My 108 Heavenly Dao Manuals

The pace is too slow... The development of the protagonist Goldfinger is too slow... Too hidden... The protagonist's self-control is too poor... There is no big poisonous point... This is a book that can be read

I got addicted and couldn't stand it. I originally thought it was about martial arts upgrading to fairy tales, but I couldn't stand it. It was a mess. It felt like martial arts plus fantasy. The protagonist had a split personality and the writing style was split. It felt like when I was in school and writing essays. I took half of each of the three essays and mixed them together. Sometimes I was rigorous, sometimes I was funny, sometimes I was a noob, and sometimes my imagination was wide open. This author is in a bottleneck period, and he is in a state of obsession. He sits quietly and watches the crazy god.

The first 5 chapters are quite interesting to watch.

The creativity is good, the writing is terrible, and the plot is cheating. Farewell!

The author's writing style and characterization are okay, but the pace and plot are too slow. I thought it was a cool novel when I read the introduction, but it turned out to be a reverse cheat. The gap is huge. If it was low-level martial arts, it would be okay, but this is obviously a fantasy novel. Many years ago, there was no such novel with 200 chapters of body training, 200 chapters of foundation building, and 100 chapters of ascending to immortality. The protagonist in this novel has no abilities at all, and the reverse golden finger is unreliable. I haven't finished the first level of a cheat code after dozens of chapters. You still have 1 What to do with the 17 cheats? The power level of fantasy novels is high. The protagonist should be more careful in the early stage. It is not the kind of story that relies on the halo of the protagonist to force the plot, and then comes into contact with the secrets of heaven and earth by various coincidences. The early plot is scattered and watery, and most of them cannot hold it in the later stage. Personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it

To put it bluntly, the author should change his job, I'm afraid you will starve...

It is indeed a good book and very comfortable to read 👍👍

The protagonist's golden finger is very special and has the following characteristics. 1. Secrets of Heavenly Way, powerful and great martial arts secrets. 2. [Emphasis added] Every time you awaken from the Heavenly Dao secret book, you can obtain Heavenly Dao energy. What does it do? It just allows the protagonist to be a real man for a second! It is equivalent to allowing the protagonist to experience the power of full level once! After using it, it will return to level zero and you have to slowly upgrade again! Attention, it's a one-time real man! It changes back after using it! 3. The protagonist cannot absorb spiritual energy, but if others use spiritual energy moves, he can get the products of spiritual energy decomposition next to him and upgrade! 4. For various miraculous effects of home travel, including detoxification, dizziness, and hallucinations, please refer to various magical secret treasure golden fingers in other books. To be added;

Recently, the story about getting the wrong jade pendant has been getting more and more difficult, and I suddenly lost my mind? Why didn't you ask immediately when you saw that you were not a guest? Why did you use the description of how you shamelessly wanted to be a guest? When you found out that you had taken the wrong jade pendant, you didn't go back and explain it immediately. How many words did it take? Where's your brain? And now Xu Qingqing starts to think about it again???? The character's IQ at the beginning is quite online, but it's gone after writing it?

The most unbearable novel plot is that the first male protagonist always attracts enemies for no apparent reason, the second male protagonist falls in love with the protagonist's woman for no reason, and the third is unruly and willful and enjoys bullying the male protagonist, but the male protagonist also dotes on the princess sick loli sister. The above routine is extremely poisonous. I don't know if it is included in this article. If you have read it, please tell me! Thank you everyone!