The Legend of Jianlan

After reading Chapter 160, some of them are really unpleasant 1. The plot advances extremely slowly. You can say that the author's descriptions are detailed and the rhetoric is on point, but what I see is more meaningless repetition. 2. Some readers said earlier that the head of the Qingyang Sect has a very bad character. The author said there is a foreshadowing, which will be explained later. OK, the secret was revealed in Chapter 160, but I only saw that Qingyang Sect is a bunch of local chickens and dogs from top to bottom. They claim to be for the sake of the sect, but secretly they are just their own bastards. The question is that the so-called "for the sake of the sect" is still mentioned repeatedly in the plot dialogue, are the readers treated as fools? Did you write Qingyangzi as a fool? Can such a leader lead the sect well? Is this the second largest sect in the world? The advantages of this book are nothing more than good writing, ambiguous women, and a semi-invincible protagonist. World pattern? The protagonist's character changes? The heroine's change of heart towards the hero? Basically not. Forget it, let's just make do with it. For me, it's somewhere between food and grass. I can read it. I hope this book can keep me going for another hundred chapters.

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It's well written and the author is very attentive.

The plot moves too slowly, and it feels a little too repetitive to write about one thing over and over again. . . However, this book is really good. I personally think it would be great if it could be made into a TV series.

This book is not popular, which is normal, and its flaws do not cover up its flaws. The pace is too slow. It describes one thing over and over again in more than ten chapters without seeing the advancement of the plot. This arrangement of the online novel is really unpleasant. Furthermore, the didactic meaning of this book is too strong. I understand that the author wants to express some philosophy and understanding of immortality or life, but it should be stopped at the end. The long description is too short of a word count and is too revealing, which is not beautiful. The author may have misunderstood women. The female characters described are not likeable, either willful or paranoid. The bright supporting male characters forcefully conflict with the protagonist. It is natural for men to be lustful and for women to be strong, but their inexplicable affection is difficult to resonate with readers. Finally, the word "genius" appears too frequently. As an ordinary person, I do feel a little disgusted with it. Of course, this book is placed in the Qidian. Com online writing group, and the writing style is inferior to that of novices. However, there are very few online reading readers who value writing style. If the author refines the plot and speeds up the pace, it is not impossible to become a god. It can be seen that the author is very careful. This is indeed a good book. I hope the author will work hard.

It's not about fairy tales, it's about martial arts, or the kind of traditional martial arts that are full of intrigues, fights for fame and wealth, and the characters behave strangely.

It was too easy to destroy Kunlun. . . The first sect of cultivating immortals was destroyed without any explanation. . .

The competition is over, and the author of the finals suddenly burst into flames, and it was a lot of excitement without interruption, haha. It feels like everyone is the "protagonist", like a group novel. It feels like a new prosperous age is coming. Expect them all to rush out. To gain some weight, I wonder if the editor-in-chief would recommend it 😳

It's well written, but the plot progress is too slow.

Come on, the writing is very detailed and contains unusual thoughts and principles.

What's the use of losing something without even trying to find it back, but rushing to sacrifice one's cultivation to atone for one's sins? It just caused Kunlun to suffer greater losses, and it didn't help anything!

So watery? Thirty or forty chapters can be written on one stone, and everyone is jumping to read them.

This introduction means that the author's brain thinking is different from that of normal people.

That ( '▿ ' ) I read the author's book, I really like it (•̀⌄•́) Can I... Emmm, please give me your contact information, or a fan group~•ᴗ• I'll give you a review♡ヾ(●´∇｀●)ﾉ

Well⊙∀⊙! I don't know how to put it, but it's pretty cool.

It looks good, good luck to the author, the story is very good. Judging from ten years of reading experience, the writing style of the chapters written by the author in 18 years is not very sophisticated, it is still a little worse, and I haven't read it yet. But even so, the plot is still very attractive to me, "I love reading, and I don't ask for a deep understanding. Whenever I understand something, I happily forget to eat."😄

Author, if you write about the protagonist taking the blame and destroying himself, why not write about an immortal master from the Kunlun sect who was so angry at the protagonist that he destroyed the protagonist's Dao roots and drove him down the mountain. In fact, it was Li Yuanmu who passed the responsibility to the protagonist, hoping to use it to become the Taoist master and possess Wei Xiaoxiao. Wei Xiaoxiao and the protagonist are childhood sweethearts, and Li Yuanmu also likes Wei Xiaoxiao. Wouldn't the plot be more intense this way?

Water, water, water! ! ! ! ! Is it necessary to be so watery? My head hurt when I read it. It was just as useless as your mother's eight-part essay. It was also called foreshadowing. I could write two chapters just by drinking tea. I vomited.

Every character is outstanding, the author works hard and has accumulated a lot of experience.

Someone was also sent to notify Gu Chen that he didn't know if he would be disturbed at the critical moment.

It's beautiful, but this book shouldn't be popular.

Come on, author! ! ! Don't let it suck!