Global Xenogeneic

Thank you for your support. Newbies are not very good at dividing it into paragraphs. Now I am revising it chapter by chapter. Thank you for your support! Friends who like it can invest in this book, which will allow them to see more light!

The writing is pretty good, good luck to the author.

Author, please separate paragraphs and sentence fragments well. I read one chapter and it was a mess! Obsessive-compulsive disorder can't be seen! ! ! Resigning, I wish your book will be a hit in 2019! ! !

I can't stand it anymore, typos, not smooth. The realm is confusing (you may miss it due to the speed of reading), but the idea is good, the author should read this chapter more. If you change the beginning and so on again (or forget about major changes) and follow the suggestions in this chapter, I believe there will be no fewer clicks. I was dissuaded. ╮(╯▽╰)╭It's a bit sad to watch (including the atmosphere mentioned in this chapter).

What the hell is it to persuade someone to quit in the first chapter? After reading the first chapter, I don't want to read anymore. Forget about breaking up with my girlfriend, why don't I have a spare tire and then be reborn? In the end, why don't I bully the young man into being poor? ? ? The protagonist's tone doesn't sound like an adult either. This was a novel from a few years ago.

Happy New Year to everyone in 2019! All the best in the new year! Thank you all for your support!

Newbies are not very good at dividing paragraphs into paragraphs. Now I am revising it chapter by chapter. Thank you for your support!

Failure, what system should be added? ?

Thank you everyone for your support and collection!

Looking at the table of contents, it has already reached 150 chapters, but the typos and misspellings in the first few chapters have not been corrected. Such frequent typos are of no use no matter how good the story is. It is almost three chapters to persuade me to quit.

The overall idea is still okay, the ability to revive like spiritual energy, and choose Sun Wukong is also a G-point, but the writing skills are too bad... The beginning is terrible, the protagonist has a bad mouth, is suspected of being a middle-aged child... And the intelligent system is terrible. More importantly, the layout of the paragraphs is too poor, which affects the experience... I personally don't like this type of article...

😁Well written!

The protagonist's power is not his own power, but something similar to energy. Otherwise, how could he have to rest for an hour while punching with all his strength?