Dream Hero System

On the first day when the contract was changed to contract status, Haoyun Leonard, a retired performer, came to support me with his unique skills without asking. Thank you three. Although you gave me the reward because of our good relationship, I will work hard to write better works in the future.

It has been almost 20 days since I published the book. I have experienced a lot of things over and over again. I have not been in a good state in the past few days. I feel like boiled water. Today I will adjust my mood and summarize my shortcomings: 1. The main plot was pushed too quickly, resulting in a serious lack of exciting points. The story was eager to speed up the progress of the story. The story lacked the obvious joy for readers, similar to the immediate reward of experience points and equipment after defeating monsters in the game. I will pay more attention to this point, slow down the main plot rhythm slightly, and add more logical exciting points. 2. Some things are not explained clearly and the characters behave abruptly. This is also the reason for the eagerness to promote the main plot. I am always afraid that explaining things will cause the rhythm of the story to be delayed. In the future, I will explain the things that should be explained as clearly as possible, and the things that should not be explained... Are just foreshadowing, and readers will understand after reading it slowly. 3. The dialogue is too bland. Although character dialogue is an important part of promoting the story, and a good story should have good dialogue, when I wrote it, I lacked side descriptions, such as the characters' demeanor and actions. I only focused on writing dialogue, which seemed dry and tasteless. I will work hard to correct this. 4. The emotions between the characters sometimes seem awkward. This is due to a lack of writing skills and a desire for quick success. The emotions between the characters should be allowed to settle more, so that they can resonate better. All in all, I am too impatient and want to present the story to the readers all at once. This is not possible. It is better to slowly unveil it and let the readers taste the story. I usually have to go to class, so I can only summarize these 4 points. I hope readers can criticize and correct me a lot. I will study hard and come up with better works! Love you! 🌹

Emmm... It is the first time for a newcomer to write a book. There are still some bugs in the writing routine in the first dozen chapters. Looking back, I am really not very satisfied. Later, I slowly started to write some of my own things. I ask readers to continue reading. Although I am in college and have to take classes, I admit that this work is not excellent, but the writing methods that need to be learned, the things that should be improved, and the things that should be updated will not be left behind. I will work hard, make progress little by little, and strive to bring better works to readers. I would like to thank all readers! ❤️