Japanese Entertainment Novelist

In order to prevent this novel from entering the palace, let me say a few words. This novel is very good but very unpleasant. What's good is that the novel's portrayal of the protagonist is too realistic. It can be seen that the author put himself into this novel. Therefore, many Shuangwen readers are discouraged. But this exactly reflects people's hearts and humanity rather than nutritious fast food. Moreover, the protagonist's name is Ye Xiao, which further proves that the author of this book wrote more for himself than for the readers. The dissatisfaction lies in the conflict between characters and events. For example, Akimoto Yasushi's suppression and Murakami's support. This plot is quite poisonous. It is true that the protagonist needs to be beaten by society so that there is drama and conflict, but it cannot be forced. It feels like the plot given by those fourth-rate screenwriters from the Internet University who are small and broad-minded. By the way, Murakami's support for younger generations is well-founded, but it's really too much to ask Murakami to help the protagonist just by saying a word. At least he must produce a work. And the reason for offending Akimoto Yasu is really nonsense. So this novel is very poisonous but good, very unpleasant but interesting.

To prevent theft again, the author would like to think of other ways.

The reason why I went back and forth to delete this book was because it was really difficult to accept the setting of the male protagonist in the book. The protagonist is a complete scumbag. Looking at it now, the best ending for the protagonist is for everything to collapse.

This Shiraishi sister's plot needs to be solved as soon as possible, and she is going to let her sister become the big boss while saving the trouble? Your book is already a harem, why do you have to be so literary and young? Be more relaxed and remember that this is a starting point online novel. You should also write about the protagonist's own development. Is it reasonable if he has no money or power? And if this continues, I guess many people will not subscribe. I feel like I've been poisoned by you, and I don't want to subscribe anymore. 🤫

The end of the first volume is stunning, not only detonating the foreshadowing of the previous chapter, but also paving the way for the emotional direction of the following chapters. Although the characteristics of each character are somewhat confusing, it is also reasonable if you think about it carefully. I hope the author will not add too many female characters. The ignorant Nishino Nanase and the humble Shiraishi Mai. These two characters have been quite successfully created. No matter how many characters there are, they are just a pile of facial makeup. I will always support the author DaDe, come on, take care of your health.

Hurry up and end the plot of the Shiraishi sisters.

Um. . How should I put it, what the author wrote is actually good and very real, not too brainless. But for me personally, reality is bad enough. It would be too bad to read novels and experience reality again. So I gave up. If someone calls me a glass-hearted person, a real loser or something like that. All I can say is that you are really lucky. The setbacks you encountered may have been easily overcome, or there may have been help from noble people. So be it.

I just got into it last night and have read more than 100 chapters. I just want to ask when the male protagonist will lose weight. In my opinion, there are no fat people who cannot lose weight (except for diseases), there are only fat people who do not work hard. Nowadays, there are many fitness teachings, but if I still don't work hard to lose weight, I keep oppressing others with my fat appearance, which is unacceptable 😤😤😤

The author writes very SB. Please pay attention.

I specially subscribed to 500 comments and tolerated all the other poisonous points. I was really disgusted when I saw the protagonist lying about being a disciple of Haruki Murakami. His character is so bad! Does the author regard everyone's subscription and comments as a password to wealth?

I have specially subscribed to 500 comments 🙂. This book is really hard to describe in one sentence. The author might as well start a female channel and write about sadomasochism. There will definitely be a market for it.

In order to praise Nishino Nanase, the author simply pushed Lao Bai and Lao Qiao into the ground. It was a bit excessive.

This book has too many poisonous points, and it has become unaccustomed to it. In the early stage, the pig's feet are completely hugged by the thighs. If it weren't for the thighs that always appreciate the pig's feet at critical moments, it would be convenient for him to GG. It is better to cheat the pig's feet. Without cheating, the pig's feet can explode in a reasonable way. Every time GG has a thigh for him to hold, the thigh appears too abruptly, and the pig's feet are unreasonable and frustrating.

Such a useless male protagonist, the author really has you

Are there any other novels by Asuka? Or recommend Naituan's novels~

Author, it's a pity that you don't write about female romance.

Can the protagonist become more handsome after losing weight? How can a disgusting fat nerd be liked by an idol...

What the hell are you writing? ? Can this kind of book still have so many chapters? ? What about your readers**? It's a far-fetched way of writing. It's really bullshit.

I think I can write 500chapters. Come on.

You will be scolded for being too Japanese, and you will be scolded for translating the literal meaning that is understandable in China. Alas, it is really difficult. Culture and social structures are different. Sometimes if you can't substitute it, just switch to the third-person perspective.

The main character's name is too poisonous. For the foreign literature category, why don't you give it a name in Japanese format? What the hell is Ye Xiao? It makes me laugh every time I see this name. Now that the soul has passed through, whether you are picking up girls in Japan or writing a book, the name will suit the background of the story. It makes me laugh when I look at it, I can't hold on anymore, give up!

It's 1.1 Million words, which is quite hard.

This book... Forget it, people who can accept it will find it very comfortable.

How disgusting. Isn't this male protagonist a scumbag? Is it natural for west Tian to put down his children and come here every day to provide warmth? Moreover, the character is not good, the female characters are all kinds of shady...

To be honest, the writing is good, but this anti-theft thing really sucks for me. . . Lose readers.

After reading Chapter 17, I felt that the things done by people other than the protagonist were normal and there was nothing wrong with them. It was very cold but also very realistic. The reality is that if you are worthless, then when you fall, no one will come to help you, they will just walk by indifferently, or stay and look at you. Friends are not given to you with phone bills. If you don't need something, you will get something. If you don't pay, there will be no reward. The protagonist's character has no shining points. It is indeed as expressed by the characters in the book, very scumbag. The girl Nishino thinks the protagonist is good just because she doesn't know what the protagonist is thinking. If the part where the protagonist plagiarizes the novel is removed, maybe this girl won't feel this way. Blindly complaining about others without thinking about yourself, why should others treat you the way you expect? There is no love or hate for no reason, and the character is too naive and too cowardly. He needs the affirmation of others to be motivated, and is afraid of the negation of others. Just like a child who likes the affirmation of his parents and teachers, when he is denied, he will only act like a rebellious child, going further and further in the wrong direction.

This novel is considered useless. There are many places where people are not very satisfied.

The protagonist is getting worse and worse, but I can understand how it is possible for the entertainment industry to play innocent and single-female protagonists. I am a time traveler, and I can be a bulldozer if I have the ability... Do I want to wreak havoc on Korean entertainment and push her dozens or hundreds... But why did Ishihara Rimi get sent away? In the previous chapters, I was really afraid that Nishino Nanase would be sent to Ninomiya Kazuya, but now Ishihara Satomi is actually sent away... Are you planning to deal with all the people you have pushed for various reasons, and only Nishino Nanase will be left in the end? Also, did the author Kasumi Arimura forget to write about it in the early stage?

The plot has been quite mysterious lately. . . . . . However, plot development has to create conflicts!

Ms. Nishida is the biggest winner