Courier in the Movie World

The first chapter is poisonous! The plot arrangement is too deliberate! There are bionic people and you still need to carry express delivery? Inexplicable drama

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I came here from QuoKou, and I saw that the author said at the end that the new book is much better than this one. As a result, there are no other books on the author's homepage on QuoKou, and there are none here, but since I am here, I will comment on this book. This book is really poisonous in the early stage. I can see that the characters in the author's writings are very violent. Especially in the movies I have seen, the characters in them have long been stereotyped in my mind. They are completely different in the author's writing. Of course, I have strong poison resistance, so I regard the movie as a movie and the author's writing is real. I use this idea to resist poisoning. Then there is the harem. It's not impossible. After all, there are millions of readers who all have their own favorites. However, the author did not give an ending to the many harems. Only one girl with the weakest sense of existence in the book got a good death and wrote an ending. The others are not even qualified to mention it. The author can argue that it leaves room for the readers' imagination, but you don't give other people a written description. How can you leave room for the readers' imagination? After all, what the readers imagine is really just wild imagination, and the few words left in the author's writing are the directional suspense the author gives us.

This plot has something to do with express delivery, forcibly delivering express. Is it possible to switch to another system?

The first world is really poisonous, Is it necessary to do everything possible to make Steve the captain? I remember there were two serums in the original novel, couldn't you please use them with Steve? Or remind the doctor in advance to hide the other one and give it to Steve after you have done something good? The author insists on developing the plot to a hopeless point, and kills congressmen and Hooch. To be honest, I have seen the protagonist and I would call you the most useless person. If you make someone pregnant and then want to kill someone, what if you kill Hotch? And then go to jail? Where is the child? Waste There is another loophole. I remember that in the original work, it was very easy to find out that the congressman was a traitor, but in the end, when you came here, he became innocent. If you don't look at it from God's perspective, even if Steve can't be the captain, even if Hodg must be the captain, you can just leave after delivering the shield, but can't you mail it? ? ? ? Or arouse his greed and take it himself. No? Do you insist on killing? It wasn't an assassination, it was a killing in front of everyone. I was literally poisoned. I really suggest that the author take a look at "Gu Zhenren". There are many such thrilling links in "Gu Zhenren". How does the author write when he is forced by reality to have nowhere to retreat? Unlike you, he will resort to the system if it doesn't work. Hehe

A "Alas! Who sent this express to me?" "You'll know when you open it and take a look." "Just a note? What's written on it?" "Please turn on your phone, who wrote this? A prank?" "What? I... I... Went to Sanjiang!" B "Ding, the host task is completed, and you get: (a cart of Deshi blades)." "The system is still like this, and you can get a lot of money from selling this cart. " C "Why did I run out of money? When did I buy a Deshi blade?" "I just sent you one that I wanted to send. The author scolded the post with a lot of razor blades, could it be..." A few days later "Why is there no information about the harvester? I'm going to eat dirt. If it doesn't work, I will call the police." "You have been blacklisted and cannot be connected, SORYY, I......" "Where?!!!" B "Remind readers not to seek trouble to get themselves killed. The author has a system behind it. It is still very scary, and it is also a thief..." "Ding, get it New mission: Give a chrysanthemum to the school girl with bare buttocks in front of everyone. " "No! 555~555~5..."

Haha, this is my first reward for you. Although it's not much, I hope you will continue writing books.

I've been here three times but I can't stand it, especially the meaning of the biological battery? Control pig's feet? Or what!

I really like it, keep up the good work, although it's a bit late in the middle, but if you still want to write science fiction in the future, I will give you some ideas and force a wave of strong talkers. Questions and ideas: 1. Why is it a courier company and not other services? We can dig deeper into this and there are many ideas. A. For example, in order to satisfy the cause and effect cycle, the senior management asked the middle management to complete tasks to repay the debts they owed when they were in the middle management, and so on. In the end, the boss wants to jump out of the three-dimensional universe and advance to the fourth dimension, so he is collecting resources? B. The protagonist was actually accidentally downgraded to a low dimension during a high-dimensional war. In order to help his friend return to the high dimension, Gao Dimensional's former friends planted clues to upgrade from low dimension to high dimension. The term express delivery is a "key" to unlock loopholes in the rules. Various movie universes are also intended to make friends realize that they are outsiders and not be lost in the low-dimensional universe. C. All couriers are beacons from different universes collected by the big boss. The different stories that each beacon has read and thought about in its mind will automatically generate a new independent universe. The boss behind the scenes wants to accommodate various thinking universes, so he needs a key to open the door and a mess stick to confuse the lines of cause and effect, so that the boss can harvest them afterwards. Therefore, every express delivery employee is a kind of chicken who is stupid enough to let his boss rape his brain. D. More... 2. The protagonist feels like he is being chased all the time and has to become stronger. This kind of plot will start to weaken in the middle period. It cannot be repeated all the time. It needs to start with a new direction. However, fighting for hegemony is too cliche. Maybe solving puzzles is a good idea? 3. I feel that the world view of the multiverse should be more diverse. Don't be tied to the perspective of human-like civilization and go all the way to the dark forest law of the jungle. For example, indescribable life forms like Solaris also exist. And the dreams and pursuits of living things are also very diverse. For example, the mother body of the Matrix enslaves humans for the evolution of mechanical populations. For example, the cruel plant reproduction in the comic Green King has destroyed all other species in the world. For example, Thanos wants to balance the world and wants to cut the number of living creatures in half, Cthulhu Mythos - All things are unified, Naruto's Infinite Tsukuyomi, Kyubey in Puella Magi Madoka Magica, Those dedicated to resurrecting the dead in the empire of the corpses, etc... There are many strange thoughts and brains. I think more of these indescribable objects and different civilizations in the universe will make the story more exciting.

The poisonous point of this book: Perhaps the author deliberately let the protagonist ruin the plot in order to write a story that was different from the original plot. But it was written too deliberately, so it was very poisonous. For example, in the Captain America world, as someone who is familiar with the plot, in order to complete the mission, he should wait for Captain America to finish injecting the serum, and then just give him the shield? It's better to write the protagonist as a character who doesn't know the plot. Isn't this all reasonable? The poisonous point will become more exciting!

I haven't read the book, but the introduction says it's mainly science fiction, so I wanted to ask the author how many of the books you listed are science fiction? Do you have any misunderstandings about science fiction?

The first world has been poisoned to death

I gave up after reading more than a dozen chapters and was beaten and abused all the time. The purpose of reading time-travel system stories is to read the fun stories, not to read about being tortured.

This book is okay, but the first world has too many ups and downs, which makes people want to give up. It should start to get popular slowly at first, and then it will become a big hit, and then it will almost replace Captain America, and then a new villain will be introduced. If you don't read the rest, you will give up.

Everywhere the protagonist goes there are a bunch of enemies. Spend money to choose advanced teleportation, and teleportation can still cause problems. During a fight, the battery would run out at every turn. This is the protagonist! Are you going to be so stupid?

The author actually likes Kardashian and doesn't even know that Kardashian has a big butt. What a retarded fantasy.

It is said that after issuing two monthly passes, you can get more fines 😏😏

I looked at a picture, and if I want to deliver express delivery, I just want to deliver it by express delivery. Just do some crazy things! I don't want to talk about anything else, just the ending part. The system said that the mission is completed and you can go back, but you have to kill the black snake to Captain America. I am speechless. If it weren't for the author's cheating, he would have died a long time ago. How could it be your turn to fight back?

I have to say that this is the most brainless protagonist. I couldn't stand watching the first chapter! The death of the protagonist makes people want to laugh →_→ Even though he knew it was a dangerous profession, he killed someone last time. Are you so enthusiastic about helping others move goods? They all asked to put it at the door, and they couldn't wait to enter the house to die →_→.....

It's very well written, don't write it again. I stopped watching when I saw where Dr. Hawkins died. A pure sadistic novel with a forced plot.

I wrote almost 50 chapters of Send a Shield, and I was also drunk.

Toxic, just like a retard in Captain America

I read the introduction and thought it was a good book, but it turned out to be a torture novel. Your book is really "too good", a pure dog torture novel. I read a few chapters and the more I read, the more I wanted to fuck. You are pushing my limits. Brother, have you ever seen a Marvel movie? You write like this, ugh😔, this is the first time I have seen this novel about traveling through the Marvel movie world. Really, change your career quickly, or read e-books for a few years before writing, please.

Good order today

The main world is a bit dark, I can't accept it! Still gave up!

Is this recommended for daily reading? A 2 million word novel worth 24,000 fans?

Your book is so well written! Farewell!

You won't see much improvement from now on, should you nc or nc?

When can I see it? Already completely forgotten

The mission has been stated. Give the shield to "Captain America". You can accept the enhancement with peace of mind. Aren't you Captain America? Doing so much nonsense.