The World Is Vast

You are suitable for writing about martial arts, but you are not comfortable writing about realistic and inspirational things. Your wording is too exaggerated. You only wrote the beauty of the story, but not the love of the world. You didn't express emotions in the dialogue, which makes it feel stiff. You should use your strengths and avoid your weaknesses. You interpreted everyone flawlessly, which is very detrimental to the development of the story later on. When you describe the protagonist, I completely feel that you are describing Tathagata Buddha. When depicting scenery with ink, the things brought out are often neither painful nor itchy. The paragraph is too long, making it difficult to read. You may consider dividing it into paragraphs frequently. Your writing is very good, but you just made a mistake. That's how you treat ink like gold.

The article has an old style, collect it and read it slowly

This is an ancient martial arts novel, right!

When did the author write a history or fairy tale book?

Looking at the title of the chapter, it always seems like, uh, calligraphy artist.