The Warring States Period of the Public

I would like to make some suggestions. If what I said is wrong, I would also like to ask Haihan. The content of this book is too niche. People who do not understand this stage of Japanese history are difficult to read, so the results are not good, which is normal. Secondly, the writing is a bit boring. Content, I feel it is not interesting enough. Thirdly, I don't have a clear sense of the protagonist's expansion of territory. Can you put a map of Japan's Warring States Period in front of the text, and then post a schematic map after each major chapter, or after chapters where the protagonist's territory changes significantly? I think it would be much better.

The writing style is okay, but the realism is much worse, especially the description of some details.

After reading about twenty chapters, if there was no time travel, it is completely understandable for a native descendant of a public family to feel so comfortable. But it is really incomprehensible for a young man who was more than 20 years old to travel back to the Warring States period, where wars were raging, to be so comfortable.

Personally, I prefer the selling point of Genji's reincarnation (although I don't like Genji's romance, but I am quite fond of his charm. I can still remember the fact that General Touma was in love with Genji's back at the banquet that day). The author's writing style and history are above the standard, and although the pace is slow, it is not lacking in interesting things, so it can be regarded as a novel that can be followed. The most obvious poisonous point at present is the protagonist's extraordinary strength. The recent chapters have been a bit groundbreaking. The speed of updates may be considered a shortcoming in the Qidian article. However, this book is just right for slower reading speeds.

It's rare to see a new work, so I'm ready to take a good look at it.

Even if you are seriously ill, what are you doing here?

Everything started out well, but it was really amazing to insist on marrying Hojo. . If you don't wait for the long tail, you will lose one enemy. . I don't want to write it anymore, it's anticlimactic. .

The author has done a good job with the basic information, but the opening chapter is really too poisonous. A three-year-old boy is pointing out the world, and a seven-year-old is slashing people with a knife. It would be much better if the age is changed to seven or eight years old. I can persist in reading because I feel that the author still has potential. Novices always need to practice their writing to make progress. Speaking of which, Hojo's energy in Kanto during the Tenbun era was mainly focused on Bosou. After all, the deputy commander-in-chief of Kanto, Satomi, still danced happily. The real Hojo clan's success in Shimono Haruka was in the Tensho era, so the protagonist seems to have room for obscene development. However, the many psoriasis wealthy families in Kanto that the fifth generation of the Hojo clan barely managed to deal with are not so easy to deal with. Let me see how the author can reasonably write countermeasures. This is the biggest highlight of this article.

The walled city was surrounded like that, and they went to the battlefield just because of the request of a small retainer of the other side? The 700,000-koku daimyo is so willing to risk his life? Reduced to fighting for Oda? What if it hangs up? What to do with the retainers, wives and daughters? Forcibly lowering intelligence?

That's it

The book is okay, the writing skills, writing style, and description are all good. Historical skills are also good. The historical fact assessment is okay. The flaws are too trivial and the protagonist's age bug. Also, a senior writer who wrote about the Warring States Period also read the author's book and thought it was pretty good. (I was recommended here) The plot advancement is a little too confusing The protagonist's character is too confusing One The plot is too inappropriate for a young age (the concept of two years old is really too low) The history is good, but he has no idea how to hang out with the Sugi family. Mi Chong is not good as a character either Two The character cannot develop his own creation (such as the Kuroda Rebellion, the guard general who was begged for it) It can be completely written after he narrowly escaped death Reborn and able to be used, and the reason why he died was because the protagonist was a two-year-old kid who wanted to die. The logic of the book is still okay. You can also write a similar Warring States book. Finally. Open a new book! If you don't want to lose your character, let me know!

The 700,000 daimyo are probably stronger than Oda. He has to personally go into battle to help Oda fight. Well, the idea is curious, and winning seems to be not beneficial to his own development, but rather hindering his development.

I hope it can be released soon. I have read so many Warring States Periods, most of which are from Heigen. Only Date and this one are from Fujiwara.

Some people say that it's ridiculous that the protagonist didn't work hard when he traveled to the Warring States Period. I think the protagonist is indeed quite stupid, but not ridiculous. Isn't it true that in modern society, you and I are fighting over each other? However, how many people are really working hard to make progress? Who doesn't know that if you work hard, you can get into a good university and have a good future? However, how many can truly endure hardship? So I don't think the protagonist is ridiculous, at least I don't think I am qualified to laugh. There is no golden finger, no system, do you think you can make progress by traveling through time? I think it's the same as junior high school looking forward to high school, freshman year in high school looking forward to sophomore year in high school, and sophomore year in high school looking forward to senior year in senior high school.

It's really stupid. For the protagonist, this is a meaningless battle. He insists on being Nobunaga's licking dog.

What the hell, in the end, I found out that this is a fake corpse

I saw that the protagonist didn't use a gun several times, and the knife was too light to exert its power. It was better to use a heavy knife like a mace. Anyway, it doesn't matter if someone usually carries it. Ability to use one's own magical powers during combat.

Is this a complete outline? When will the new book be uploaded?

Damn eunuch! Don't keep your words!

It's a eunuch. Just when I thought I could take a look, it turned out to be a eunuch.

Regardless of whether Hojo Soun's background was made up or not, brother, if your butt is crooked, why don't you ask the Kasugayama leader behind you to succeed Hojo? Moreover, Hojo attacked the Ogitani Uesugi clan and destroyed the Kanto governor family. As a result, his rule of law was seriously insufficient. It was simply difficult to move forward in Kanbazhou, a place where superiority and inferiority were extremely important. Otherwise, Hojo would not have been able to implement the system of four public officials and six citizens to win over the lower-class landowners and farmers, and thus had a 20-year rule with the wealthy Chinese families who relied on Uesugi Kenshin. If it really occupies Odawara Hojo, the Miao character must not be retained. It must be changed into some other big stone, soil, or Fujita. The protagonist's identity (official background, endorsement by the leader) can completely inherit the title of Lord Furukawa and become the Kanto shogun. In this case, there will be a basis for rule, and it will not offend Uesugi Kenshin, and Koyomi Yorijun will definitely not dare to fart. I don't need to tell you whether your surname is Ashikaga Awesome or Hojo Awesome.

Naomasa Ii is actually the illegitimate son of the protagonist, the woman who ran away after a one-night stand. . .

It's quite an interesting idea. In the end, there was no opening of the Heike shogunate; there was no attempt to follow the Hojo family's traditional route of power-taking and Rokupora's exploration of the subject. Instead, it ended up returning to the politics of the Fujiwara family, Taira Kiyomori, and Toyotomi Hideyoshi. It also combines the public martial arts of Taira Kiyomori and Monkey, and he is worthy of being born in the Fujiwara family 😂

Long live! 😰😰😰The book that has been at the bottom of the bookshelf has been updated?

There aren't many historical novels like this where the lord slowly rises...:-( It's a pity that so few people read it

The main character was the bad guy, he killed several people who wouldn't have died in the first place.

Is this family crest made by the author himself or does it exist from history?

It's still very suitable. The Tale of Genji

From the death of his concubine to his refusal to marry, it seems that the protagonist is about to break up with the God of War.

I suddenly saw this novel today, and it felt good... Because I only read a little bit of it. By the way, has the Shijo family appeared in the author? Because I recently watched "Miss Kaguya", I followed the clues and found the Shijo family in history. I felt very interested... (Manually laugh and cry)