The Most Shameless Alchemist in History

Give some advice to those who come in, including the author. After countless drug trials, I understood that a book must have a plot, characters, and writing. The plot is linked to imagination, characterization is linked to experience, and writing is linked to knowledge level. If you want to know whether this book is good or not, you can just give up. This book is about three golden chapters. Not to mention the writing, which can only be considered passable, the characterization is so damn painful. First of all, take a girl who takes a bath under the moon as an example. First, the label you add to her is beauty, and then the second is the girl's psychology of wanting to hack the other person to death for the voyeur. This is understandable and can be said to be in the past, but the appearance of the next few Warcraft orangutans completely collapsed. First of all, according to her words, this girl can easily defeat the World of Warcraft orangutan. A setting with relatively high force was added, but this setting conflicted with her previous setting where she was ashamed and angry and wanted to hack the male protagonist to death. When the orangutan appeared, did she just let the hero go?! This photo created a very awkward feeling, without any foreshadowing. Faced with a small threat to the poor monster that she could defeat, a normal person would think that person is so stupid. I will look at it later when I calm down. Now the easiest way to shape this problem is to apply templates, such as the well-known and easy to apply templates such as the tsundere template, the yandere template, and the murderer template. Just write it down step by step according to the character's personality. In this way, we can avoid the problem of major problems in the character's logic. Then there is the rationality. I read this book because I saw that your last book was evenly ordered. Unexpectedly, I feel like I am still a super novice, that is, I have not grown much... So the introduction of your book needs to be rewritten, and it is best to change the name to something more normal. Look carefully at my previous paragraph. The three paragraphs have different meanings. This is probably how people feel due to the sudden change. And I doubt if you wrote the outline... Or set the world... Come on (ง •̀_•́)

Although I haven't read your work, the author's spirit of repeated defeats is worth learning from. . . .

Such a number of words and such achievements are not just words. It is not easy. If you persist, you will achieve something. I am talking about this kind of person.

In any case, I admire the character of the author of this book... Go and advertise more, seriously, no joke. The word-of-mouth effect also requires those first people.

How did the author get only 16 reviews for a book and still finish it?

The plot is also too bad, the timeline spans too long, and there are so many chapters that the plot and title don't match.

This is the first time my brother has seen people with less than 100 fans. How poisonous is this?

Damn it, my grades are so bad that I still need to add so many words.

"The Barefoot Doctor's Manual", "Friends of Dual-Purpose Talents", "Militia Training Manual", "Extremely Powerful and Practical - Unlimited Combat Techniques!" Simple, practical, high-quality collection value, recommended to you

This author has strong perseverance, such a good person