The Nexus of Time and Space in Marvel

I have looked at a few pictures of rings so far, but there are too many typos.

I really don't want to criticize this author, after all, there aren't many people who write about Blizzard, but this author is really sb, and he is very childish. He is probably still a single dog, and he knows how to lick.

It feels very chaotic, and the most noticeable thing is that the protagonist is trying to die by sending things everywhere to stir up trouble, but he does not have the ability to directly suppress it, he is too weak.

What a different protagonist! Weak wisdom book, poisonous book

If you are not capable enough, you are still licking everywhere, and you are so traumatized after the war that you can just kill one or two people? So if the Chitauri invade, will everyone be captured and given preferential treatment after the war?

You can't lick a dog! Just do whatever you ask, even if you give me a lot of stuff

Nine out of the ten things related to the interstellar are written about psychic powers, but they are all written in a vague way. Weak psychic possessors can basically read minds to a certain extent, and those with powerful psychic powers can directly control the brain, just like Kerr willing to control Rashar (Wo Ritian's mother), and can even use the psychic blade of the star spirit. This psychic level must be on the same level as a ghost that has absorbed terrazine! I don't mean anything else, I just can't help but want to complain.

Isn't your work borrowed from many people's outlines and put together? The name of the protagonist, the protagonist's emotional description of the heroine, and the protagonist's actions don't feel like an outline at all. They are pieced together. Although there are few Blizzard-themed novels, don't be so shoddy!

I feel like this book would be much better if the protagonist didn't have Lucia, a crazy and trouble-making girlfriend. Look, this woman exposed the protagonist to Snake Shield, created the Zerg virus, and lost the information. Who can stand this kind of person being realistic? A crazy troublemaker with no self-awareness, this is the heroine.

This heroine is simply big-breasted and brainless. Maybe she only has an airport. The battlefield porcupine itself is high-tech for humans. It doesn't matter if the protagonist sends it away. She actually dares to bring in outsiders casually and ignores the protagonist's reminder to study the zerg. Speechless.

Other characterizations are okay, but the heroine is a big failure. Maybe it's to advance the plot, there's no logic.

The adjutant of the author Interstellar is at least controlled by a quantum computer system. How can Ivan find the backdoor? If you don't see it, Uncle Renault has to find the colonel. It is impossible for ordinary hackers to succeed, let alone Marvel, which has just started in the quantum field

Did you decide to give up after seeing the protagonist's behavior after his girlfriend died? Either you don't want the heroine from the beginning, you just read this kind of book to feel good, if you don't feel good about it, who will read it?

There are a lot of contradictions in the writing, and some things are super anticlimactic...

Damn it, am I dying? ! ?

It is one of the few books about storms, but there are a few small problems, such as the hero's trust in the heroine is too simple (he gained the protagonist's trust casually, I haven't finished reading it yet), and I saw a section that talked about the artifacts of Norse mythology. I have the impression that the dragon gem in it refers to the Rubik's Cube in the movie, and the speed of power increase as others said, but I still support it, the storm is going to be popular.

Author, you forcibly weakened it too much, weakened the setting, and also used plot weakening to limit the protagonist. Although your plot has a real chance of happening in reality, in novels, do you have to make it that way? . . The only thing a novel needs is to be good-looking. As long as it is good-looking, you can be as false as you like, but the premise is that it is not so false that it affects the sense of reading. .

I won't say any more. Can you reduce the number of seeking death and breeding enemies? I don't have any objections to SHIELD. But you can send T, but can you not send P and Z?

This heroine is a naughty person. The arrangement was ridiculous. I danced a few times and kept making trouble but nothing happened. I gave up.

Chapter 1, ah no, it's Chapter 2. I just want to complain, author, can you clearly distinguish between biochemical technology and biotechnology? Norman cried and fainted in the toilet

It feels like if the protagonist is destroyed, the world will be 10% safer

You must be addicted to kneeling and licking, it looks awkward

There are obviously countless ways to advance the plot, but the author insists on arranging the heroine's imbecile behavior, and the protagonist licking the dog as a nanny, and in the name of advancing the plot, is it possible that your writing skills are too poor?

What about the first chapter😭