Planting a Divine Tree in the Marvel Universe

Logically speaking, we shouldn't jump out and teach the author how to write a book, but there are some things I want to talk to the author. The text of this book is quite comfortable to read. Although it is not very good to read recently, the author has been quite anxious recently. I am like a certain reader. I am afraid that I will die accidentally because of it. I quickly subscribe to it and post to support it. Feel free to say anything and give me any advice. If you think it's useful, just listen. If it's not, just think of it as fart from me. The author, speaking from experience as someone who has been engaged in writing work, I feel that writing a book is not just about coding whatever comes to mind. Planning the plot is very difficult. When should you write in detail, when should you speed up the pace (because it is not attractive to readers, I don't like to read it); whether the early plot will be used later; the characters should not be too many or too few, and whether the personality of the characters is rich enough to promote the development of the plot... Every character and every plot is written with a purpose. The reader does not know. The author himself must know the purpose of designing this paragraph (seeking pleasure? To be cute? To promote the plot? To set up a foreshadowing?), And reasonably plan the weight in the outline. [Purpose] is really important. Not to talk nonsense, some people have said that the recent plot is not as good as before. I don't know if you are aware of it, author. Let me give you a few chestnuts. 1. Recently, the plots are all about mutants. There are no well-known heroes, and there are a lot of unknown mutants. Marvel text has always been about taking advantage of the east wind to attract attention (sorry for being too blunt). It's thankless for you to do so. Think about what kind of readers you please? There are so many well-known Marvel characters, so good material. In the past, it was very interesting to crush a bunch of future heroes and villains in elementary school, but now, it is a battle of wits and courage with a bunch of rotten background supporting characters, and the teammates are basically passers-by. 2. Register the logos of superheroes such as Spider-Man. This idea is very interesting, because there is a double sense of satisfaction in being in the limelight. But look what you did? The IP is sold to Tony, and the protagonist hangs out with a bunch of copycat versions of Spider-Man, claiming to be extraordinary but being crazy about his personality. The sense of refreshment is greatly reduced and there is no sense of substitution. What is the point of doing this? I know you want to let Tony take the blame, but it's worse than pretending to be a pig to eat the tiger, but actually becoming a pig🐷. 3. Compared with its counterpart, the main body is obviously cuter and more interesting. President Maya is very handsome in everything he does, and he can act cool. Where's the clone? We readers all know that the clones are inferior, and we also know that they are a bunch of low-end copycat versions. The Payne clone is not as powerful as the real Payne Six Paths Nagato and has no powerful skills. The spider clone does not even have a spider sense to spray spider silk and needs peripheral equipment. The One-Punch Man clone is far inferior to Saitama-sensei... So, why does President Maya not describe the main body more from the main perspective?

That's it, I found that I always read the title of the book as "I Transformed into a Hot Dry Noodle and I Want to Be the Overlord". What should I do? ?

Author, you are really scary. I have read Bianwen for so long, and none of them has been updated as much as you.

To be honest, 1.3 Meters is really deformed. . . The biggest failure of this book. . . Maybe the author really doesn't know how short a 1.3 Meter high school student is. It is impossible for a boy to be sexually interested in such a girl. Unless he has a special hobby, he will never show it publicly.

This is definitely a buried work that was brutally cleaned up... If it hadn't been half-sealed, it would definitely be a fine product.

This is one of the best novels written by Marvel that I have ever read, especially the description of the technology of the universe empire. Unlike other novels, it is written that the development of hundreds of thousands of years is almost the same as the development of the earth for thousands of years.

The Thanos part is really discouraging. After finally escaping from the hands of the Kree, he fell into the hands of Thanos. You are not suppressing your desire to advance. Totally abusive. Your book is really not that exciting. . It feels like a Marvel novel that is selling itself off as a sheep, and it is Marvel's skin. Everything inside is homemade

I have read a lot of good new books, but there is a danger of collapse after more than 1,000 chapters. The author is very good. This book has not had such signs so far. I give the author a thumbs up.

The writing of this book is still good, I think it surpasses most of the starting point novels. But the poison is too poisonous, I can't stand it. For example, for example, the protagonist's parents, one is an alcoholic, a domestic abuser, a gangster and commits crime, and the other brings a different man home every day. In the end, her father was imprisoned, and her mother was ready to abandon her 3-year-old daughter and run away. In order to avoid being sent to a foster home, the protagonist took the real estate given by her father to keep her mother. These are nothing. At most, the protagonist's native environment is poor. The problem is that later on, the protagonist actually started playing "parental love" with his parents. What is family love? Family affection means thinking about and doing the best for your loved ones. But what about the protagonist's parents? Her father, Xidu, was violent. Did he not know that it would affect his newborn daughter? Her father went to rob, but he didn't know that he might die or be caught, and that his daughter would become an orphan? He knows, but he doesn't care at all. Her mother was ready to run away after her father went in. Didn't she know that her 3-year-old daughter was incapable of living? Her daughter is 3 years old, and she brings different men back to spend the night every day. Doesn't she know how dangerous this is to her daughter? She knows, but she doesn't care at all. As ordinary people at the bottom, they have real access to countless darkness, but do they care at all whether their newborn daughter will be drowned by this darkness? To be honest, if this daughter did not have an adult soul in her body, what kind of experience would she have? The follow-up is that the protagonist found a stepfather for her mother for safety reasons, and then they gave birth to a younger brother. And what about the plot after that? As a primary school student, the protagonist wants to go to a better school, but her mother refuses because the cost is too high. And when she said she had a scholarship, her mother's first reaction was to use the money to buy herself a car. Later, the protagonist just graduated from elementary school, and her mother directly took out a loan in her name in order to buy a house. There is no need to worry about the risk of not being able to repay the loan. According to the author's opinion, money is not important, only the life of the family is important. Readers know that the protagonist is not short of money, but in the plot, in the eyes of her family, her daughter is just a primary school graduate, or at most a well-known and outstanding primary school student. I know what the author is thinking, that is, family relationships need to be managed. But the problem is that the readers are all normal Chinese. Not to mention 100%, at least 80% of Chinese parents are dedicated to their children. Most people born in the 1980s and 1990s have this experience. There are good dishes at home, but they are reluctant to eat them, so they give them to their children. Even those born in the 80s and 90s, how many people quit smoking and drinking after their children were born? People who are married and have children in the workplace are often more likely to be CPUed than single people. Even if they are scolded and suppressed, they dare not resign, just because they have to raise children. Of course there are those who don't care about their children. But the problem is, those are all "villains". What everyone hopes is that they will be taught a lesson. Instead of being able to lie on your children and suck their blood without restraint. But according to the trend of this book, the protagonist will definitely get it in the follow-up, and the people around him will ascend to heaven. As the protagonist's parents, they will definitely get the greatest benefits. And the protagonist's half-brother might be the heir to the protagonist's property. The protagonist's achievements will inevitably be very high, and his realm will also be very high. But as a reader, when I see this kind of plot, I really feel confused.

Uncle Tun is the only one of the gods who often rushes to the streets; every time I meet him at the villain's resurrection point, he always holds a plate of broad beans and eats them slowly. At this time, someone always asked him, "I heard that you are one of the five gods of the universe, is it true?" Uncle Tun looked at the person who asked him, showing a look of disdain; they then said, "I saw you going to the earth to steal chickens, and being caught by Richard, you were hanged to death." Uncle Tun's face turned gloomy, and he said, can a day be counted as a day after being killed by an earthling? What about the complete form, what about being downgraded, and what about killing at first sight, which made people confused at first, and the resurrection point was filled with a happy atmosphere.