Shadow Prisoner

I don't have much money, so I will give you 10,000 starting coins. I look forward to it being put on the shelves, so I will definitely subscribe. The writing is really good. Although there are various opinions in the comments, I think the author's writing is very real. He has a very good grasp of the emotional and psychological changes of a smart ordinary person who experiences various situations and difficulties after time travel, and there is basically no sense of surprise. The historical background and power system are also quite interesting. Although the author has only revealed part of the settings now, it feels very innovative and not cliche. Finally, the story is quite shocking, very revealing of human nature, and a good grasp of the unknown. In terms of character setting, no one, including the protagonist, is perfect, but these are living characters, and they don't feel like paper people. After praising it, talk about its shortcomings. I feel that the author can write more about witchcraft. After all, the protagonist now knows that he is a wizard and has not come into contact with other wizards. He should transfer part of the description of society to the protagonist's exploration of the power of witchcraft. Then, can we update more every day? Even if the author often emphasizes that every day is a big chapter, it's still not enough! Author, don't be affected by book reviews. Your writing is very good. Come on!

Regarding the fact that some protagonists are not cold-blooded enough, I would like to say a few words here. The protagonist of this article is obviously cold on the outside but fanatical on the inside. The various characters in this article are actually complex and three-dimensional people, so they don't feel like facial expressions. I think people will make mistakes, including the smart but paranoid Javert, the willful rich lady, and the weak and money-loving good guy Fatty. Everyone is not perfect, but this makes me feel that this article is more real. The protagonist probably did something inadvertently that he didn't even know why he did it, which made the character more full-bodied. I think I quite like this kind of protagonist. And I think a friend's comment is quite right. He said that the protagonist, including the protagonist's predecessor, is actually just a lonely person. He just can't get along with people normally in a complex society. In a world full of entangled interests, uncertain future, and dangerous and cunning world, he doesn't know who is worthy of trust. Or because of his identity, he can only hide his true inner thoughts and arm himself with indifference. Only in this way can he have a greater chance of surviving and take revenge on the mastermind behind everything. But he is just an ordinary person. He is not born cold-blooded, but the environment forces him to do things he doesn't like to do, and at the same time, he steps towards the abyss. That's why this article is called Shadow Prisoner, not Lord of the Abyss. Come on, author, I am very optimistic about you! 🤓

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A rare novel, the writing style, plot arrangement, rhythm processing and even world view construction are all excellent. However, I feel that the details of character behavior are still not well controlled. It is recommended that the author usually observe the behaviors and speech patterns of characters from different walks of life and different professions. Especially the words and deeds of people at the bottom and people in special professions are very interesting. Also, please come on, the author, and work hard to update.

Why do you think Ilia is the heroine ʘᴗʘ Why don't you think the fat woman from the landlord is the heroine, the person who wrote to Williams, and John's wife Mina, John and Javert can also be the heroines, one knife can solve the problem

I don't dare touch books written by girls. . . Just like when I was younger and obsessed with the apocalyptic Dark Summoner. . . .

Based on my 20 years of severe mental illness experience, I judge that the protagonist is a mental patient.

The young author, who is not updating his articles, holds up his two ears, cuts his veins and cuts his arteries, and remains motionless, so cute.

I like this book very much, because the author really writes it with heart, and novels written with heart will definitely be liked by others. I like Bill's madness, his shadow, and the weird power setting... I regret the hasty ending, but things are unpredictable. In short, I am still very grateful to Eel-san for being able to go back and finish telling this story after many things happened. Although he is incomplete, at least he has brought us joy, sadness and various emotions, and also brought me new fantasies... People should be happy when they are alive! Finished with flowers, and best wishes for Eel-san's next book★

I really accept this policy. Please ban everything about ghosts and gods. Liaozhai, Journey to the West, Qingming Festival, New Year and the words ghosts and gods are all feudal and superstitious. Why do you need them? They affect social stability.