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