Xueba's System of Traveling Through the Heavens

I saw that the author made Gu Yi even weaker than the movie version, so I lost interest in watching it. To open a 20-meter portal, he actually had to form a three-talent formation with two disciples. You are considered a forbidden move of the Golden Saint! How could such a weakling fight against Dormammu?

Only Chapter 250? Eunuch? Hesitant to read it￣￣)σ

The top student who focuses on rhythm has unlimited flow, and the protagonist's IQ is online. Advantages: Outstanding creativity, first-class concept and imagination, which can be seen in the introduction, and there is no sign of writing failure in the first 200,000 words. The pace is fast, not muddled, the content goes straight to the topic, the protagonist has a clear goal, and the work is not muddled. The logic is clear and the logic is self-consistent. If you can do this, you will pass. The imagination is not bad, and the knowledge learned from various planes is combined without too much of a sudden feeling. Disadvantages: The description of details is lacking, and some places are too brushed off. Some settings are not very good. There seems to be something wrong with the early timeline of the Marvel world, but I don't know Marvel well enough to make a conclusion. Above.

I just read Chapter 4 and it feels good, but knowledge cannot be learned by just watching. You have to explain why the protagonist learns it instead of just adding experience points. For example, when the protagonist is learning C language, you can explain that the protagonist forcibly remembers and understands this knowledge through the system. Otherwise, if you ask the protagonist to learn quantum physics, can the protagonist learn it by watching? (Looking at the previous article, it seems that the protagonist is just in college) Am I right? You have to explain the auxiliary functions of the system clearly, right? Otherwise, it will always give people the feeling that the protagonist is learning the system by himself and only adds experience points based on the protagonist's self-study. It seems that the system only has the ability to detect the learning level, add a halo and travel between worlds, and has no ability to assist in understanding and learning knowledge. There is also the critical strike ability of the buff. You have to explain clearly what the critical strike brings? You can't just think that one plus one equals 2 critical hits and give you experience, right? You have to say that when you hit a critical hit, the system will give you some extensions of the knowledge you see, such as how to prove that one plus one equals two. Also, when you upgrade, the system will instill additional relevant knowledge in you. Otherwise, how can you explain the upgrade? For example, if you read a mathematics book and your level is upgraded from level one to level two, the system will instill some additional relevant knowledge into you. The higher the level, the more and more advanced knowledge will be instilled during the upgrade. After all, the protagonist is taking the system to the real world of lower latitudes. He is not playing a game. You just have to click and read a book and spend time to learn knowledge in the game. In reality, these unreasonable places need to be explained through the evolution of real rules. In other words, when the protagonist's system has learned certain knowledge and experience, is it just a simple upgrade? You have to explain what benefits the upgrade will bring. It is not a task reward that gives you a few buffs. For example, if your math knowledge is upgraded, your ability to learn math will become stronger and your ability to understand math will improve. The same is true for magic. You, an ordinary person who has never been exposed to magic, will directly show you forbidden spell level knowledge. Can you understand it? Right? So you have to add a restriction. For example, if you have level 1 magic knowledge, you can only understand magic from 0 to level 1. If you have level 2 magic, you can barely understand it. If you have level 3 magic, you can only roughly understand what it is? Level 4 to level 6 magic is completely incomprehensible, level 7 to level 9 magic will give you a headache, and level 10 to 12 magic will give you a headache to the point of unconsciousness. You can't be able to understand forbidden spell level knowledge and law level knowledge with a level one magic knowledge and still gain experience, right? And if you can explain a lot of words, why not do it?

Everything is fine, the only thing is that the update is not efficient

Has the protagonist become an idiot after returning to Marvel? It feels like it was written entirely by two people

The recent photos have forcibly lowered the IQ of two people, which is very uncomfortable!

Indeed, the Taiwu volume is written incomprehensibly, so I am going to skip this section.

There are so many loopholes that I really can't explain them and it's very embarrassing to watch! Let me start with this: Shouldn't the rescue center be directly responsible for destroying an ordinary person's home? Let SHIELD do this too? Let Colson pick you up? It's like the National Security Bureau caught a spy and bombed an ordinary citizen's home, and then the deputy minister led a team to pick up the spy and put him in a secret base?

In the past, study was the main line and the plot was a secondary line. Now the IQ of the protagonist in Thor dramas has dropped sharply and he is too fond of Thor.

It's a bit poisonous. If you have a system, you should study knowledge honestly and improve your strength. You are always cooperating with this and that, helping this and that. It's interesting. You know that the Marvel Thieves are dangerous, but you don't quickly improve your knowledge in a low-key manner, strengthen yourself, and build a top student system. The result is that the content is like what a top student does? Just do some useless things.

The protagonists who like this kind of academic master and have skills are the most popular now. The kind of people who got by just relying on cleverness are a thing of the past. Now, knowledge is power!

After Taiwu painted the world, I just said that I had done it for nothing. Also, this system is too weak. Gu Yi can modify it.

Why do you have to endure being treated as having your brain damaged by your friends when you can solve a problem with magic? Do we have to wait until later to shock everyone? ? This is a writing method that forces suppression first and then promotion! These two chapters complete the previous

Why do I always think of that dog named Thor?

I feel that the pattern in the later period is not good. I should strengthen the knowledge I have learned. There are so many books in the library. It is not possible to learn almost all kinds of knowledge and then go to a confidential place to learn more, or to focus on computers to reach the highest level, while studying other things, all day long. Then the prodigal still got into Hanmo, my God, my family was arrested, and I didn't use my own resources to find Kersheng to escort him there by himself. I was so embarrassed that I had cancer. The reason in the middle was so funny. Brother, the mechanical warfare you did before was enough for me to do it for you.

Taiwu scroll. . . . After reading a few chapters, I don't plan to read anymore until the author opens a new map.

The characters in Marvel are too mentally retarded, and the characters of the people in Marvel have not been thoroughly studied. It will look much more comfortable if the system is simple and the text is not ridiculous.

Why can a random sidekick know about S. H. I. E. L. D., And what time period is it now?

The early stage was good, but in the later stage, the plot started to be changed randomly. When did you become a zombie when you were killed by a frost giant? What about your magic when your friends turned into zombies? Eaten by you? The Frost Giants are pretty good in the original work, but are they so exaggerated that they can't even be defeated by Iron Man?

Again, using numerical values ​​to represent life,

The whole text is self-deprecating, the original work's infinite wisdom is too shabby

It's okay to write without plot, but what the hell are you trying to do to force your wits down? Besides, you need to follow the basic laws when writing without plot, right?

Chapter 35: The protagonist's IQ is too low. They say it's the Hanmo Group. He went to the laboratory before, but now his friend has been kidnapped and he says he doesn't know.

The author could obviously continue writing, but he just didn't. M9( ｀д´ )!!!!

The first part is pretty good, but the writing starts to get a bit messy in the middle, and the author obviously gave everyone a mind-destroying buff. The second part of the story is super messy, and you can't write it slowly. The original novel with one thousand chapters ended with more than two hundred chapters, and I guess the author himself can't continue writing 😰

Level 3 programming can access internal permissions, which is painful to watch.

The first mantra! Second! Big mouth, talk nonsense! You said you went to the Marvel Universe? Well, there are a lot of technological magics. You just need to learn to create them. The Mourning Whip Incident, the Thor Incident, etc. If you talk a lot, just say a few words about what you know. What do you want to do? The world of Harry Potter is divided into attribute magic? That's the power of blood. I looked at it for a long time and didn't realize that you have blood? Their ancestors were contaminated by magical creatures. The three unforgivable curses are the soul-type instant death curse, the Fierce Fire Curse, and the Shadowless Blade. Can you be sure that they are really attribute witchcraft? Okay, let's just treat this as a system cheat. Anyway, the only thing I find disgusting is talking too much. Is this true if you know something in real life? Especially confidential or future matters? Just like a hammer, you said it was Thor's hammer, why? Is S. H. I. E. L. D. Stupid? You are not a very important person. You have some talents, but they are not indispensable. Luo Dan really doesn't want to understand? Even if you say it's because of magic, you'll be sure just by hearing it. Really, the author, not me, is stupid. Why does the old saying say that you don't want to shoot, because people will die if you talk nonsense, and people will die if you show off to the limelight! Which of the American comic heroes you see who dare to come out does not have a profound background? Those who are not deep are underground heroes. They all act in the dark, and both enemies and friends may be the opportunity for your death.

Is this the end of the book? I just took a look at the catalog and don't want to go to the world of Harry Potter anymore?

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