Desire Express

Why don't every author describe the characters more realistically when writing, save people, have a sister to save at home, and still care about others? What is in the hearts of ordinary people? Don't write too grandly. Do you dare to say that if you were in trouble and someone else had some responsibility, he would help you so much? It feels so fake. I'm not saying this to mean that your writing is bad, but just to be more realistic? She's a woman and I'm going to help her? Why? ? ? You should also consider your own interests when helping others. Take this book as an example. The company clearly tells you to do things other than delivering express delivery. You have to do it. In reality, will you do it? My brain hurts when I see it╯▂╰! My own sister didn't even do well yet she went to help others. And the heroine, I don't even want to talk about it. Make yourself die (*｀へ´*)! Why blame others? Such a person can become a heroine. Finally, it is best not to have a heroine in a horror novel. Personally, I feel that a heroine is a drag. The heroine is like a fool who spends all day seeking death. Although I am a woman 👩. I feel like the heroines in horror novels are really stupid! Also, don't delete my book review! !

Come on, author! Very well written! Collect it first!

It's good to read, the plot is compact, the subject matter is novel, and the imagination is big enough. Even old bookworms can read it.

The author writes very well! Come on!

This is the first time I see a protagonist with the same name as me...

Seeing the heroine like this. . . . Poison hair! ! !

SeeDon't quite understand/slipit

Chapter 19, I can't hold on anymore. 88

I couldn't bear it after reading Chapter 16, Poison

After reading Chapter 15, I couldn't resist anymore and gave up.

I read 22 chapters in one go. As an ordinary reader, I can see that the rhythm is well grasped and the suspense is quite sufficient; 2: the writing is also above the passing level; 3: the main line development of the characters is relatively clear, starting from the sister's treatment, the overall sense of identity is relatively strong, but due to the need to cut into the side plot, it can be The existence of the protagonist is weakened to a certain extent, and the overall plot is cliched; 4: Regarding the comments section about the heroine, to be fair, if many second-rate heroines with no brains and cool writing can accept it, I think there is nothing unacceptable about such a heroine. Let's just talk about the matter, not to mention how outstanding it is, but at least it can be watched. Five: This book is not a good read. It feels like the type of "I Have a House of Horrors". I have only read Chapter 22 so far. I don't know what the follow-up will be, so I won't comment. However, I saw in the comment area that one after another said that Chapter 19 was abandoned and Chapter 22 was abandoned. These comments feel biased. So make a statement.

I'm speechless when I see an inexplicable female character. You bought a knife and then killed your whole family. I earn you 5 yuan for each express delivery. I have to be responsible for these lives. How does it make sense? This is not the Virgin, this is sick.

The heroine is a bug, right? She bought the Soul Conjuring Banner, used her own blood, and pretended not to know anything, so why did she use her own blood?

The subject matter is novel. Good reviews. But when the plot develops to the heroine, it becomes toxic. The expansion is unreasonable. Love comes out of nowhere. And it is unreasonable to be willing to sacrifice oneself for the heroine. So many died. This is unacceptable. Isn't it too far-fetched? My old PS account was stolen. This is a new account and I am an old bookworm. Accept deletion of comments.