Systematic Super Grocery Store

This novel has a good idea and a good plot, but it's too wordy.

The plot is pretty good, but the writing needs to be improved.

The author's writing is very nice... Everything is very good. But I feel that when new customers come to buy things, there can be a little more inner drama. As the grocery store gradually becomes more famous, it can hold some competitions, which will be more entertaining (personal suggestion, whisper bb)

You can leave a message about the items, characters, etc. You want to draw.

The grocery store can be expanded into a vending machine, and the cashier is responsible for explaining it to people. As for the protagonist, just put a few booths next to it and chat with a few friends.

If I were as rich as Pig's Feet, I would have bought a few Lolita to warm my bed.

The content is okay, but too wordy

Updates are slow? The author cheers and recommends ~

The main character is aloof which is a little better

I hope there will be a female protagonist, and she won't be like other movies of the same type, which are single from beginning to end. (•́ω•̀ ٥)

I have seen the introduction of the same product at least 5 times in different chapters.

Come on, the author, I am very much looking forward to it even though I am a student 😁

The writing style needs to be improved, please do your best, author⊙▽⊙

Why is there no one? There are no comments on these two chapters!

The book is still good, but could you please stop so many typos? They are so wrong. Does it have anything to do with the excitement?

Ah, well, there are too many modal particles. It is difficult to read and the language is not clear.

Paddle hard, this is almost always written in the third person, and there is always a mental activity. I can't stand it any longer. You guys can continue watching it, making it look like a commentary.

There are so many good things to go out and wander around. I don't know how many times I have died in a world where force is respected. A single treasure can make people madly hunt for it, not to mention there are so many. Only by living in a living can you live a long life. Even on earth, in a legal society, people know that you have 10 million in your pocket. How dare you take to the streets?

After watching the first part, I felt that the protagonist was very annoying and very mean-spirited. I would like to ask if there is any change in the later part? Is the same character still the same?

I didn't expect to see updates from you in my lifetime

The first month of 2022 is almost over, no update yet?

Updates are so slow, thank you so much! Can I update it once a day?

How dare you ask for tickets when there are three updates a month? ? ? ?

Is this a eunuch? Do I still want to subscribe?

Many times it is wrong. Can the author correct it?

It's been a few years, and I've come back with lots of experience 🙂

Are there so many orphans now? It seems that the author has a deep understanding of

I seriously suspect that the author is from Qiandao Lake, and also from Nanshan Development Zone 🤔

I just want to say that this book has more than 2 million words. The author has at least 150 words. The system page has not changed at all. I just keep reading and just summarize it briefly. I have to write it out. There is also a protagonist who thinks about all kinds of things for a while, and talks about the boundaries of empires for a while. The last sentence has nothing to do with me. It doesn't matter. What are you thinking about? Why write it down? It's really bad. If you don't believe it, you'll see a pirated copy. You'll probably be annoyed after reading it.

It feels like the author is going crazy. People across the continent seem to be buying and buying without having to do anything else. The main reason is that there is no emotional line, and the timeline progress is too slow. In one year,