Shadow Prisoner

I like this book very much, because the author really writes it with heart, and novels written with heart will definitely be liked by others. I like Bill's madness, his shadow, and the weird power setting... I regret the hasty ending, but things are unpredictable. In short, I am still very grateful to Eel-san for being able to go back and finish telling this story after many things happened. Although he is incomplete, at least he has brought us joy, sadness and various emotions, and also brought me new fantasies... People should be happy when they are alive! Finished with flowers, and best wishes for Eel-san's next book★

I feel like I'm not used to seeing a protagonist who loses all his sanity... The Cthulhu style is also about slowly going crazy... It's not the kind of madness that makes you crazy... It may be a bit confusing, but to put it simply, it is relatively niche. After all, readers are ordinary people with emotions, emotions, and warmth...

I don't have much money, so I will give you 10,000 starting coins. I look forward to it being put on the shelves, so I will definitely subscribe. The writing is really good. Although there are various opinions in the comments, I think the author's writing is very real. He has a very good grasp of the emotional and psychological changes of a smart ordinary person who experiences various situations and difficulties after time travel, and there is basically no sense of surprise. The historical background and power system are also quite interesting. Although the author has only revealed part of the settings now, it feels very innovative and not cliche. Finally, the story is quite shocking, very revealing of human nature, and a good grasp of the unknown. In terms of character setting, no one, including the protagonist, is perfect, but these are living characters, and they don't feel like paper people. After praising it, talk about its shortcomings. I feel that the author can write more about witchcraft. After all, the protagonist now knows that he is a wizard and has not come into contact with other wizards. He should transfer part of the description of society to the protagonist's exploration of the power of witchcraft. Then, can we update more every day? Even if the author often emphasizes that every day is a big chapter, it's still not enough! Author, don't be affected by book reviews. Your writing is very good. Come on!

Regarding the fact that some protagonists are not cold-blooded enough, I would like to say a few words here. The protagonist of this article is obviously cold on the outside but fanatical on the inside. The various characters in this article are actually complex and three-dimensional people, so they don't feel like facial expressions. I think people will make mistakes, including the smart but paranoid Javert, the willful rich lady, and the weak and money-loving good guy Fatty. Everyone is not perfect, but this makes me feel that this article is more real. The protagonist probably did something inadvertently that he didn't even know why he did it, which made the character more full-bodied. I think I quite like this kind of protagonist. And I think a friend's comment is quite right. He said that the protagonist, including the protagonist's predecessor, is actually just a lonely person. He just can't get along with people normally in a complex society. In a world full of entangled interests, uncertain future, and dangerous and cunning world, he doesn't know who is worthy of trust. Or because of his identity, he can only hide his true inner thoughts and arm himself with indifference. Only in this way can he have a greater chance of surviving and take revenge on the mastermind behind everything. But he is just an ordinary person. He is not born cold-blooded, but the environment forces him to do things he doesn't like to do, and at the same time, he steps towards the abyss. That's why this article is called Shadow Prisoner, not Lord of the Abyss. Come on, author, I am very optimistic about you! 🤓

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A rare novel, the writing style, plot arrangement, rhythm processing and even world view construction are all excellent. However, I feel that the details of character behavior are still not well controlled. It is recommended that the author usually observe the behaviors and speech patterns of characters from different walks of life and different professions. Especially the words and deeds of people at the bottom and people in special professions are very interesting. Also, please come on, the author, and work hard to update.

Why do you think Ilia is the heroine ʘᴗʘ Why don't you think the fat woman from the landlord is the heroine, the person who wrote to Williams, and John's wife Mina, John and Javert can also be the heroines, one knife can solve the problem

I don't dare touch books written by girls. . . Just like when I was younger and obsessed with the apocalyptic Dark Summoner. . . .

Based on my 20 years of severe mental illness experience, I judge that the protagonist is a mental patient.

The young author, who is not updating his articles, holds up his two ears, cuts his veins and cuts his arteries, and remains motionless, so cute.

I really accept this policy. Please ban everything about ghosts and gods. Liaozhai, Journey to the West, Qingming Festival, New Year and the words ghosts and gods are all feudal and superstitious. Why do you need them? They affect social stability.

The book is good, but don't mention the pile of Cthulhu monsters again. The mystery, the unknown, the indescribable, the darkness and the fear are the essence of Cthulhu.

Have a good rest, this book is the Cthulhu style I want. The protagonist is frightened and crazy about the unknown (it doesn't feel like Feng Bujue in Thriller Paradise is rational and humorous, but has truly entered a state of madness). The description of the environment, the warmth and warmth of people in society, and the hesitation and ridicule of the protagonist every time he chooses are very real. It can be said that it is easy to get people into the drama. This book gave me a feeling that the people around the protagonist are not companions, but enemies or objects of use. I imagine a picture of the protagonist looking around in a dark street as if being peeped by someone, hysterical and neurotic. All in all, thank you 🐮🍺, I will update again after you have some rest!

I feel that the protagonist is a bit crazy and behaves inconsistently. Facing the unknown darkness, he desperately tries to survive. However, when faced with a strange man, he is helpless and willing to wait for death. He is not even willing to struggle. When meeting a strange man in a tavern, he is calm and calm. When faced with two rookie robbers, he is cowardly and incompetent. He can only plead. The contrast between before and after is so big and so fast that it is simply crazy.

Come on, boy, it's a really good novel, but the male protagonist is a little too crazy sometimes. A little crazy is fine, but I feel that the male protagonist is not far from completely crazy.

Last night, I posted a 404 about Fatty. Now I am revising my post and applying to lift the ban... I won't dare to write like this in the future 😭

Didn't expect so many people hate Illya? Come on, what other advantages does this woman have now besides being beautiful? I also want others to like me, so I continue the outline, and write about her using other people's treasured items to threaten others to work for free, or is she really working hard... Is it none of your business to marry someone you don't like? If others can't live well, wouldn't it mean killing people and setting fires? You put more thought and writing. As far as I can see now, the woman you wrote was killed by the protagonist after only a few chapters and was used as a magic material.

This is the most Cthulhu-style novel I have ever read. It is dark, strange, chaotic, and has a low and depressing atmosphere. The protagonist is sometimes calm and sometimes crazy. I think it is very personal and particularly attractive to me. The supporting characters are very good, especially the fat man. It was particularly emotional when the protagonist shed tears after killing someone for the first time. Who in this world doesn't want to be a good person and doesn't want to be recognized by others. Bad people are also forced by the world. I hope this novel can continue to be written. As long as you dare to write, I will chase you! 👍👍👍Come on! !

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There is a question, why are all the people who travel through time yellow? Generally they are still Chinese, and they still become white. But the time traveler is a typical Asian with white skin and yellow heart. This design is really strange to the authors 😁

The ending is not too bad, but the author obviously did not control the rhythm and balance well, and did not manage the relationship between body and writing well. It is really a pity. I like this book very much. Even though I knew this, I still bought all the genuine copies. I hope the author will write more in the future. The beginning of this story is really exciting, and I thought it was exciting until the end. Although it looks like a racing carriage that cannot be controlled in the middle, it is very beautiful, unconventional, and the description skills are fascinating. What needs to be improved is the outline and rhythm balance. Even in the end, the author also gave a clear ending. It is a very good ending, but there are too many plots that are omitted.

I read Chapter 50, but I still don't understand what is written.

Well, after reading two chapters, I announced that I was bound to the tree. I sat in rows under the tree and ate fruit. In fact, it was very inexplicable at the beginning. The protagonist opened his eyes and saw the picture, then he self-inflicted pain on his nerves, and then he banged the door and yelled as if he was mentally contaminated. But in fact, normal humans are confused. After yelling, he inexplicably entered a role play and wanted to eat mice. The author did not describe how long it took, but the progress was inexplicably too fast. I think it didn't last a day anyway, because the protagonist still had the strength, but I really want to ask, would a normal human being mentally hungry for a whole day really start to want to eat mice? Normal humans at this time are still confused, well, plus hungry. In short, I felt that the protagonist was mentally contaminated from the beginning, and most of his actions were inexplicable, like a madman. I was in a state of being bound to the stupid tree. I watched him repeatedly, but I didn't understand what he was doing. He entered the role-playing so quickly, but his mental state was in a bad state.

Although this book has obvious shortcomings, its advantages are also outstanding. The second chapter gave me the same feeling as when I read "Saints". The characters are strong, the details are strong, the plot is weak, and the logic is weak. Slowly improve, the author learns more lessons and has a clear target, so it shouldn't be difficult to improve. Come on! I am still reading the free part and am ready to subscribe fully. I want to say that as a lover of online literature, when I see good works, I will do my best to support the original version and subscribe, so that these authors with dreams can have the opportunity to fly higher.

I'm irritable, I don't know what to say, * If the next book ends badly, I really want to send my regards to you.

Sort of. . . It's so complicated, I really like the writing.

I really like your work. Also, have you seen Eel in the Bronze Age?

I have just read the first ten chapters. Basically in every chapter, the protagonist has a lunatic and complains about this and that. He is weak and incompetent in the face of emergencies and deceives himself. It unfolds like a supporting character in an American TV series. The character is really unlikable.

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