Big Bull Demon King

I was completely poisoned after reading Chapter 19 There are a lot of shortcomings, 1. The protagonist's mood goes up and down too quickly. She is a mother if she has breasts. Before, she hated everyone in the palace. If you give her some spiritual liquid, you will believe how much her father loves and cares for her. 2 The author said that the Bull Demon clan are all illiterate, so where did the books the protagonist reads come from? 3 As a clan, we don't even have any emergency reserve of elixirs, we all rely on buying them, and let others set the price at will, without even daring to get angry. 4 There is no alchemy master in your clan. Is this possible? You can say that your clan can't get out, but can't you grab even one? This is what is called a lot of military exploits There are also a lot of minor injuries that I don't want to say anything about.

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Either update it well, or go directly to the palace. Holding on like this half-deadly is irresponsible to the people who subscribe, and the results will only get worse. Newcomers, who dares to fall into this trap after watching your update? ? If it doesn't work, just cut it off. Twenty years later, you'll be a salted fish again.

Although the author has already said at the beginning that this is a specious world of Journey to the West, no matter how outrageous it is, it must follow the setting of Journey to the West. Then the question becomes, is the protagonist's biological father in his prime when he is two hundred years old? As a great demon king, how can he be considered an immortal? He is only two hundred years old? Sun Wukong has been around for 300 years since he was born in Huaguo Mountain, wandered at sea for decades, studied for 7 years, and returned to Huaguo Mountain to fight the Demon King and become sworn sworn brothers with the Bull Demon King. He was 342 years old. At this age, in the eyes of Lao Niu and others, he is still just a junior. Young people, it is embarrassing to look like this.

Come on! I read that you said that you may not be able to continue writing and that you have to go back to the original place to write. As your reader, I will say a few words. Please bear with me if this is correct or not. First of all, let me say that the subject matter of this book is good, and your writing style is also good, but I think the biggest reason why it is not popular is that it is short. Secondly, novels are not as good as academics. Readers need to accumulate knowledge. When I read your book, in addition to first looking at the subject matter and secondly looking at the narrative ability, the most important thing I think is a like-minded person, so you can only find more like-minded people if you persevere. How can you become a platinum writer overnight? Besides, I guess your original platform probably didn't have a starting point, otherwise you wouldn't come here to write a book. If you really left your old place, it's hard to say how many readers you would have left. I'm afraid all the people you accumulated at the starting point would be lost! Besides, I love your books and I hope you are well! Come on! One last thing, you are really short!

Good book A Different Journey to the West

By the way, this book is really good. It's not a prehistoric god-like style, but it also has the aura of a prehistoric fairy tale. It's just that the new book doesn't get enough attention. Come on, author!

😁😁😁 Thousands of fires are raised, and the elemental gods who attack this element will be here

I just want to fatten up and then kill, but the author doesn't give me a chance. You update every few days. I'm almost used to it. It's so scary😱

Looking at the fan value, it seems that it has not exceeded 30 subscriptions so far. Everyone subscribe. Push up.

Well, the formula is similar to that of "Dazhou Royal Family" and "Yangshen", except that the protagonist is moved from the human race to the demon race, and the IP of Journey to the West is used to attract readers. Writing skills still need to be practiced. If there is no originality at the end, it will basically annihilate everyone in the end.

I've given all my recommendation votes to you, just to let you update more and faster.

I found that there are many comments about this new book, haha ​​🤭

Your acceptance speech makes my heart tremble! ! ! Well!

After the protagonist has been a loser for so many years, is it not good to continue to be a loser? I suddenly started practicing cultivation when I was so old. Interesting?

Update quickly, recommend and vote for you. Subscribe to your

NiuThe Demon Clan is a group of illiterate people. Even the boss is illiterate, and even the younger ones look down on scholars. They even have a library, and the books are owned by Senior Niu Demon himself. It's awesome. Please change it. The elder of the clan turned out to be a big man with a small belly and chicken intestines. How did the previous generation pass the throne to him?

After reading the first chapter, a big poisonous point appeared in all starting points, which I still can't figure out. Why do so many books show a dog slave who doesn't understand her dignity and wants to devour her master, and yet she is always alive and well without being killed or exterminated? ? ?

300,000 Words in one year, sorry to bother you

It's a good book, but it's a pity

I feel like the author didn't write 400,000 words. It's really short.

In view of the various errors in this book, including typos and name confusion, you are welcome to find bugs. The author will then make unified revisions.

Are you still writing? 😥😥😥😥

Why is such a good book so popular?

Oh my gosh! Updated! Holy shit!

If you raise this, you will become a eunuch

Both recommended tickets and monthly passes are given. Keep up the good work and keep updated.

? ? ? Updated again? , I thought I was entering the palace

It's very interesting. I hope the author will continue to update it. Don't be a eunuch 😊

I hope I don't want to be a eunuch, it's very nice