Free Monk in the World of Mortals

You persuaded him to quit in the first chapter of the game, just because you provoked an enemy during the debt repayment stage that you can't possibly defeat at this stage. My first reaction was that I didn't even think about running away. I didn't know what the protagonist was thinking. He waited for others to come to the door and then beat the younger one and then the older one. I feel like my brain is going to grow

The setting and writing are good (✪▽✪), but the protagonist is stupid

It has nothing to do with mortals. The author just messed around and wanted to see fellow mortals run fast.

The contract is about to be signed. I hope readers will invest more 😊

You can't stand it if you watch it with your brain

It's not well written, very bad, it doesn't even have logic.

I hope the author can sign a contract for this book and continue it😆😆

This novel looks a bit like a novel with the same text as "A Mortal's Cultivation of Immortality", and it also seems a bit like plagiarizing the plot and characters of "A Mortal's Cultivation of Immortality". This novel looks a bit messy and not interesting.

Why do you feel there is not much difference between your Qi training period and Foundation building period? Did you write it wrong?

Starting from this book, only the protagonist's specific character, outlook, and behavior have been set. But as I write, more character ideas emerge. The three elements of a novel are time, place and characters. Without good characters, the novel is tasteless. If you have any opinions about the characters, please leave a comment😁😁

Readers follow Ouyang into the bizarre world of immortality. Characters that constantly appear and plots that continue to intertwine constitute one story after another. This post mainly summarizes the story line of the book.