Start with a Natural Tooth

The description feels so stiff and awkward, which is a bit similar to what I wrote.

As a bookworm who has read novels for ten years, I said I didn't understand 😅

Regarding the evil in this world, there is a book that I think is good. Angola is a living person in a small village. His soul was sealed in a book by Lord Chong to make a false holy relic, used to deceive Einzbern, and he was summoned as a human soul and heroic spirit. The mechanism of the Holy Grail is that the first human soul to enter makes a wish, and Angora, who entered the Holy Grail after being killed, is naturally the first to make a wish. His wish is to use his body to carry the evil in this world. However, he is a human being, not a heroic spirit, and will not return to the Heroic Soul Seat. His soul will always be stuck in the Holy Grail. The gathered evil thoughts will naturally dye the non-attributed magic power of the Holy Grail into evil attributes.

I had sex with 6 and 5 stars for free last night and even brought a Valkyrie with me.

This book is readable, but there is too much nonsense. There are not many words in each chapter and there are repetitive explanations and the same things are mentioned over and over again.

Come on, author, write the story in your heart. Just keep the current rhythm. It would be better if the updates are faster and more frequent.

Let's talk about the problems in the book, which is that the dialogue is very awkward and not the way normal people speak. Different people with different personalities should say different things, some are arrogant and some are funny, but what the author wrote is exactly the same person talking to himself under different skins. The characters in the original work were "distorted" because of this, and I hope the author can improve it.

At this speed, I almost want to give up.

Everyone here, I'm going to finish up Fullmetal Alchemist first, and then I'll look at

Come on (ಡωಡ)hiahiahia, as long as you update, I will give you the tickets every day, Although there is only one

The setting of the Tensei Ya at the beginning is very strange. The Tensei Ya has never been a knife with a healing effect. It's just that in Inuyasha's world, those who bring souls to hell are some very weak imps, and the souls of these imps who have just died cannot contact or see things in the human world. The natural tooth can allow the owner to see, hurt or even kill them, so it is considered a healing knife. In fact, it should be a knife from the underworld.

It's pretty good-looking. If it were my wife, she would look even better.

I don't really like money-spreading boys. He keeps traveling through the world and teaches all the good things he acquires to the people around him. Japan in the world of Lost Knights has never invaded China, so it is natural for them to share their martial arts with Japan to enhance Japan's national power. Although it is just a novel, if you like Japan, you will like it! I also like some Japanese culture. But there is no need to mention the war of resistance. In Demon Slayer World, they were worried about sharing good things, causing Japan to invade China after it strengthened. But in Land Knight Tan, I felt it didn't matter. Both time and place. To sum up, there are two uncomfortable points. One is that he is a money-splitting boy, but his attitude is awkward. Isn't it necessary to feel good when reading a good article? However, after reading this article, all I felt was awkwardness.

Tian Tian Ya has no healing ability, no healing ability, no healing ability! Let me say the important thing three times, Tian Tian Ya can kill the messenger from the other world! And the same person can only be killed once, and the person who is rescued needs to take care of his own injuries! Tian Tian Ya! Can't cure diseases! Can't cure diseases! Can't cure diseases!

I said who are the people in this circle of book friends? I saw the one who listed three poisonous points before and I couldn't figure it out. I won't mention the last one about licking a girl because I haven't started reading it yet. How come the first two confiscating girls have become poisonous points again? Are there any weird things in the two-dimensional circle, such as studs, harems, single heroines, and no heroines? There are some well-written stories that just have no heroine and are called poisonous. You have the ability to take advantage of the lack of a heroine and go to the Samsara Paradise to force you to say that you will not be sprayed to death 🤫🤫🤫. Everyone has their own preferences for radish and green vegetables. Regardless of whether there is a harem or no heroine, they all have the same style. There is no distinction between superior and inferior. Is it interesting to keep staring at this? If you don't like it, just change it. It'll make you feel bitter and angry.

The Fallen Knight Hero Story is very inappropriate as the main world in Japanese comics, because China exists in the Fallen Knight Hero Story, and the protagonist has a Chinese spirit but is Japanese. Being stronger and teaching the breathing method also increases the military strength of Japan, which in disguise puts pressure on the China next door, and a world war is about to break out. If it is an ordinary day Manga fans, can you make money by picking up girls? You can live a comfortable life, but there are also Chinese who are highly skilled in martial arts. A world war is about to break out, which will strengthen Japan's military strength. Hey, Japanese comics in the main world are best written by non-Chinese people, such as Naruto, One Piece, etc. At least they can stabilize the audience in terms of national sentiments. The writing is good but it is very embarrassing to watch. If the author wants to change it, give the author a suggestion and write a Sino-Japanese conflict. Then he imitated Nezha and cut off his flesh to return to his father. Shave and return to your mother, return all this Japanese skin to you, commit suicide to end your life, wrap your soul with the Philosopher's Stone at the moment of death to prevent it from dissipating, and then use the power of the knife to evolve the body in the form of the soul, because the protagonist himself is the soul that has traveled through China and has evolved into a body. , Naturally it is the Chinese body, the appearance of the previous life is perfectly resurrected, the Chinese soul is in the Chinese body, the protagonist can be regarded as possessing the body after traveling through time, and there are always irreparable loopholes in the fit between the body and the soul, which invisibly limits the huge potential of the protagonist. This time, the soul evolves into the body. The perfect fit between the soul and the body allows the protagonist's potential to explode, his strength to a higher level, and his potential to be unlimited. Then the author can write whatever he wants without fear of emotional embarrassment.

My God, look at what the author wrote, it's like a running account, I seem to have seen a middle school composition, oh! What a disappointment!

To be honest, I don't really like night raids and the like. Relying on assassinations to make revolution is very funny. The male protagonist in the original novel is so miserable. It has a lot to do with the fact that the night raiders defrauded him of his money. I don't like the male protagonist in the original novel either. Their own village has been forgotten.

This kind of sister should be spanked! If you keep putting up with your sister, she will think you are easy to bully! She doesn't have you as a brother in her eyes, so why do you have to be mean?

Shi Chen has clearly accomplished everything his father, a magician, has given him, yet when he is scolded, he can only say that being honest is unlucky 😟

Hashirama's strength... Even if only a small half is left in Zanchi, he is still running wild 🤭 In other words, the Senju clan did not exterminate the clan but took the initiative to integrate into the residents of Konoha. Itachi Jinzhen mentioned that many people are working as teachers, and Boruto Zhen's Moehuang awakened Wood Release.

The plot is actually quite good, but the details are poorly described. The character descriptions are hollow and devoid of emotion. It's like a doll, like its destiny has been arranged long ago, and it just needs to be used up.

I am completely writing a robot, without emotions or thoughts. It is as if someone has set a complete program and completes it like a machine.

This whole article has no positioning meaning of its own. The protagonist has no clear idea of ​​what he is going to do from the beginning to the end. Do you know the money-spreading boys in various worlds? Saving people everywhere? Will those worlds be destroyed without you? Without even having a core definition of oneself, traveling through the heavens is just time traveling? Firstly, I don't want to be the throne of heaven, and secondly, I don't want to be carefree and do whatever I want. I don't even understand what the protagonist wants to do? Give up, give up

I don't think there's anything poisonous about my sister. Anyway, there are only a few scenes. In order to satisfy the protagonist's bad taste for the girl-control character, I gave her a Teigu that the protagonist didn't need and left her to be trained by others. As for killing the enemy girl, is there anything poisonous about it? Is it possible that we still want to have a deep love and fight to the death and rejoice in the reunion of enemies? Giving away a daughter? Tohsaka Rinma Kiri Sakura is still a child! For those who attack children, I respect you as a national bronze magician and you will go to jail. If you are dissatisfied with the single female protagonist, first convince the author of the single female protagonist on the ranking list to change the harem.

The more I watch, the less I can stand it. The protagonist is simply a holy nanny, paving the way for the original protagonist. The more I watch, the more unhappy I become. Personally, I think we can take Kurogane Kazuhiro out of the book, and add a golden finger to the original protagonist Kuroyukitsu Ikki to allow him to travel through time, and just pause the time of the main world during the journey. Otherwise, it would be really embarrassing for me to watch. The protagonist works hard in various time travels, returns to the main world, turns around, and gives the fruits of his struggle to the original protagonist. He doesn't want anything, and he doesn't want girls with power, money, etc., He just wants to waste it.

Tool protagonist? The dog-licking protagonist who speaks unpleasantly

No, even if there is no heroine, you still have to get out of the car. You don't even drive the car. I doubt whether the protagonist is a man. It's not that I want a heroine. It's because the protagonist, as a man, doesn't even drive a car. And I saw that the butler in the character sheet is actually a man. Alas. The image of the male protagonist is really too thin.

This book has three major poisonous points. First, the protagonists of the original book have a harem, but the protagonist Yifeng actually doesn't have a girlfriend! You said this is the protagonist? There is no distinction between priority and priority, and the guest takes over! Second, kill Esdeath's sister and give him your own sister. To be honest, what else can you gain besides gaining power through time travel? What is the protagonist pursuing? Only power? So what's the point of not cultivating immortality? Since you don't like women and want power, then practice Taishang Wangqing or Dream Breaking Sword Technique! Anyway, you just want power. Thirdly, the protagonist actually licks his sister! My sister is even licking you even if she draws a knife on you! Is the protagonist flirting? Does it feel good to be scolded or beaten by your sister? Don't forget that you can't lick a dog in the house! People treat you like this, but you actually put your cold face on your hot butt!

Why does it feel like it's written like a narrative 😴