Incense Refining on the Divine Path

Don't your conscience hurt from those favorable comments? Still looking smooth? The writing is good? The logic is stilted and the writing is childish. How can this be so smooth? What books do these people usually read? Are you used to suffering?

After reading a few chapters, I felt that this book was really good, and I was looking forward to the subsequent plot more and more.

The logic at the beginning is problematic and has loopholes. The third golden chapter is not very well written. For example, the original owner had a high fever for more than ten days and died, but was taken away by the protagonist. And then it turned out so good, you seem to be kidding me? You just say in this chapter that there is a benevolentbrother who said well that the body is a ship and the soul is a person. If the boat leaks, can people still get in?          Don't bullshit me, just write it if you have the ability. What I want to say is that I really can't write. But I still have the most basic vision. I can also see the logic, loopholes and writing style of a book. Good is good, bad is bad. I'm too lazy to tell you, those vain people. Also, if you guys reply to me below. I won't reply because I basically don't read messages. Because I think I am just expressing my feelings about reading the book. If someone doesn't agree, I won't put a knife to his neck to force him to agree. So, even if you scold me, I can't see it. Even if I see it, I won't pay attention.

The writing is very different, it's really white, and it feels awkward to read the whole article. God does not have the majesty of God, Tao does not have the detachment of Tao, and Confucianism does not have the elegance of Confucianism. What is God, what is Tao, and what is Confucianism? Just write randomly without any common sense

What's not good about writing, writing poems about fighting with others? Oh, even if you write wonderfully, it turns out that people can write poems in seven steps. You are so good, you can write seven poems in seven steps, you are awesome.

I don't know how he can tell from his eyes that the old man has thoughts about his sister. The protagonist is a grade 18 professional in psychology and micro-expression. He is a professional actor and pretends to be a good person all his life. This is your first time meeting here. You can tell at a glance that he is not a good person. You can even see his thoughts. He can distinguish greed, lust and other thoughts. It is really awesome.

There is no logical thinking at all, and the outline is a mess. How to write later, it is either a mess or a eunuch.

I just want to ask you if this Haoran Zhengqi can only defeat gods and is useless to Taoist priests?

There are a lot of Shinto books that are unfinished, or they are being sold as dog meat. I don't know if the author can persist.

A group of Yin soldiers have to adapt to deserts, forests, blizzards, thunderstorms and other environments to fight... I'm afraid they didn't wake up.