Rebirth of the Biochemical Empire

After reading a few chapters, I had a question: Is Su Xiao who appears in the article the heroine?

Those who are engaged in academics and have a little more brains are not short of money. I am a medical student, and one of my teachers sold a patent on bioengineering for more than 80 million yuan. There is also an old professor who sold several patents worth tens of millions. Everyone thinks that if Yuan Longping hadn't opened up his patents, or just licensed them, the richest man would still be Gates.

I don't understand technical and academic matters, but I feel that the portrayal of the protagonist is a failure. He is impulsive, outspoken, and pushy. This shouldn't be characteristic of a scientist, or a scientist who has been reborn with a golden finger. Aren't you afraid of being known by others?

The previous paragraph was really at least five years behind the times in terms of the level of conflict shaping. . . The author is really new, and I don't know if the previous coolness has deteriorated a long time ago. I feel pretty good recently, at least I'm back to the level that a protagonist should be. Some of the contradictions are made very forceful, but they're not necessary at all. It's so fun to watch when you're clearly using technology to set up traps! For me personally, the biggest pleasure is not pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger, but a real tiger eating people. Also, if there is no guarantee or method to prevent the other party from discovering or retaliating, it is best to either not do it or do it absolutely. The plot of deliberately provoking someone and then waiting for them to retaliate appears once. It can be said that I have little experience, but it always appears and is not suitable for a character with a high IQ. The biggest difference between smart people and stupid people is that they know that one can gain wisdom by taking a hard time. If the author is worried about how to create a mini-boss, it is recommended to go to Zhihu to see what kind of mentors are the most cheating. I have selected some that are difficult to write, and the rest are sorted by level. Writing hundreds of thousands of words each is enough to arrange daily conflicts. Of course, they are just suggestions. It is best for the author to know exactly how to write, and other people's suggestions are just suggestions after all. There has been a clear trend in the overall conflict and the main plot recently. I hope the pattern can be as large as possible based on rationality. I don't know if the author has such a thing as a character list. I feel that the personalities of some characters are a bit stereotyped. For example, the first two mini-bosses are either sinister or sad. People can be bad in many different ways. In fact, it is very simple to make the plot exciting. It is just a conflict between characters. However, character conflicts based on personality, interests, values, etc. Are much better than simply pretending to be a slap in the face. Even if a bad guy is a stereotype, if you delve into the reasons why he became bad and then kill him, the character will become much more three-dimensional. Of course, all the above must be based on a reasonable basis, otherwise it will be very dramatic. I wrote this long just because the author is indeed professional enough to write what I want to see, and I don't really want it to be ruined by the plot. Of course, everyone has different situations, so don't absorb everything I say, otherwise it may become my customized novel. Authors can try to create character portraits for readers of their works, and analyze the characteristics of the target readers they attract, such as what plots we like and what we find toxic. Of course, this is based on experience and experience, but if it can be made and executed well, it can indeed attract a specific group of die-hard fans. I think that if the previous plot of this book is not changed, it will probably drive away more than half of the people, but it will be okay but it will not become popular. Of course, this is poisonous milk, and my poisonous milk is very poisonous (laughs). But it also depends on the later development. For example, if I came across the previous plot while chasing the book, I would probably give up on it, but now I can barely read it in one sitting. It's okay if you don't become popular. It's okay to accumulate experience. Many authors only become popular after their second or third book.

Very well written, good luck to the author. Although the biological knowledge in it is basically incomprehensible. But it does not hinder reading. Don't reduce this type of biological description later. Also, if the national level must be involved in the later stage, then be more positive. Don't cause any unpleasantness. Nothing else, just two recommendation votes. Don't take it personally. Hope to see more.

Why add some intrigue? The unreasonable thing to do is to show off and slap in the face, but the fight is not good. What a great scholarly novel turned into an urban novel. There are so many clichés in urban novels that I'm tired of them all. Since I am writing an article about making a fortune in technology, and learning to be reborn as a god-level academic master, isn't it possible for the protagonist to use his golden fingers to build a private laboratory and become a master? There are actually two plots where the girlfriend is in danger and is forced to join the research and development of biological weapons. I personally feel very uncomfortable. The protagonist of a good novel takes the initiative to advance the plot. The protagonist must grasp the overall situation and direction. He must walk his own path and find his own needs. It is reasonable to encounter enemies in the process of chasing dreams. Your plot is pushed by the external environment. The protagonist becomes a magnet, and all bad things come to your door. The fewer plots where the protagonist is unable to resist or takes risks, the better! Because being pushed away means that one's destiny is in the hands of others, which is taking risks. If others don't follow the plan you specified, wouldn't the protagonist be doomed? Once everyone realizes this when they are studying, they feel uncomfortable. When they find that their IQ is -1, they vote with their feet. Therefore, the plot design must be reasonable and reasonable. What should you do if your girlfriend fails to call and something happens? This is very possible, and readers will feel very unhappy when they discover this possibility. There is intrigue and frame-up in such a top-secret high-level task as developing biological viruses. Isn't it wrong if such a dark-minded person exposes the so-called research and development of biological viruses? Yes, then the whole of China will take the blame. Isn't the basis for this plot unstable and top-secret missions like child's play? In addition, the author is not rigorous when describing the source of the protagonist's technology, and all kinds of excuses are exposed instantly. Don't write this kind of plot, it is called hypocrisy. The author knows that this is not good, but he just writes it. It seems that the protagonist is not smart enough, and the readers are unhappy after reading it. For example, if you write some thoughts about the protagonist, how to hide yourself reasonably and package yourself so that everyone thinks you are a true academic master, will everyone feel more comfortable? Because no one else can see through the book, only the protagonist and us readers know about it. Isn't it secretly cool? My suggestion is that the author can refer to it to see if it is reasonable and try to avoid making repeated mistakes.

Let's change the protagonist. In the first chapter, after drinking some wine, I don't know what my last name is. Later, I do things impulsively. I am already forty years old, and I am still a person who has died and been reborn. I am not stable at all, and I have given important information to others.

The subject matter and concept are very good, but there are a few things I want to say. First, since you have conceived a biochemical empire, you must think carefully about politics, publicity, funding, security, and technology. For example, politically, if you show value, the country will naturally give you equal status and protection. I hope the toxic plot of the direct threat from the National Research Institute in the previous chapter will not come again. Second, if you go back for more than ten years and build an empire, it is not just a sentence. No matter what opponent you face, if you are intimidated by others, there is no empire, because you will encounter too many assassinations, beauties, and human traps later. Without your own thinking, it will still be empty words. I won't say much else. The idea is very good and I hope it will achieve good results.

After carefully reading the reviews from book friends, I will also say a few words to the author. The first starting point is not Creation. There are many good readers in the starting point, so the author does not have to worry about no one reading the book if there is no part in the book about pretending to be a competition (please refer to the articles about the academic master of the dirty star and the academic master of the capybara). Secondly, after the girlfriend incident, it has indeed become more and more plot-oriented. If it is not corrected, some readers will be lost. Third, don't think that a book can embrace all rivers and attract readers from all walks of life. In fact, readers choose authors, and authors choose readers. So many readers posting long comments means they are optimistic about you. Of course, everyone has to survive, and even if writing a book is just a hobby, you have to consider the income. There are many authors who can actually write higher-level works, but they choose to make money more easily by choosing simple writing. Of all the authors, the one I admire the most is Ziluxing. His three consecutive works, from the first one which is a pornographic novel to the latest one, the style of each one is changing. Although the second one failed, he at least tried, so his third book "Xueba" was a great success. The author can refer to it. It's not that he can't pretend to be cool, but it's a matter of height and style.

The book is good, but a little lacking. There is actually no need for this part of the lab, it's a slap in the face. Will people in their 40s care about this kind of thing? This time it's a crime meeting, not a competition. I'll leave after doing my own thing. I also have to arrange a plot to show off.

February 17, 2019, late and cloudy. The incense ceremony begins! ! ! Ignition! ! ! Start the fragrance! ! ! A bow! ! ! Two bows! ! ! Three bows! ! ! After the ceremony, let's see off the guests! ! !

Less pretense and slap-in-the-face routines, there are too many starting points for such routines. It's like slamming the door in front of the leader. Do you have a problem with the leader? A good idea must have a good logical structure, otherwise it will be a piece of writing that will not retain readers.

I came to see biochemistry, not urban business war. You just wrote about urban business war.

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It's hard to read a good book if it's not popular, and I'm afraid that one day the author will become a eunuch because he can't think about it. 😭

This book is well written, but I feel like the author is a bit obsessed with it. In fact, this kind of academic writing with a little bit of cheating can be done normally and pretend to be cool. There is no need to keep thinking about slap-in-the-face plots. It is very good until the drug is taken, but then it becomes very embarrassing and falls into the old-fashioned routine of slap-in-the-face and pretending to be cool. I suggest the author to take a look at the late-stage routines of the reborn god-level academic master, which are all based on style and high-level slinging pretense. There is no need to set up these bloody plots, which are very popular. The protagonist's behavior style is also very problematic. A person over 40 is still a young person who makes decisions and then acts, don't you know? All excuses should be laid out first and introduced later, right? On the other hand, the number of plots has not changed much, but the effect is much worse. For example, contact the United States for authorization. You can write a letter to the protagonist in person and contact that person, and then exchange emails to secretly induce the other person's thinking, and then put forward your advanced views and build a relationship. Go back and pretend to compete with the dean. In this way, not only can I write more chapters, but the image of the protagonist is more comfortable and stable, instead of the dull-headed feeling you are writing now. Finally, book reviews are the opinions of readers, and the author must be selective in what he adopts. Some authors will blindly change their designed outlines (refer to Lao Mo Tong) because of readers' opinions, and then collapse directly. Although they are well-intentioned, they do not have good results. The above is my opinion, and the author can choose to read it.

The novel starts well and has a very professional feel. The first factory plot is very comfortable to read, but then the story about the protagonist almost having an accident at the girlfriend's club and being forced to study in a research institute under the army that is likely to be disbanded becomes very depressing. It could have been started by the instructor.

Anyway, I have recently concentrated my votes on this book. Fellow Taoists who have votes in their hands, please don't waste your fingers and vote for other books. Please take care of the pink and cute newcomers in the near future; Then there is a lot of publicity, it is very important; I hope the results of this book will get better day by day;