
All the Cubs I Raised Have Become Big Devils
我养的崽都成了大魔王
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 597k Words
- Genre
- Fantasy Romance
- Audience
- Female
- Subgenre
- Eastern Xuanhuan
- Updated
- 5y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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Some suggestions
The person pronouns must be unified and should not be changed frequently. It is okay to express the psychological activities of the protagonist once in a while, but it is not necessary if there are more. Another thing is not to use words that are very colloquial or funny, which will make it difficult for readers to integrate into the cultural environment, such as "let me be healthy", "haofa" and other such words. When expressing the protagonist's mood, attitude, and tone, do not use punctuation marks, such as "...?" And question marks that appear alone. Although it is convenient to write, it will make the article seem self-talking and unclear, and it will not read smoothly and neatly. You might as well think more about how to express the desired emotion with words. Keep up the good work, the subject matter is still very interesting.
This author doesn't give a damn and doesn't follow the circle.
! It feels okay. Let's see if I gain some weight.
I just took a look at the characters in this book, two male protagonists?
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