Police World

Is the author not planning to write this book and focus on a new book? If this continues, I won't dare to subscribe.

The law can only be protected by force.

There are too many police films. It feels a bit messy. The police are not allowed to directly attack vital points. It is impossible for the police to set up an ambush on the street and kill hundreds of people. Police shootings of people are investigated by the Internal Affairs Department. With so many people dead, let alone the Commissioner of Police, even the Governor of Hong Kong would be in trouble. It definitely shocked the world. On the streets, police used heavy machine guns. The author writes so well. Be more restrained, after all you are writing about Hong Kong police, not Somali pirates.

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Three problems: First, the writing is too messy. One plot is not finished and another is picked up. You have to be able to intersperse it cleverly, but it is a pity that you are not good at it...; Second, the choice of words, many of which look like the mainland at first glance. The director said: "Jian is in the heart of the emperor, and the satellite is released." Don't you think it's awkward? Have they all gone to Beijing for further study? The character is very inconsistent. You don't have to write it in Cantonese, regardless of Cantonese word usage habits, but at least don't make people laugh. The third is that there is a problem with the logic and the wisdom is forced. Not to mention anything else, in the first scene, Pig's Feet, as a grassroots employee, delivers documents directly to Brother No. 1, Not to mention, and makes a generous speech to Brother No. 1 That he will arrange for Wen and him to take charge of the case. The director nods and agrees and it ends. The director doesn't even need to shout out a letter to explain? Civilian ranks are higher than pig's feet. Things like Wen's approach to Zhu Tao and collecting illegal money were all done before Pig's Feet reported them. The timing didn't match up. Do you think that this would cover up these previous things that Wen violated the law? You treat the police as if they are mentally retarded. Let me ask you, how to write a report on Wen?

Is there no harem in the Hong Kong variety show world? Is Fang Jiexia of the Emperor's style worth licking?

It feels like this book is the author's own pleasure! ! ! ! What a mess!

The writing is so poor and the timeline is messy! There are too many bugs, brains, and broken plots! ! !

(Don't worry, I saw on TV that these gangsters were not ordinary. They fired nearly a hundred shots before killing and wounding more than a dozen policemen.) This is what a policeman can say.

Rubbish article, rubbish system that can't be upgraded or add points, what a fucking temporary card to write a gross system.

I think this kind of movie about Hong Kong is still diverse. I know first of all that it is really nonsense for a person to miss the movie stars in his previous life. You say just think about one or two, there are countless people who look the same, no one will doubt it.

The writing is not good. The world is not as beautiful as police officers and movies.

Young and Dangerous boys dare not kill the police, but 13-year-old girl kills Officer Jamie from East Star The explanation in the movie is unclear. Many people think that it is too easy for the Thirteenth Sister to rise to the top, but killing one policeman will occupy the entire Bolan Street. In fact, there is a saying in The Godfather: Even the most ferocious gangster on the street, if the police want to slap him, he can only stand there and let the beating happen. As the son of his godfather, Mike had to go abroad to avoid trouble immediately after killing a policeman, and his godfather had to make huge concessions in order for him to return safely. No boss would be able to escape easily if he killed a policeman. Otherwise, why would all the bosses give in as soon as this proposal was made? If it were so easy to get, wouldn't everyone have been fighting over which round would the Thirteenth Sister take the lead? In fact, the question of who kills the policeman and who becomes the boss is obviously just a painting. If you kill a police officer, how can the police station just let it go? The person who did it must be sacrificed by the organization. If you are lucky, you will be imprisoned for life. If you are unlucky, you will be killed with one shot. Being the boss will not be the same at all. The bosses of each court were cunning and cunning, so they all retreated, thinking that I would not take advantage of them. Therefore, Thirteen's initiative to volunteer was a risky move, and she was really lucky. First, Dao Scarqi took the initiative to cover her up, and then the policeman's numerous dark pasts were revealed to the police station and could not be investigated, so she escaped unscathed. If you survive a catastrophe, you will be blessed later. The underworld is a high-risk and high-yield industry. It is natural for Thirteenth Sister to win a bet and turn around. With Dao Scarqi's sacrifice and the fact that there were too many secret files after the policeman's death, the police department gave up on pursuing the accomplices for fear of being too involved, and Thirteenth Sister was able to escape unscathed.

It's the same as sports writing skills rely on pumping.

What idiotic leader would say to his brother-in-law, "Your brother-in-law is quite feminine." Don't you understand basic interpersonal relationships?

This book is only for novices, and it will kill old bookworms in one chapter. I kicked the bath randomly and forced myself to show off.

Good guy, the police rank in the finale is still superintendent. I've watched Mao Yao

I looked at a few of them but they are not interesting. There is a system but they are all temporary cards. You have to have enough physical fitness to upgrade your skills. If you still can't increase your physical fitness, then what's the use of this system?

There is a routine that is borrowed and imitated in various ways. The more I read the Qidian book, the less interesting it becomes.

Why is it that every chapter is cut off and does not match the beginning of the next chapter

There is no system in time travel. Is it because the protagonist can't do it or because the author can't write it?

Leave a mark! After seeing the second chapter, I have no love for this setting!

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It feels like the protagonist is a bit idealistic, of course, but the approach is very childish. And, I really can't appreciate this kind of experience card, it doesn't feel so real.

Already a eunuch, ugh

Liar, you promised not to cut it, but you still cut it, you're not even a son and a half girl 😭, what do you care about me, cut it

If you don't know how to write, just go home and hold the baby, what the hell!

Come visit me with your work "The Witcher Begins in America" ​​and thank you! Added to favorites, great imagination, and the author's writing style is very good.

From the very beginning, it started to be too self-indulgent and unreasonable: for example, the predecessor was ranked first in all subjects at the police academy, but the protagonist traveled back in time but inherited the memory of the predecessor, but did not inherit the predecessor's ability 666 The more I read the subsequent plot description: the more I felt that the description of the protagonist was too excessive, self-excitement, and self-indulgence in the "own" world The layout of the plot of Hong Kong TV series is messy, let alone it Hong Kong Island has not returned, and the Security Bureau is still a department under the police Lu Minghua 1972 Commissioner of Police 666 You compressed all the timelines of Hong Kong variety movie plots to 1972 😂😂😂😂😂