I'm Evolving

There is nothing wrong with the protagonist keeping a diary, but you kept the diary without encryption at all and just wrote down your biggest secret. Are you afraid that others will not discover your secret?

First of all, let me say that I am here to spray. Although it is not a brainless spray, I spray it and I don't need to explain anything. On one point, the setting of Li Mo's character really made me uncomfortable. I started reading this book today. How can I describe this character? If you want a sense of contrast, I can't accept it. After all, it's too uncomfortable to watch at the beginning, and it's difficult to change it later. It's a good book, but this character really annoyed me. Like a mentally retarded person, the first ten chapters of the drama made my scalp numb. If the author wants to use this character as a foreshadowing, to promote the drama, etc., Why bother to write him as a Green~Tea~B-like person? Anyway, it was very uncomfortable for me to watch. When I saw this person in the subsequent chapters, my first thought was that this guy is very annoying, and I didn't have the intention to read it carefully. Uh-huh, I'm going to start squirting next, ahhhhhhh, dried fish, you are just a little biscuit. (Well, am I going too far by spraying like this?)

I support no heroine and no harem. The cousin may become a poison point. I suggest the author get rid of her. Then Li Mo will be cannon fodder. Good, funny, funny

It's very well written, keep it up👍👍👍

The setting of this book is definitely not satisfactory, I hope you can understand it.

I couldn't stand it anymore after reading chapter 18. I went to save my uncle. I said family ties are important. But I met a beautiful woman on the way. I went to save the girl's mother first because I was on the way. I didn't say anything about it. Is it a ride? If I just stopped by to protect the girl, I would go to save the uncle immediately. What I couldn't bear was that I was there with the girl. I listened to her recount the past to her mother and listened for more than ten minutes. Your feelings and family ties are not as important as gossip. As a result, when I found my uncle, everyone had already received lunch.

Alas, I had a great time reading it and felt very good, but when I got to Chapter 162, the author suddenly started to commit suicide. He came out inexplicably and said that the protagonist's world is the so-called inner world, a false world, and the protagonist is just the protagonist in the picture album. I really didn't want to read it when I saw this!

A good person who saves everyone money You know, start banning good people like me now

This is an inexplicable book that successfully let go of all the fun points in the early days. Goodbye. .

The setting of this inner and outer world is really annoying. It's a good read. It's so imaginative. The twist is so confusing. It's one of the most poisonous points in this book. Even Shen Nong can't resist it.

Suddenly, some author or some picture book appears! It's too poisonous, give it up! Goodbye! Too poisonous! What do you think? ? ?

The content is okay, but that's it. The characters are not well created, and the country is too brainless. I don't think the country will be in such a situation. The first dozens of chapters give people the feeling of being a villain, and the old man is too dramatic. Goldfinger appears and is still working in the hospital. He was even drafted. I don't think this is a big deal. He doesn't want to expose his strength while doing a 30-point mission. It doesn't make sense that I can find records for a C-level one. There are quite a lot of controversies set up by Li Mo. It would be pointless to argue with the state later on, and the protagonist is not an orphan, but also has a cousin that he cares about. I guess there will be some cliché plots later. In summary, the subject matter is okay, but the author's writing skills are a bit poor, and this chapter really affects the reading, so there is no need to reply.

At the beginning, looking at the protagonist's actions and pretentiousness, it seemed that the author wanted to create a high-IQ protagonist. However, the subsequent actions well exposed the author's inability to create high-IQ characters.

I'm speechless. Let's let the protagonist enter Qidian Orphanage! You, a new author, should stop writing these family plots. There will be a lot of crashes.

Chapter 162 plus one, I felt so sick after reading it that I gave up the book decisively.

Read Chapter 163 first, don't thank me, Shennong is dead.

Haven't tried it yet, the comments were vicious, so I'm trying to persuade you to quit.

I tried the poison, it was very poisonous, I was persuaded to quit.

I only saw about 50 chapters of the previous plot, and I couldn't bear it anymore. I was wondering if Li Mo would have died if I didn't write about it? It is unexplainable that something like this fruit was conveniently given to Luo, a person who only meets two or three times. To be honest, in the first ten chapters, I felt that the protagonist was a calm type. Later, I gradually felt that the author was an S. B type, and the character changed from a lovable type to a tengu type. I just don't understand. Isn't the cold-blooded developmental type bad? If you don't know the emotional line, can you please stop forcing it? Ill?

Confucius said: It is virtue to read books and keep tickets. 🤭🤭

The main character is so conflicted and it's obvious that the main character is just an ordinary person. The author wants to write about his professionalism as a doctor. The protagonist cures diseases and saves people, but he is just pretending to be a slap in the face. The protagonist wants to conduct his own research, but does not have the qualities of a researcher. The protagonist wants to be clean and decisive, but what he does is inconsistent. The protagonist looks cold towards women but is a loser on the inside. Only Chapter 27 seen

It's really uncomfortable. I was reading it with great interest earlier and thought it was a good novel. But suddenly the setting of the inside and outside world was introduced, and I couldn't read it anymore.

The protagonist has so many evolutionary fruits left, but Yingying, the protagonist's only relative, did not give her one. The plot is unreasonable and has problems with the setting, making it uncomfortable to watch.

I feel like there are two places that are really a bit confusing. One is Li Mo. And Luo, aren't their entire tribe trapped in the Cursed Land? Moreover, he wanted to seize the protagonist from the beginning. After finally making an important prophecy, he said that the protagonist would take them away, and he took the initiative to propose a deal and returned all deceitful things. Nine postures turned into eighteen postures. It is said to be a secret method and the result is ordinary, and Wei Dou, a tribesman, knows about it? Are you using a lie that any clan member can expose to disgust the people who want to save your clan from the cursed land?

It was okay at first, but I really couldn't stand it anymore.

The beginning was good, but some woman persuaded me to quit after dozens of chapters, poisonous, poisonous, poisonous

What is this author thinking, either directly giving the secret to the country, or hiding it as a big cheat, and actually arranging for the arrested to carry a bomb on a death mission? Is there really something wrong with his brain, and he is inexplicably entangled with the scheming bitch on the scene, and his mind is full of pickles?

What kind of disgusting thing is this Li Mo? Farewell

Um, is the last step completely gone?

Damn, this style of painting has changed so amazingly. Now I know that our earth was originally created by a novelist.