We Are All Capable

Um, I read your book. To be honest, the writing is okay, but the quality is average. First of all, I read more than a dozen chapters, but the motivation to keep reading was very small, which means that the beginning was not exciting enough. Your start is too bland. I'm not the author and I can't give you specific advice on this. You can only figure it out on your own. But the biggest problem with your book is that the power system is too confusing. You set up the idea that everyone can choose the abilities they want at will, which is a good idea, but do you really have the ability to control such a huge worldview? There are a lot of abnormal abilities such as ability elimination, ability copying, speaking spirit, curse killing, and even some abnormal GM rights, VIP privileges, etc. Although you can weaken them all in the early stage, have you figured out how to deal with these abnormal abilities and ordinary abilities in the later stage? Secondly, the protagonist's ability is too buggy. It is absolutely unreasonable for the protagonist to solve a boss that cannot be beaten by an A-level superpower, or a boss that is close to S-level. Don't say that A-level superpowers are agile. There is such a big level gap between the two sides, so this situation shouldn't happen. From the perspective of the rationality of the power system, the cutting power of the protagonist's ability should increase with the improvement of the ability, so that it will not be easy for you to make mistakes in the later stage.

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